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Review of chapter "First Impressions" from Oakheart
Review:
A) Please add me to the growing Legion of Interested Readers, then
B) Feel free to add a number of similarly well-presented chapters.

See? Simple.

SD
Comments from author:
Legion is right, I was not expecting this many replies from a single chapter. It makes me feel all fuzzy inside.

Next chapter is in the works.
Review By [Oakheart] • Date [17 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Impressions" from souldriven
Review:
sounds interesting, of course you should continue. I look forward to an update.
Comments from author:
Awesome, so far it's unanimous.
Review By [souldriven] • Date [17 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Impressions" from ihateeveryone
Review:
Good start, way better than it's inspiration story. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Comments from author:
Thanks, glad to hear it.
Review By [ihateeveryone] • Date [17 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Impressions" from (Current Donor)WildMartin
Review:
Great first chapter! Excellent back story, plausible set-up, good characterizations. I tend to agree with you on the Xander telepathy situation, it would be hard to make it fit. One thing you might consider doing is making Xander immune to telepathy when in diamond form. I think I remember Emma Frost not being able to use her telepathic powers while physically shifted, but I may be mistaken.

Last thing...Xander sucker punched Wolverine! That was awesome and is something Xander may be able to bond with the other new X-Men over. :)
Comments from author:
Thanks, and don't worry, I have a plan for the telepathy, one I think a lot of people'll get a kick out of. As for the sucker punch, well, I just wanted Xander to get a win in without really making him a 'super-awesome-fighter', but it is still funny to picture.
Review By [(Current Donor)WildMartin] • Date [17 Sep 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Impressions" from Narf
Review:
wow not bad at all and I think you should continue with this story thanks and bye.
Comments from author:
Thanks, glad you liked it.
Review By [Narf] • Date [17 Sep 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Impressions" from OdinMage
Review:
I say yes, yes you SHOULD continue it.
Comments from author:
Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [OdinMage] • Date [17 Sep 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Impressions" from lillyb
Review:
Very good work, I hope you keep going.
Comments from author:
Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [lillyb] • Date [17 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Impressions" from ejbelisle
Review:
I'm loving it so far. Hope you update soon. keep up the good writing :)
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it.
Review By [ejbelisle] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Impressions" from borgrabbit
Review:
Should I continue?
Of course you should!
Reasonably good grammar and spelling.
A plot.
What's not to like?
Comments from author:
It is depressing that 'reasonably good grammar and spelling' is a compliment on sites such as these, rather than an expectation. Anyway, glad you liked it.
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Impressions" from Eureka
Review:
Good start, now to press on forward.
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Impressions" from michaelangelo
Review:
Crikey! Did you happen to read the review I left Arsaotome's The Queen's Frozen Prince? 'coz this is, generally, a lot like the way I suggested he go. Well I'm glad, and enjoyed it immensely. Please keep up the good work and continue it.
Comments from author:
No, I actually made a similar review on Arsaotome's original story that inspired me to write my own. Either way, I'm glad you enjoyed it. And thanks for reviewing.
Review By [michaelangelo] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Impressions" from LostDragon
Review:
Yeah keep them coming
Comments from author:
Will do!
Review By [LostDragon] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Impressions" from RubyPaladin
Review:
Should you continue? YYYYYYEEEEEESSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Comments from author:
Guess I'll have to with all the votes.
Review By [RubyPaladin] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Impressions" from TAO
Review:
Okay...you BETTER continue this!

LOL!
Comments from author:
I intend to.
Review By [TAO] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Impressions" from ReflectionsOfReality
Review:
Cool start that I hope you do continue. It is a different approach from the other one that has been posted recently but I think that you are capturing Xander's personality better. I mean often time Xander is used as a piece that can fit anywhere but a lot of those stories loose what makes him into the character we know and love. You don't seem to have that issue in this or your other stories so I want to see what happens if you take this story to its conclusion.
~Reflections
Comments from author:
Wow, glad to know I'm getting the characterisations right, it's often hard for me to tell when I'm writing. And I know those stories you're talking about, Xander's a very malleable character but often his core personality is unfortunately lost in such fics, so I hope I don't make the same mistake.

Glad you're enjoying it.
Review By [ReflectionsOfReality] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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