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Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from michaelangelo
Review:
Peanuts? PEANUTS! I never got peanuts! I got a faffing little bag of pretzels it was like eating sawdust, all the way from Chicago to Boise, pretzels *cries* it was game over man, Game Over!. I'd have gnawed my leg off to have peanuts, I was thirsty as hell and they gave us juice or water in tiny sealed bowls.

The only other time I took a flight back in the 70's I was 9, we got sweets, fruit and a flimsy etch a sketch. This time I received a tiny bag with personal hygiene stuff, a blindfold which was useless because I'm terrified of flying and kept looking for something on the wing, some THING on the wing, oh and pretzels.

Oh yeah and the story was great. Well done :).
Comments from author:
Probably depends on which airline you fly and when. The last time I flew was before 9/11 and I got peanuts and a can of soda.
Review By [michaelangelo] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from (Current Donor)drdeth
Review:
Very good story so far, I look forward to the meeting between the Scoobies and SG1.
Comments from author:
Should be interesting. Also, thank you for Recommending my story. That means a lot to me.
Review By [(Current Donor)drdeth] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Genuka
Review:
Ack! too Short!!!!! Moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Comments from author:
It's only been 2 days. You'll have to be a bit more patient.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from borgrabbit
Review:
Great story!! May your Muse smile.

Haiku hiccup:

Poor child of great strife
Lives his complicated life
Stormy horizon
Comments from author:
Thank you for that beautiful Haiku.

Actually, Now that I read it again. I'd like to use it later if you don't mind. I'm going to change the last line to "Event Horizon" though. I think it fits better. Let me know if that's ok.
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from CanuckDownUnder
Review:
Great story so far! Is Jolinar still there? Can't wait to find out, please update soon!
Comments from author:
You'll see very soon.
Review By [CanuckDownUnder] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Selias
Review:
Seems like this will be a pretty good fic. Hope you update again soon.
Comments from author:
3 times in 2 days isn't enough for you. ;-)
Review By [Selias] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from ovid
Review:
Well, I don't know near enough to write up a hack segment. I was just thinking that there would be several scene changes focusing on Sam and Xander, and their reactions to their opponent's moves. And to simplify it, you could have Xander thinking simply while Carter/Jolinar are doing the hacking, and Sam is doing a running commentary to O'neill.

I like your solution to Xander's fighting memories. Reinforcement of the memories would be necessary. And tealc's response to the airport and the accompanying scenes was hilarious. On a side note, I don't think armored jaffa would even fit into economy seats. Though the thought of them putting their staffs into overhead storage is humorous.
Comments from author:
LOL at the overhead compartment visualization.
Review By [ovid] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from desartrattaz
Review:
good start, I am not a writer, so I just enjoy the stories.
Comments from author:
Well, I enjoy your enjoyment. :-D
Review By [desartrattaz] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from (Current Donor)vidicon
Review:
A lie that will be revealed pretty soon...Nice chapter and I thank you for posting it.
Comments from author:
Yes, I fear that it will not last.
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from dustin
Review:
Very nice! I've never seen quite this take on Xander as a Gould/to'kra before. I loved reading about Teal'c on the airplane. I can't wait for more
Comments from author:
Thank you. I do like to be unique.
Review By [dustin] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from (Past Donor)Peaslums
Review:
Calling the memories 'CQC' just sounds off. Maybe the hand to hand memories, or CQC training. Besides, the Army and Air force normally use the term 'Combatives' to refer to unarmed combat training.
Comments from author:
I read it in another fic. It might be a British term though. The author of that story used more than a couple British terms. It's called Fate's Little Plaything and it's very good.
Review By [(Past Donor)Peaslums] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from sonofden
Review:
Does Xander remember Carter's more personal memories? That could lead to quite some embarrassment. Looking forward to reading more.
Comments from author:
He's trying very hard not to. But he is a 17 year old boy. Eventually he's going to see them.
Review By [sonofden] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from fayefree
Review:
Ok, this was fun. Can't wait for more.
Comments from author:
Thank you for reviewing.
Review By [fayefree] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from (Recent Donor)pinkhairedharry
Review:
awesome update
can't wait for SGC to hit the crazy night life of sunnydale
Comments from author:
Thank you. I believe you will like it.
Review By [(Recent Donor)pinkhairedharry] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from CPTSkip
Review:
On my last flight I remember I got 8 peanuts. And some peanut dust. The airline also damaged my luggage and then refused to replace either bag. I used to love flying, even on C-130s. Not any more. I do continue to enjoy your story.
Comments from author:
I remember on my first flight, I got 9 peanuts. I started a journal and wrote down the number of peanuts on each flight. I lost it a while ago, but I believe it ran from a low of 6 to a high of 13.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Not Rated
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