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Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven." from striderramses
Review:
Before I raise a quibble I wanted you to know that I've been following the series from the beginning and have very much enjoyed all the stories. Integrating 'Heartbreak Ridge' into the crossover list and making it feel at least partially updated to present day was no small feat, hats off to you sir! I look forward to seeing what happens next.

Now to the quibble - WTF is up with Wesley? Granted I never watched the later episodes of Buffy but I did watch the first couple seasons of Angel and poor Wes never seemed *that* incompetent, and he grew up enormously over the years. Does the 'Angel' side of things not exist in this universe? I know things are different due to what happened when Faith woke from her coma here, but it still seems like Wes is getting a bum rap.
Comments from author:
This will be where Wes grows up a little...well a lot. I have plans you see. I actually quite liked the later version of Wes.

Now I'm not 100% certain whether the Angel side of things exists in this reality, it probably does but with minor personnel changes. I liked Doyle and I'll keep Cordy. To be honest I can't remember mentioning that side of things.

Maybe if we go over to the west coast at some point we might bump into Angel and co.

Anyway thanks for the nice review.
Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [striderramses] • Date [9 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven." from war
Review:
great story.
Comments from author:
Thanks,
Dave.
Review By [war] • Date [9 Oct 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven." from MountainWilliam
Review:
Great chapter to finish up a great story!

I really hope you continue this series.

Thanks for sharing.
Comments from author:
Thank-you. More of this series in a month or so.

Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [MountainWilliam] • Date [9 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven." from (Recent Donor)JanessaRavenwood
Review:
Rather feel sorry for Wes here. Perhaps he can head off to LA and grow into his badass version now that he's free of the Council. If they'd actually TOLD HIM WHAT WAS GOING ON, this could have all been avoided. But, I guess that would make too much sense.
Comments from author:
Exactly, but it would be no fun if people went around telling the truth! Okay telling Faith that she's a murderer might not be the best idea in the world but other stuff, yeah I know what you mean!

Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [(Recent Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [9 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven." from LordSchmodder
Review:
Nice ending with the ambigous Wesley.
I actually once read the book to this film (I was being to young to see it when was in theaters), and liked the platoon and how Tom Highway kicked their asses into shape.
Nicely done!
Comments from author:
Thank-you, I've got some vague ideas about a return of Tom Highway in the future. I'm thinking on it.

Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [LordSchmodder] • Date [9 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven." from CPTSkip
Review:
Well done! I feel sort of sorry for your Wes. Maybe this is actually for the best as he can now go out in the world and become a Rogue Demon Hunter. That is if he can find enough rogue demons. His stint as a RDH seemed to help him out on AtS. Can't wait for your next story in this series as SSG Faith and CPL B are two wonderful characters. I look forward to you giving them another chance to kick ass and chew gum. Maybe they can be sent to the Texas/Mexican border and help Machete take out the trash. Lol!
Comments from author:
Next story in the series is NCIS and I think it'll need some rewriting to make it fit with ideas people have given me in this fic! Also I think I need to add a few more interactions and make it longer...the work of a moment and its not as if I have anything better to do!

Onwards and sideways!
Dave.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [9 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven." from Mcspender
Review:
Hell yeah, Faith and the Recon Jarheads were awesome =D!!!.
And Wesley, weell, he's gonna get it, don't know what is he's going to get, bet he's gonna get it :P!!.
Cool addition to the series dude, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
Thank-you.
Dave.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [9 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven." from AllenPitt
Review:
maybe Wesley can become a rogue demon hunter. He who hunts rogue demons or something. yeah-- actually I think Willow made a mistake here--should have ferried him to Slayer HQ and made him a researcher --he's very good at that. Humiliating him like that, not a good idea. A lot of guys would have sought revenge for it.
Anyway---hopefully Faith & B can now get some peace and quiet in the MPs. . Maybe go on a rescue mission in the jungle (i.e. "Predator" ) ...?
Comments from author:
Ah, but if she'd done that we wouldn't be able to have fun with him later!

Peace and quiet for Faith and B!?!? No-way!

Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [9 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven." from Richardthrnnsx
Review:
Really nice series, well done.

Thanks for sharing
Comments from author:
Thank-you for reviewing.
Dave.
Review By [Richardthrnnsx] • Date [9 Oct 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven." from Jazzibear
Review:
Top marks, that man: your stories never fail to entertain and educate. Downright amazing, that’s what.

To follow Grim Up North with this is simply icing on a cake for this reader.

Faith’s exploits can always be relied to be interesting, for she is never less than whole-hearted, and Brenda is a delightful foil to Faith. Is she (Brenda) your creation?

My Spanish is so basic as to be almost non-existent, but is Nunca-Aterriza sort of Spanish for Neverland?

What delight are you planning for us next? I should love to see the Scoobies in the Discworld or the Court of Amber, hint, hint!
Comments from author:
All the place names and faction names are based on 'Peter Pan'.

Brenda was a character from the TV show 'Over There'.

Considering I've read almost all the discworld novels its odd to me that I've never done a fic based there. I promise nothing but it's at the back of my mind. At the moment I'm concentrating on Faith In the Army fics. However my next posting will involve Buffy in ancient Rome!

Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [Jazzibear] • Date [9 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven." from JoeDineen
Review:
Thanks ofr the story I enjoyed it.
Comments from author:
Thank-you for the review!
Dave.
Review By [JoeDineen] • Date [9 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven." from Missingviolet
Review:
Yes! Thank you!!! A relatively good ending for faithy!! Thank you thank you! And Wesley being that way just gives me hope of another sequel! I've got myfingers and toes crossed! Awesome job!
Comments from author:
Series is planned out, all I've got to do is write 'em!

Thank-you.
Dave.
Review By [Missingviolet] • Date [9 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven." from Tempi
Review:
A great story in an excellent series. I hope you have plans to continue the adventures of Faith and Brenda.
Comments from author:
Don't worry I have great plans for Faith at least.

Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [Tempi] • Date [9 Oct 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven." from Cmiller
Review:
Ooh... I wonder what you have in store next for our SS. Lehane. and Will Weasley cause trouble for her? Will Faith and Brenda stay together? Will Faith make Officer? Will the Reformed Council find itself interacting with Slay? Will Faith find out that She's not a Government created Super Solider but a Slayer? Will Faith ever get her memories back?

Can't wait to see what happens next to Faith.
Comments from author:
The4 next faith in the Army is a little different, but the one after that we'll see Faith start to interact more with the world of the weird!

Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [9 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten." from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
Fascinating story overall - particularly like the way Faith's slayer-skills are adapted to 'mundane' combat situations. Also enjoying the speedy updates!

Thanks :)
Comments from author:
Thank-you.
Dave.
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [8 Oct 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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