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Review of chapter "Fire Maiden" from Valkyrie
Review:
Looking forward to more.
Review By [Valkyrie] • Date [29 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fire Maiden" from mendenbar
Review:
Another excellent chapter. You have to wonder just whose pay Dumbledore is in. He knows the Dark Lord has 2 spies in his midst and yet seems to have no problem with them passing information. I always wonder how big his ego was, now it seems to be apparent that it is phenomenally huge.
Review By [mendenbar] • Date [28 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fire Maiden" from Justicemurdercake
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I'm enjoying this, but it really seems to me that Harry has virtually 0 in the way of stamina. He's done what, flown around, done 2 sorcerer spells and cast a patronus and that's exhausted him twice. He's coming off as a wimp.
Comments from author:
He's also shielded them and performed several wandless spells as well. I'm trying to make Harry a guy willing to do the job without making him a god. He's still young s far as magic user goes and is not in Strange's league just yet. Heck if i remember correctl with all the dimensional travels Strange has over 10,000 years experince in magical combat. I may have scaled his power back a little to much though. I'll consider what you've said.
Review By [Justicemurdercake] • Date [28 Sep 11] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fire Maiden" from Orchamus
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Bloody hell, Dumbles is really off his rocker, and he dragged the Hogwarts staff off with him.
Review By [Orchamus] • Date [28 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fire Maiden" from Bobboky
Review:
awesome
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [28 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fire Maiden" from (Past Donor)JoeHundredaire
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While I like most of the story, I wouldn't had claimed ownership of that article even if it was yours. It doesn't match the style of anything we've ever seen of the Prophet ever. It sounds... well, like a sixteen-year-old girl writing for her school paper.

EDIT: Style? Vocabulary? Seriously, I was giving your story a high A to A+ up until that. That alone drops it to a B max. It makes me cringe. Hard.
Comments from author:
And this is different from how JKR writes them how?
Review By [(Past Donor)JoeHundredaire] • Date [28 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fire Maiden" from Rob
Review:
Very nice! And yes, Dumbles has a thing for the bad boys. Why do you think Tom fears him? :)
Comments from author:
That gives thought to Dumbledore with a harem male of evil doers. Shiver.
Review By [Rob] • Date [28 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fire Maiden" from DennSedai
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Oh very nicely done. Can't wait for the next installment.
Review By [DennSedai] • Date [28 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Something New, Something Different" from Narf
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Hell of a update I really like the part about Thor coming to deal with the giants, keep up the good work thanks and bye.
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed it
Review By [Narf] • Date [25 Sep 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Something New, Something Different" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Giving Thor the giants to toy with was fun!
Comments from author:
That it was.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [24 Sep 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Something New, Something Different" from Eureka
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COOL!! I may be a day late and a dollar short, BUT I LOVED this chapter! Kinda bad that they drained themselves (Harry and Moine that is.) Can't wait to see what they do next! I mean they knocked out the worst, so what is left that will be so hard except for Voldie that is.
Comments from author:
Glad your enjoying this. Read the chapter about what forces that Voldemort has to get an idea of what they'll be facing next.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [24 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Something New, Something Different" from mendenbar
Review:
In many ways, the giants and dementors were probably the easiest to destroy of Voldemort's forces. They tend to stay with set behaviors. Admittedly, those behaviors usually worked but they had never come across Harry before nor his friends (Hi. Thor.)
Comments from author:
Yeah they do have pretty set combat styles. {Hail Mortal.}
Review By [mendenbar] • Date [23 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Something New, Something Different" from kayron
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Harry is trained. That is what I like best about this story.
Comments from author:
That's what make these types of stories the best its not just luck or randomness that wins.
Review By [kayron] • Date [23 Sep 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Something New, Something Different" from Bobboky
Review:
awesome
Comments from author:
thanks
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [23 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Something New, Something Different" from Rob
Review:
Nice. I even like your Ron. :)
Comments from author:
Yeah Ron is an interesting guy once you get over his lesser qualities.
Review By [Rob] • Date [23 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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