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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from dustin
Review:
Lol, very interesting! Never read something like this before and I love Xander in it. I kinda wish Dumbledore wasn't going to be a M.O.C , but I like those stories too so I can't wait for more
Review By [dustin] • Date [17 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from userid
Review:
How hard would it be to enchant stakes to be vampire seeking like a bludger is a person seeking ball? Spend a few days enchanting a bunch warn angle if he feels like it then release the swarm. Have them active only at night so people could pass them off as bats if they see them.
Comments from author:
rofl....wow that's an Idea....but do you think Xander would really warn Angel???? naahhhhh......
Review By [userid] • Date [17 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Narf
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Kick ass keep up the good work thanks and bye.
Review By [Narf] • Date [17 Sep 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)WildMartin
Review:
I like it. I'm also glad that Giles knows that Dumbledore is a dark wizard (leader of the light my foot). Just out of curiosity, what point is your story taking place in the HP books?
Comments from author:
Time wise after Dumbles funeral, but I can't say more yet if I don't want to spoil the story. tx. for the review
Review By [(Current Donor)WildMartin] • Date [17 Sep 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from WARLOCKPOTTER
Review:
GOOD STORY HOPE TO SEE MORE SOON
Review By [WARLOCKPOTTER] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from cloudleonsgurl
Review:
Have I ever told you that you guys are brillant?! You're brillant. There I told you. This is one of my favorite fics now, have to say I always love it when you and Razial collaborate on something. Very well written, vell well thought out and can't wait to see what you have in store for it. :D
Review By [cloudleonsgurl] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Hanzo
Review:
♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from darkplayer
Review:
Awesome start. I like the whole Halloween plot with the wizards from Harry Potter. I look forward to seeing where it goes from here and what Dumbledore's plot for Giles was. It has a ton of potential. Please update soon.
Review By [darkplayer] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JCHatten
Review:
Sweet this sounds really intresting.

The question is what was it that Dumble where doing to Giles. Or was planing too do to him ?
I have a feeling he was trying to turn Giles in to a dark Lord.
Comments from author:
Hatten....you know me to well :)
Review By [JCHatten] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DarthPayne
Review:
Interesting, most interesting. :)

Will we be seeing any HP characters any time soon?

And perhaps Xander will write a book about Dumbledore that holds the truth, and only the truth, no matter how ugly it gets?
Comments from author:
HP chars are planned yes, just can't say if it is already next ch or not and the idea with the book has merit :)
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Outcaste
Review:
I'll hold off over all judgement of the story until a few more chapters are posted. But from the first chapter I can see it has good potential. If you can't continue the story on I hope you find someone to at least give it a shot.
Comments from author:
ahh I think there will be more chapters in it. Razial and have plan, so don't fear. Tx for the review.
Review By [Outcaste] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AlecMcDowell
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Ooooh YAHF with Xander going as secretly!Manipulative!Dumbles? So awesome. Looking forward to Xander going and ruining the old man's memory a bit
Review By [AlecMcDowell] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Dhampyr
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The way this reads I get the feeling Dumbledore wanted Giles to fill the role he eventually moved Severus into. And timing wise... wouldn't Giles' removal from Hogwarts be just about the time the Snape was almost killed by the Marauders and Dumberdore threatened him to keep quiet rather than punish Sirius? Or would it be around the time of "Snape's worst memory?" Perhaps Albus had started a contingency plan once he lost his first choice for a Slytherin pawn.
Review By [Dhampyr] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I am enjoying this. I can see Ethan's sell.. it's like Gandalf but not boring and more colorful.
Meanwhile a punch bag would be shaped like a boxing glove and have a protection spell that punches out those who try to steal from it??? I'm almost certain you meant purse, but just in case... : )
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Not Rated
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