Very interesting beginning.

More please!

Thanks. And definitely more to come. ;-)

Intriguing... A mysterious father...
I'd so love to read more. :)
Congrats!

Thanks. More is on the way.

Interesting so far.

Hopefully, it won't be long in showing up

Awesome.
I think this is the first Valiant crossover I've ever seen.
I can only hope it is the Harbinger of things to come.

(sorry, that pun was pretty bad, even by my standards.)

Yes, it is (to the best of my knowledge), and yes, that was. ;-)

Thanks for reviewing.

Um, yeah? And I'll be waiting for that explanation!!

Well, once you realize who Gil is, you'll see why he can do what he did.

This is one I'd love to see continued.

Not to worry, it will be. ;-)

I am niot familiar with who this character Gil is or what he is from.

Information on the Eternal Warrior can be found here:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Eternal_Warrior

And he's AWESOME!!!

excellent

Thanks.

HOLY SHIT!

VALIANT LIVES!

Wait...which Valiant version of Gilad are we talking about? The original Valiant version or the crappy "retreaded" version that Acclaim took over and ruined?

If it's the original Valiant (Jim Shooter era)...AWESOME!

Hmm...does this mean we'll see Aric Dacia from that 'verse showing up?

Jack Boniface?

Or...Alexandre Darque...oh shit...that would be an ugly big bad!

Sting and the renegade Harbinger crew?

Or....oh crap...Harada and his "Egg-Breakers".


Okay...I'll shut up now!

It's been years since I read any of the Eternal Warrior's stories, but when my muse suggested him as Xander's father, I simply *had* to agree. And this is the one from the Shooter era, of course. ;-)

And since this is a merge universe (with whoever else my muse might want to throw into the mix, I currently have no idea who else might be showing up. I will say that, generally, no universe the Scoobies inhabit is completely canon, so whoever shows up (hero or villain) is almost certainly going to be skewed from their comic presentation in one way or another. ;-)

Very interesting beginning!

Thanks. There's a lot more to come.

♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪

Thanks. I appreciate your commenting.

The problem with these little snippets you're posting buddy, is that they seem to be little more than teasers for a future story. I have no idea who this Gil character is, and honestly don't feel the need to google him either.

The writing, as always, is excellent, but, why should we give a damn about this character claiming to be Xander's father?

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Well, they are essentially snippets or teasers for future stories, doe mainly for the Fic-A-Thon, to see if I can manage to post something interesting everyday.

This one definitely has more to come, and hopefully, in the next chapter I'll be able to provide you with reasons to be at least slightly interested in Gil.