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Review of chapter "Bugger Off, I’m Going Home" from Hecatonchires
Review:
I enjoyed this. Looking forward to the sequel :)
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [25 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bugger Off, I’m Going Home" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
As bad an ending as canon. In the end there is no real ending just a delay before it all starts up again.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [11 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bugger Off, I’m Going Home" from MarcusSLazarus
Review:
I might have some doubts about just how blind and fixated Dumbledore was on doing things ‘his’ way- I REALLY have doubts about the idea that he was going to ‘let’ Umbridge in just to get closer to Harry, given how he distanced himself from Harry during that same time frame, and the thought that he was already planning to sacrifice himself seems a bit too far given that the Resurrection Stone always seemed to just be the result of a bad choice on his part-, but the circumstances that lead to Harry meeting Doctor Strange were definitely effective, and I definitely liked the idea of Doctor Strange ‘curing’ the horcruxes with the Soul Gem.

Still, your analysis of the fate of magical Britain as the war dragged on was certainly effective, and I definitely liked such additional touches as the appearance of Thor during the fight with the giants (Even if a part of me wishes that Harry had contacted Blade for the vampires; might have been interesting to see what Hermione thought of the chance to meet such a unique figure).

Dumbledore’s last scene might have made him come across as being a bit TOO deluded- why Harry would consent to over a decade of analysis makes no sense under any circumstances that I can think of-, but the final battle was at least dramatic, and it looks like Harry and his friends are doing well for themselves.

Hope you keep sequel potential in mind; the possibilities of Harry’s Defenders (Just out of curiosity, who’s the girl in the armour?) going up against that bad guy are CERTAIN to be interesting reading...
Comments from author:
Working out how I want it to go with the sequel still.

I happen to enjoy manipulative and insane DD fics and decided to try my hand a one, it came out okay I think on that level, not great but okay.

Glad you liked my magical war Britain, and my various cameos. If I do a sequel as I plan to there will be more of them. Then again I have a sequel to my Scooby Titans fic started as well.

The armored girl was Magik. Former New Mutant, original weilder of the Soul Sword , demon sorceress, and who knows what else. I just slapped a bunch of people with magical abilities together for my paper since I don't think Magik or Blade were ever members of the team.

Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [2 Oct 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Bugger Off, I’m Going Home" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Are you planning a sequel?
Comments from author:
Yes actually I am. Only the fight will be in NY which means more heroes. I'm still trying to plan it out right now though so it will probably be a while.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [1 Oct 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Bugger Off, I’m Going Home" from mendenbar
Review:
And once again it is shown that the only happy ending is death after a life of struggle.
Comments from author:
Can't enjoy life without suffering. You earn your reward for all that you've done.
Review By [mendenbar] • Date [1 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Bugger Off, I’m Going Home" from Bobboky
Review:
sweet work
Comments from author:
thanks
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [1 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bugger Off, I’m Going Home" from EroSlackerMicha
Review:
on Reading Rainbow! (lol)

Interesting place to stop.
as always keep up the good work
Review By [EroSlackerMicha] • Date [1 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bugger Off, I’m Going Home" from justapiranha
Review:
loved it! Thank you for writting it.
Comments from author:
glad you enjoyed it
Review By [justapiranha] • Date [1 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bugger Off, I’m Going Home" from Rob
Review:
Nicely ominous ending, well done!
Comments from author:
Sets the stage for another story very well I thought.
Review By [Rob] • Date [1 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Friendly Battle" from jimk
Review:
"Harry limped over and saw with shock that the wounds that the woman had sustained as a cat were deep and long."

Well, no matter how you look at it, going berserk and attacking Voldemort while a house cat versus say using something like transfiguration maybe, may not have been her brightest move. Glorious death and all that but that does sort of lend credence to Slytherin views about Gryffindors! Cool chapter though. Harry seems to clearly have the power but very realistic point about Voldemort not being weak and he clearly had the experience.

Assume this was some type of graduation test for Harry since he made minimal use of mystics and superheroes who could have helped him?
Review By [jimk] • Date [1 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Friendly Battle" from CageFire
Review:
Awesome new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [1 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Friendly Battle" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Dumbles is an idiot
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [1 Oct 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Friendly Battle" from Rob
Review:
Pretty good fight scene, nice to see some of them stand up.
Review By [Rob] • Date [30 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fire Maiden" from LordSchmodder
Review:
Who would not fear the Daywalker? Hrhrhr.
Thanks for posting!
Review By [LordSchmodder] • Date [29 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fire Maiden" from Eureka
Review:
LOVED the second to last sentence!
Review By [Eureka] • Date [29 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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