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Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from loretta
Review:
this is a great story, i hope you update it soon
Review By [loretta] • Date [30 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from LostDragon
Review:
Any chance either of you two picking this back up?
Comments from author:
yepp, not abandoned...it is still on my to do list only real life doesn't gives me much time to write atm, but if you want to join up feel free to let me now :)
Review By [LostDragon] • Date [24 Oct 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Cateagle
Review:
Okay, things are really getting interesting. I rather suspect that Willow is going to end up with her power bound just so the others will feel safe and I seriously doubt they'll ever trust her again. In the meantime, it rather looks like Fourth Year for Harry took a detour from canon and is getting far more interesting. 'Twill be most enlightening to see how the ensuing summer proceeds.
Review By [Cateagle] • Date [9 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Cateagle
Review:
Okay, this is going to get rather interesting and I can see that Willow has truly "lost the plot". Doing it once was bad enough, ,doing it again, in hopes of a different result, was verging on abject stupidity.

I'm quite enjoying the comparisons between Sunnydale and Harry's situation and I suspect the mix of the two will lead to some fascinating occurrences.
Review By [Cateagle] • Date [10 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [6 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Dragonelf
Review:
I think that you two have done a good job with this chapter and this story. :D

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I caught a couple minuscule mistakes which you might want to fix.

"he pulled his want and yelled"
I think you intended to write wand and not want, right?

You might want to fix the spelling of Ethan Rayne's surname in the first chapter and in a couple of locations in chapter two you might want to replace "quite" with "quiet".
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::Gives the plot bunny a slice of Chocolate Apple Pie::

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Neither fire nor wind,
birth nor death can
erase our good deeds.
- Buddha
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Comments from author:
tx that you like our work so far and also tx for those pointers. I think I caught and fixed those now.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [14 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Raider
Review:
outstanding work!
Review By [Raider] • Date [12 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Harry
Review:
Well, the blade has been bound to Buffy. I wonder when she is going to put it to use? And the way that it was bound to her, reminds me of how Buffy got to bind the sword Vampire Slayer to herself in the Wandererverse. As for the news from Xander's father, now THAT is a shocker!
Review By [Harry] • Date [12 Apr 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Harry
Review:
Somethiung tells me that this blade is going to end up in Buffy's hands before long. I don't know why, but something tells me that it will.
Review By [Harry] • Date [12 Apr 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Harry
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*Breaks into song* HERE WE ARE! BORN TO BE KINGS, WE'RE THE PRINCES OF THE UNIVERSE! Ahh, it was good to see Connor McClloed of the Clan McCloed in action, even if it was just with fists, verses a blade. And I think that Buffy's secret is out of the bag with her actions this day as well.
Review By [Harry] • Date [12 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Harry
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I smell double trouble in the horizon! Not only with Willow, trying to figure out what to do with the situation between her, Buffy and Xander, but also with Angel/Angelus who wants Buffy as his. Big time trouble coming!!!
Review By [Harry] • Date [12 Apr 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Harry
Review:
While I applaude Xander's plans to improve his control and head to England to help out Harry, I smell problems brewing with Red. If the gang is not careful, I see her heading down a dark path where Magick is concerned!
Review By [Harry] • Date [12 Apr 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Harry
Review:
I like xander's attitude with this power. The way of getting back at Ethan was Juvinile, but it worked. Now, lets see what the Ripper can do to help him with improving his abilities, or is a viist to Hogwarts in the future for Xander?
Review By [Harry] • Date [12 Apr 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Harry
Review:
I like xander's attitude with this power. The way of getting back at Ethan was Juvinile, but it worked. Now, lets see what the Ripper can do to help him with improving his abilities, or is a viist to Hogwarts in the future for Xander?
Review By [Harry] • Date [12 Apr 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from drago
Review:
Very good even though eventually they might start to forgive her after all they forgave several people for doing horrible things. Annayaka when she went back to a demon, the stupid git andrew, spike, angel, wesely and a few others.
But she's going to have to work hard at it though.
Review By [drago] • Date [12 Apr 12] • Not Rated
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