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Strange Apprentice

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Review of chapter "Friendly Battle" from jimk
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"Harry limped over and saw with shock that the wounds that the woman had sustained as a cat were deep and long."

Well, no matter how you look at it, going berserk and attacking Voldemort while a house cat versus say using something like transfiguration maybe, may not have been her brightest move. Glorious death and all that but that does sort of lend credence to Slytherin views about Gryffindors! Cool chapter though. Harry seems to clearly have the power but very realistic point about Voldemort not being weak and he clearly had the experience.

Assume this was some type of graduation test for Harry since he made minimal use of mystics and superheroes who could have helped him?
Review By [jimk] • Date [1 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Friendly Battle" from CageFire
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Awesome new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [1 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Friendly Battle" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Dumbles is an idiot
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [1 Oct 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Friendly Battle" from Rob
Review:
Pretty good fight scene, nice to see some of them stand up.
Review By [Rob] • Date [30 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fire Maiden" from LordSchmodder
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Who would not fear the Daywalker? Hrhrhr.
Thanks for posting!
Review By [LordSchmodder] • Date [29 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fire Maiden" from Eureka
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LOVED the second to last sentence!
Review By [Eureka] • Date [29 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fire Maiden" from Valkyrie
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Looking forward to more.
Review By [Valkyrie] • Date [29 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fire Maiden" from mendenbar
Review:
Another excellent chapter. You have to wonder just whose pay Dumbledore is in. He knows the Dark Lord has 2 spies in his midst and yet seems to have no problem with them passing information. I always wonder how big his ego was, now it seems to be apparent that it is phenomenally huge.
Review By [mendenbar] • Date [28 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fire Maiden" from BadVoodoo
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I'm enjoying this, but it really seems to me that Harry has virtually 0 in the way of stamina. He's done what, flown around, done 2 sorcerer spells and cast a patronus and that's exhausted him twice. He's coming off as a wimp.
Comments from author:
He's also shielded them and performed several wandless spells as well. I'm trying to make Harry a guy willing to do the job without making him a god. He's still young s far as magic user goes and is not in Strange's league just yet. Heck if i remember correctl with all the dimensional travels Strange has over 10,000 years experince in magical combat. I may have scaled his power back a little to much though. I'll consider what you've said.
Review By [BadVoodoo] • Date [28 Sep 11] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fire Maiden" from Orchamus
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Bloody hell, Dumbles is really off his rocker, and he dragged the Hogwarts staff off with him.
Review By [Orchamus] • Date [28 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fire Maiden" from Bobboky
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awesome
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [28 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fire Maiden" from (Moderator)JoeHundredaire
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While I like most of the story, I wouldn't had claimed ownership of that article even if it was yours. It doesn't match the style of anything we've ever seen of the Prophet ever. It sounds... well, like a sixteen-year-old girl writing for her school paper.

EDIT: Style? Vocabulary? Seriously, I was giving your story a high A to A+ up until that. That alone drops it to a B max. It makes me cringe. Hard.
Comments from author:
And this is different from how JKR writes them how?
Review By [(Moderator)JoeHundredaire] • Date [28 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fire Maiden" from Rob
Review:
Very nice! And yes, Dumbles has a thing for the bad boys. Why do you think Tom fears him? :)
Comments from author:
That gives thought to Dumbledore with a harem male of evil doers. Shiver.
Review By [Rob] • Date [28 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fire Maiden" from DennSedai
Review:
Oh very nicely done. Can't wait for the next installment.
Review By [DennSedai] • Date [28 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Something New, Something Different" from Narf
Review:
Hell of a update I really like the part about Thor coming to deal with the giants, keep up the good work thanks and bye.
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed it
Review By [Narf] • Date [25 Sep 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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