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Review of chapter "First Impressions" from rothos
Review:
Yes continue this, I'd love to see Xander and Laura's first date.
Comments from author:
Well, at this point in time, I don't think that they'll get much of a chance for a date, unless you count battling evil over coffee a date. Besides, I have yet to decide if I want to turn this into a pairing fic.
Review By [rothos] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Impressions" from Tjin
Review:
well i think you should... but what do i know...
Comments from author:
Thanks, glad you're enjoying it.
Review By [Tjin] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Impressions" from Glongi
Review:
Please keep going! :)
Comments from author:
Can do!
Review By [Glongi] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Impressions" from CDM
Review:
Wow, not to bad of a start for a first chapter. Your story flows much better than it's inspirational story did. Looking at Laura's chest is a very Xanderish thing at that period of time, especially with her Faithesque look.
Now, the fact that you have alluded to the possibility of some sort of lab or experimentation in Xander's memory begs the question of what were the blades that he summoned from his arms? Are they simply an extension of his diamond form, malleable at his direction or are they actually bone claws when not in his elemental form?
What would really be a twist would be if Xander, not necessarily your Xander, was the combination of Logan and Emma Frost as his parents. Something to be given thought.
Overall very nice, please continue with your tale.
Comments from author:
Okay, sorry about this but I need to nip that one in the bud, Xander is definitely not Logan's son in this fic. Period. The blades are malleable at his direction and he chose that particular form because of Laura's claws. I admit, I haven't yet decided on a couple of things, but on this I am adamant.

To the comments, I appreciate it, especially the thing about Xander's characterisation.

Thanks for reviewing, and I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
Review By [CDM] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Impressions" from Genericrandom
Review:
This one's got potential. I think it could be seriously awesome. Keep going and we'll see just how awesome it gets. I'm also curious as to seeing how Xander came about. You've hinted at *snrk* "lab work" but we'll see exactly how many test tubes were involved in this Xander's origin. Be interesting to see how Xander and the X-Men deal with each other in this situation. Normally, there's a distinct "I don't want to be here" or "I have to get back to Sunnydale" vibe that really puts the X-Men and their X-Brats off, so we'll see how things go this time around, when they really feel it wouldn't be safe for him to go it alone.
Comments from author:
I'm not really sure yet how exactly this is all going to develop, though I do have Xander's origins mostly planned out. Question, what's with the quotation marks around "lab work"? And the *snrk*?

I do think that, with the Xander/X-men interaction, there will be a lack of the "I don't want to be here" vibe, but he might be a bit more independent than the other students.

Thanks for reviewing, and I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
Review By [Genericrandom] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Impressions" from Hanzo
Review:
♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying the fic.
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Impressions" from moringstar
Review:
yes you should continue.
Comments from author:
Thanks, glad you liked it.
Review By [moringstar] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Impressions" from lindiel
Review:
Great start to the story, I hope you continue it. I'm glad I pushed past the one little glitch I saw. HAWAII IS IN THE PACIFIC OCEAN!!!! Sorry for the yellage, but I'm a geography buff and this is something I hope anyone past grade 7 knows. Unless you're from somewhere like central Eurasia or Africa, or somewhere where Pearl Harbor and the Americans officially joining World War 2 didn't have much of an impact.

Anyways, barring moving Hawaii to the Atlantic ocean, great work, keep it up, and may the plot bunnies breed abundantly.
Comments from author:
Oh crap, you're right. Sorry about that, I dropped geography the second I could. And, for the record, I'm an Aussie. Consider the mistake edited, and I thank you for pointing it out to me.

Thanks for the review, and I'm glad you're enjoying it (despite my butchering of the globe). And may the plot bunnies breed at a rate that I can keep track of.
Review By [lindiel] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Impressions" from Xeenith
Review:
nice potential here, first time I see Xand with this particular "true family"
and if you have some more planned, it'd give you a nice 2nd story after Spyke with a continuity :)
Comments from author:
Thanks, glad you like the fic.
Review By [Xeenith] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Impressions" from Markelo
Review:
Okay, I love this one. I'm gonna rec it!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the recommendation!! Glad you're enjoying it.
Review By [Markelo] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Impressions" from Celticchick
Review:
is Xander older or younger then the Stepford Cuckoos in this story? and hey when you think about it all the cuckoos have bad luck in the boyfriend area and all the other sibs don't like their romantic interest i guess the same can be said for anyone that Xander gets involved with. and what will Emma say about her son stripping and what will the others say. it would be really funny if the cuckoos were over protective of him it would be so cute.
Comments from author:
In this fic, I'm placing the Cuckoos at age 16, and they were aged at the natural rate (none of that only being chronologically two year olds stuff). Xander is 18 by the end of season 3 (nearing 19 I think). And as for Emma discovering her son's past profession, I plan on Shadowcat making a semi-snide 'Like mother like son' comment. I haven't yet decided how the Cuckoos will treat him though, probably with the same distance they treat everyone else.

Thanks for the review though, and I'm glad you enjoyed it so far.
Review By [Celticchick] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Impressions" from DarthPayne
Review:
A good start. :)
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Impressions" from cjcold
Review:
Very nice start.

Look forward to Emma's reaction to another child she might not have known about, given the lab memories, popping up.

Interesting ability of Xander's to stretch his diamond covering to form claws, I do have to wonder if he can break off a piece of diamond without hurting himself. A way to get some quick cash.

Like the hints of attraction between Xander and Laura, he always was a sucker for the strong ladies with vulnerable qualities. Emma will throw a fit about it with the way she dislikes X-23.

More soon please.
Comments from author:
Thanks, and Emma doesn't know about Xander.

As for his powers, Xander can alter small characteristics, but he has only a finite mass to work with, and he definitely can't break off pieces of himself, so Xander won't be opening up his own jewellery store.

I'm liking the Xander/Laura interaction so far as well, and I'm thinking it'll be useful to cause some chaos down the line.

Glad you're enjoying it.
Review By [cjcold] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Impressions" from RafMereC
Review:
Great beginning.
Wouldn't mind seeing more...

Raf.
Comments from author:
Thanks, and thanks for the recommendation!! Glad you're enjoying it.
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Impressions" from Semet
Review:
'Please sir may I have another?' And don't you dare hold out on us! lol Anyway I can see this being a truly epic fic and I would love for you to continue with this ^^. Here's to hoping we see more soon! Cheers!
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you like it. Not sure when the next chapter will be up but it should be less than a week at most.
Review By [Semet] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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