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Review of chapter "Buffy, Chapter 1" from naughtybit
Review:
"Shapeshifters are easy to spot if you look for the right things. [snip]"

First, I'd just like to say how wonderful that bit was about shapeshifters; I can't recall any writer in the Marvel U breaking it down that way.

Of course, I now have an image of a bowlegged Mr. Sinister jaunting through my head. Thanks.
Review By [naughtybit] • Date [27 Oct 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Buffy, Chapter 1" from AllenPitt
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And now Buffy is the hostage. Dawn will never let her live this down. So...as I recall poor Sabretooth gets taken hostage and presumably the Slayers 'question' him about what's going on. Even with Willow absent they might try to send some extra help through? Funny--Sinister dismissing Dawn as an inferior clone, not realizing he almost had his hands on one of the ultimate powers of the 'verse or something.
So--will there be yet a third story detailing things from Willow's point of view?
Comments from author:
Yes, Willow will be getting her own part similar to Faith and Buffy. I already got the intro parts of her story written, but there's still a lot of Buffy to write before we get to her.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [27 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy, Chapter 1" from Hecatonchires
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Hmm, nice to see what happened, but flashback warning!
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [27 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy, Chapter 1" from SamDragon
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New chapter good,have a cookie. :)
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [27 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Faith, Chapter 10" from (Current Donor)WildMartin
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This is a great story and I was pulled in from the start; really looking forward to the Buffy POV that you're working on.
Review By [(Current Donor)WildMartin] • Date [6 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Faith, Chapter 10" from shazamfan
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WOW! And can I had another WOW to that as well!!

Saw this tale this morning and thought what the heck looks like it might be okay. Boy was I wayyyyyyyyyyyy off base on that one! Enjoying the cross dimensional tale very much and loving the way Faith acts around everyone. Have to say your show down in chapter 9 with the x-men had me going DAMN!

Have to wonder if Buffy is under sway of Malice from Sinister's bunch or what. Glad to hear we are going to see things from Buffy's POV next as that should be as fun as Faith's POV has been.

Here is to hoping those chapters and ones followed by Willow's POV come very soon!

-J-
Review By [shazamfan] • Date [2 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Faith, Chapter 10" from grd
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Wow! Amazed by the twists. Eager to see what happens next.
Review By [grd] • Date [1 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Faith, Chapter 10" from Antonio
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You are evil. Are you going to the beginning after this cliffhanger?
So the old one who has consumed Buffy has the scythe (the weapon which killed her) and has gone after Ares (the god who almost defeated her army). I'm thinking that the Sentinel is going to be the next.
Just one question: is this old one the same one whose heart was used to created the Slayer's line (the pale man) or another one?
Great fic.
Review By [Antonio] • Date [1 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Faith, Chapter 10" from naughtybit
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Nice break after the previous chapter's 'throw-down hoedown'. But what's this? No Jessica Jones cameo at Sanctum Sanctorum? ::sad::

'Soul rewriting'? Select-all, delete and paste? Scary and 'evil'.
Review By [naughtybit] • Date [1 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Faith, Chapter 10" from Avantre
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It's been a good story so far. One thing drew me a bit out of the story in this chapter: Wonder Man's made of ionic energy - he's the closest thing the Avengers have, besides their god recruits, to an immortal. So, killing him does stretch my disbelief somewhat without at least an in-story acknowledgement of hard that should have been to do.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. As we replay from Buffy's POV we'll find out more about what happened with him.
Review By [Avantre] • Date [30 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Faith, Chapter 10" from AllenPitt
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wow, even the eye of agamotto? I haven't read the Sentry stuff, but from the wiki I assume this is The Void or something like that. Doesn't look good for the Buffster, that's for sure. At least Shield is showing signs of sanity and realizing all Avengers have to join together and forget everything else. ALL mutants? Ouchie.
And please --at some point have Spiderwoman confront Faith about that viral internet video, asking her to go public saying that wasn't Spiderwoman. heh.
Comments from author:
At this point in Marvel continuity "all mutants" is about 200 individuals. They've recently gone through a big population decimation.

Thanks for all the feedback.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [30 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Faith, Chapter 9" from Mcspender
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Wow, now this, is how you write a battle scene =D!!. Congratulations =D!!!.
Don't know if Faith had a case of young beginner godling good luck, or like other reviewer said, she's now merged with Willow.
Awesome chapter dude, see ya!!.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [27 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Faith, Chapter 9" from PATM
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Oh gawd!!! My meager attempts at foreseeing events will cease right now. That is not Hugh's Wolverine and Emma Frost is on the the X-Mens side? Maybe if I had read the new Marvel stories I wouldn't be so confused. If Willow and Faith are merged why no hints at all 'til now? Oh yeah No Guessing Where the Author is Going! NGWAG?
Comments from author:
Not only is Emma Frost an X-Man these days, she's leading the team along with lover, Scott Summers. They're my favorite Marvel couple (wonderfully dysfunctional!), and they got their awesomeness with our beloved Joss Whedon's couple year run writing X-Men.
Review By [PATM] • Date [27 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Faith, Chapter 9" from Jazzibear
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This is amazing. I don’t have much idea what’s going on, but I am following it avidly. Can’t wait till the next post.

Must, though. Bother !

An impertinent question, so please ignore it if I am writing out of turn. Does your pen-name relate at all to "Nigra sum, sed formosa” ?
Comments from author:
Glad you like it. Chapter 10 coming soon (maybe tomorrow, delayed by life...)

My pen name's nothing so awesome. Back in the day I used 'red' on Usenet. That got to be too common, so I became RedIAm.
Review By [Jazzibear] • Date [27 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Faith, Chapter 9" from LordSchmodder
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Hoo-wah! That was a ride! Now I'm really curious what happened.

TY for posting.
Review By [LordSchmodder] • Date [27 Sep 11] • Not Rated
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