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Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
Delightful!

I like Introspective Kirillin a lot.

As this is the Abridged Continuity, will Piccolo, Jr. be called in to ambush Xander while screaming "***DOHHDGE!!!***" every fucking time?

I mean, he's due another shot. The sucker died because, after all that effort the first time, ``Gohan Didn't Dodge!!``

P.S. This means Mister Popo's psychotic. Is he in any way involved in the dickishness of the PTB?
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [7 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from CageFire
Review:
Hmm, this is a pretty good fic so far. :) I've read like two other DBZ crossovers on this site, but so far this one is different.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [7 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Omegaprime
Review:
So the before the Buffyverse there was the Dragonball Earth? What the heck happened to the Earth that wiped out the DB/Z/GT history? Is it coming back soon to threaten the Buffyverse?

Well at least it isn't Goku/Vegeta/Gohan/Piccollo training Xander.

Should be interesting what Xander will learn from Krillan.

Keep up the good work.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Muadzin
Review:
Nice! Interesting explanation as to how the art of DBZ chi fighting disappeared from the planet. Although personally I could never place the DBZ earth as anywhere in our past. Not unless Goku and Vegeta blasted the whole planet back into the stone age during one of their spars. Might explain the pyramids though. ;)

Only gripe: TOO DAMN SHORT!!! :(
Comments from author:
Thank you sir, funny thing that, I'll be explaining the differences in a chapter or so.

The one thing I'll say, the fire nation most definately did NOT attack.

But something did blast the earth back into the stone ages. I wonder who....
Review By [Muadzin] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Cdog
Review:
Interesting. Though I don't think there will be any plowing of fields by hand or swimming while being chased by sharks in Otherworld.

Look forward to seeing what else Krillin will have up his sleeve.
Review By [Cdog] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from RHatch
Review:
good job !!!!
Review By [RHatch] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Rob
Review:
Fun part. Hope you continue this.
Review By [Rob] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from gaulty
Review:
good chapter, wonder how the training with krillen goes, and if xander introduces Twinkies in heaven, byes
Review By [gaulty] • Date [22 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from RHatch
Review:
Interesting....
Review By [RHatch] • Date [9 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Muadzin
Review:
I have to ask, Kayless, is that the Klingon guy? In which case it should be Kahless. ;)

As for your question in my last review, can't say when my next installment will come out, only that after a long, long hiatus I'm writing again.
Review By [Muadzin] • Date [9 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from calikocat
Review:
Yes! A new chapter! And wow, Krillin's first student...ever. Hope Giles and the council find the Dragon Balls in time...wait...will the council even help? Giles got fired. Hmm.
Review By [calikocat] • Date [9 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from darkKnight
Review:
Equally flabbergasted at her watcher's reaction, she actually listens, for once.

(The hellmouth, having a sense of irony, briefly dropped to to -10 degrees Celsius, and then subsequently reheated to regular temperatures.)


So, hell froze over? Good one!
Review By [darkKnight] • Date [9 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from kitsuneofdarkfire
Review:
council wouldnt give a damn bout reviving the xan man they would use them for their own selfish gain and not a thing else
Comments from author:
Agreed. Notice how Dende didn't really go into detail. What they don't know they can't screw up.

Or can they?
Review By [kitsuneofdarkfire] • Date [9 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Rob
Review:
Short, but I like it.
Review By [Rob] • Date [9 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Omegaprime
Review:
Can't wait to see how a Krillan trained Xander will perform.

Will the Watcher's Council, when they find out, misuse the Dragonballs?

I loved how Giles and Willow reacted to the news.

Keep up the good work.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [9 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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