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Review of chapter "Feros: The Thorian" from BarbarossaRotbart
Review:
Interesting story, but it seems to be a Xander-sue story. That is very bad and sad, because that is against everything that defines Xander.
Comments from author:
A fair critique.

I detest what I call Xander-topia stories in which Xander's inclusion in a world solves all problems and makes everybody's life easier. and while the battle at Feros is a tad easier because of what he does I would be loath to describe the room to room battle that actually takes place in-game. I like to think I have avoided one well known convention of xander-sue stories ... This is still Shepard's mission, he defers to her, follows her orders, obviously looks to her for leadership. He is part of a team and contributes to that team.

That having been said I thank you, I'm usually criticized for making Xander too weak and bumbling ...this is the first time I've been accused of doing the opposite it is refreshing.
Review By [BarbarossaRotbart] • Date [21 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Feros: The Thorian" from Addlcove
Review:
nifty :) makes me wanna go play ME1 again ;)
Review By [Addlcove] • Date [21 Sep 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Awkward Moments" from RafMereC
Review:
Great story.
Loving it.

Raf
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [19 Sep 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Awkward Moments" from stormcloud
Review:
great story
Review By [stormcloud] • Date [19 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Awkward Moments" from Elleria
Review:
Loving this so far, looking forward to the next bit.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [19 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Awkward Moments" from Semet
Review:
This was neat. Always good to see some fanfics for one of my favorite game series out there. Congratz!
Review By [Semet] • Date [18 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Awkward Moments" from Addlcove
Review:
awesome so far, cannot wait to read more.
Review By [Addlcove] • Date [18 Sep 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Awkward Moments" from maydaymason
Review:
I request, nay, demand that you add to this.
Review By [maydaymason] • Date [18 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Belated Birthday Gifts" from DarthPayne
Review:
It's great to see this fic here. :)
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [18 Sep 11] • Not Rated
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