dende doing anything to krillin is a bit unrealistic krillin was after all just a LOT more powerful than dende and by the time he died could have bitch slapped frieza. other than that minor complaint lovin the story and hope you update soon
Yes, I really like the fact that you're using Krillin. A lot of people tend to forget that Krillin, even after 7 years of not really training or fighting after the Cell Games was, easily, the most powerful human on Earth. While I'm a fan of the saiyans, Xander training under Goku, Vegeta or any of their sons and grandsons wouldn't benefit Xander as having even little saiyan blood effectively makes them naturally adept at fighting and stronger than "most" humans by default.
Review By [eternalfox] • Date [22 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Sir, having read, commented on and loved everything you've done with the genre, I take that as a major compliment. Thank you kindly. This, even complete, wont come anywhere close to the length of your blockbuster mega hits, but I'm hoping to have something respectable to paper.
I need to ask, when is your next fic coming out?
Review By [Muadzin] • Date [17 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Not bad. In the second half of the story, you switch between Kami and Dende. This seems to be taking place before Kami fused with Piccolo. At that time, Dende would still be a boy.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Nice start to a story with what could be some great potential. Now I'm guessing that Xander may become the new god of Earth perhaps. I look forward to your future chapters and what ever plot that you're cooking up. Please continue with your tale.
Review By [CDM] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Rating [5 out of 10]
