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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BloodyMind
Review:
I love this. More please. Soon? I'm on the edge of my seat waitibg for more, LOL. There aren't many good Halloween crossovers with Harry Potter. Great start. :) The Hawaiian shirt thing had me cackling like a loon. And raiding Dumbles SECRET bank vault! Hahahahahaha. I hope Xander drives Dumbles nuts if he's still alive! I hope he steals Harry right out from under Dumbles nose!
Comments from author:
there will be more and I'll try to bring it to you fast, but atm I'm fighting with the next Chapter to Xander in trouble.

Nice that you liked the start and I hope to see you back for Ch 2
Review By [BloodyMind] • Date [26 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Zyanadryn
Review:
right on! keep 'em comming!
Review By [Zyanadryn] • Date [21 Sep 11] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RafMereC
Review:
Nice.

Raf
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [19 Sep 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from cabale
Review:
Well written. A bit like some movies. Where is the... ah? there is none? too bad ^^
Review By [cabale] • Date [18 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from fayefree
Review:
I like were you are going with this story so far. You have me curious about Dumbledore motives. Please Sirius not dead and Dumbledore knows it.
Review By [fayefree] • Date [17 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Netchka
Review:
Love this story. Is Ethan toast? I think so, because head on with a big truck is a good way to get dead. More please as soon as possible. Thank you.
Comments from author:
Razial and I are still discussing the fate of Ethan :)
Review By [Netchka] • Date [17 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Nuklear
Review:
pretty good although I admit with that title and summery I was expecting him to have been Gandalf when I opened it

edit: Sorry if I offended, I in no way meant that in a bad way or anything; maybe maybe not on the label thing you could have had him dress as Gandalf then turned him loose on the wizarding world and decided to only list the HP part... I have seen people do it. And true I did. well anyway sorry if I annoyed you look forward to more
Comments from author:
yeah could have been, but then it wouldn't be labeled as HP Cross or? and u got a bit of LOTR this ch. Didn't you? Tx for the review.
Review By [Nuklear] • Date [17 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Alastor
Review:
Yay! The possibility of one of my favorite pairings and no having sex with the corpse is a very good thing. As a character Angel has potential and I did actually like him on Angel, but the whole lusting after a teenager thing when you're a demon infested corpse with a conscious never really appealed to me. The only thing I'm iffy about is how much you're going to combine Buffy with HP timeline wise and everything and if you are sticking to HP canon, absolutely hated the last two books myself especially the pairings Ron and Hermione, ughh..., but I'll be willing to give time one a shot and I look forward to seeing what you do with it.
Comments from author:
you can be sure of one thing...there will be no Ron/Hermy or Harry/Ginny......those where absolute stupid pairings in my mind.
Review By [Alastor] • Date [17 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Siggisab
Review:
nice setting, looking forward where it goes.

is it going to be a more Sunnydale story or will they go to England?
Comments from author:
atm... Sunnydale for a while but England is on the plan
Review By [Siggisab] • Date [17 Sep 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)jcon
Review:
Great start. Been reading a bit of HP elsewhere. So fits perfectly into my current reading. Will be looking forward to more.
Review By [(Recent Donor)jcon] • Date [17 Sep 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from dustin
Review:
Lol, very interesting! Never read something like this before and I love Xander in it. I kinda wish Dumbledore wasn't going to be a M.O.C , but I like those stories too so I can't wait for more
Review By [dustin] • Date [17 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from userid
Review:
How hard would it be to enchant stakes to be vampire seeking like a bludger is a person seeking ball? Spend a few days enchanting a bunch warn angle if he feels like it then release the swarm. Have them active only at night so people could pass them off as bats if they see them.
Comments from author:
rofl....wow that's an Idea....but do you think Xander would really warn Angel???? naahhhhh......
Review By [userid] • Date [17 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Narf
Review:
Kick ass keep up the good work thanks and bye.
Review By [Narf] • Date [17 Sep 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)WildMartin
Review:
I like it. I'm also glad that Giles knows that Dumbledore is a dark wizard (leader of the light my foot). Just out of curiosity, what point is your story taking place in the HP books?
Comments from author:
Time wise after Dumbles funeral, but I can't say more yet if I don't want to spoil the story. tx. for the review
Review By [(Current Donor)WildMartin] • Date [17 Sep 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Not Rated
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