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Review of chapter "Chapter Two." from MagnusXXN
Review:
I most have glanced over it in the first chapter, but you can't award a fictional character the medal of honor. The number of living breathing people who've been awarded that honor in the last decade can be counted on two hands. I'm sure you didn't mean to, but this besmirches the men who put themselves in harms way and those who actualy gave their lives to service of this country.

Misuse of the medal, including unauthorized manufacturing or wear can be punished by 100,000 dollors or up to 1 year in prison.

I might be taking this to the extreme, but I almost lost my shit when I read that. Give your character a bronze star, silver star, Navy Achivement medal, hell give him a Navy cross. But please, not the medal of honor.

At any rate, I enjoy'd the new chapter and would love to see more soon. Poor Lance at the gate, they do tend to get flustered. Regular MP's not so much, but to fill all the posts they take Marine's from company across the camp to fill in for up to 4 months at a time.

You probably know how C/O's from non-infantry or combat plts can be like. Officer in for more then four years and not been deployed in a combat zone? Either a shitbag or a riding a desk. Either way hes gonna be real sensitive about it.

One of my past Gunnys and I hated one another almost from the get go, but even I wouldn't have talked shit to his face. Thats a sure bet to get you taken to a back room with the door closed by your NCO's. Either they'll agree with you and you'll just sit back there, or your about to get kicked around for a while.

Still curious as to who this f/f is with. Faith/Mrs. B still sounds interesting. Update soon.



): )
Comments from author:
In the film, Gunney Highway had a MoH, its sorta important to the story, he won it in Korea which I've had to gloss over or it would make him excessively old in this fic.

If you have problems with this fictional character wearing a MoH I suggest you bring it up with Clint Eastwood.

Thank-you,
Dave.
Review By [MagnusXXN] • Date [22 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two." from war
Review:
Well truthfully the movie was suppose to be about the Rangers but when they saw the script they said no way no how so I wouldn't worry about the housing they showed.

Sounds like the Gunny is gonna have a barracks party. Best way to get a troops or marines attention take their time or money away.

Hope Faith is ready to hear about Marine history and why they are so much better than the Army every time she meets a NCO or officer. To be fair some of it is true, some slight exaggeration and some is just paranoia that the Army wants them disbanded.

Good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Comments from author:
Thank-you, I know all about the marines, the 'RM's' are just the same. Being a Cavalryman I rose above it!

Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [war] • Date [22 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two." from AllenPitt
Review:
This could be a lot of fun. Hm, didn't the film involve them rescuing some med students? (It's been years since I've seen it). Could be fun if Dawn was one of them...
Gunny H & Faith, the poor recon platoon is in for a tough time of it.
Comments from author:
Med Students, yes. Towards the end of the film.

Recon needs to shape up, fast!

Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [22 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Oranda
Review:
I am so happy to see another Faith in the Army story. And maybe a little Rona and Wesley action later on as well. Can't wait to read it.
Comments from author:
Thank-you, hope it measures up to your expectations.

Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [Oranda] • Date [20 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from PATM
Review:
I've seen Heartbreak Ridge a dozen or more times and I thought the leather guitar guy was a studio add on and a useless comedy weakness to the plot of the movie. How you do this without going bad I can't wait to see.
Comments from author:
I can see where you're coming from. i always look on 'Stitch' as representing the so-called 'New Corps' (the film being pre 9-11) and having to learn that the old ways had their place...or something like that. I could havce down without some of the singing!

Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [PATM] • Date [19 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CaptainCaliene
Review:
YAY!!!! *dances happily* About fraggin' time someone did a Heartbreak Ridge X-Over, RECON RULES!!!

I am soo laughing mah aft off at poor Gunny Highway meeting Faith - oh the inuendoes will fly between her and the rest of Recon, if Gunny Highway is the 'Bionic Marine' (the song in the film was epically funny) what does that make Faith?

Keep the chapters coming, and hope to read more of the exploits of Faith, B, and the rest of Recon Platoon! HOOAH!!
Comments from author:
Thank-you, more Thursday. I hope not to disapoint.

Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [CaptainCaliene] • Date [19 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
Lovely start. I really am enjoying this series and I am so glad to see you continue it. Gunny Hightower and SSG Lahane are going to really kick some sorry Jarhead Recon butts before this story is over I believe. Lol! I also like CPL B and am glad to see her there to keep Faith in line. Lol! The ironic thing is most of the female US troopers in our various wars in 'direct action' are MPs. I look forward to another of your enjoyable stories.
Comments from author:
Well this was Faith's plan, join the MP's and get back into combat. I noticed this when I was researching what to do with Faith. Lots of girls in the MP's shooting at things!

Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [19 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Mcspender
Review:
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [19 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Mcspender
Review:
Oh, boy, a bunch of Marines and one Faith... Poor leathernecks, they never gonna know what hit them!.
Ya know, it could be cool to see Clint Eastwood character as a father figure for Faith, I mean, dude's old enough for that.
And of course, where there's a vamp, there's a pesky slayer, let's see what's Weasely gonna do about it.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Thanks, faith will earn their respect.

Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [19 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MagnusXXN
Review:
Nice to see you updating your series. Loving the title. Hope they have fun in south Carolina, I just got out four months back. One of the crappist duty stations I ever had and the whole town is Marine crazy. Dunno what a couple hooyas are going to do there. Saw your f/f, is Faith gonna hit Mrs. B? Now thats an interesting pairing.

Update soon.



): )
Comments from author:
You'll have to excuse any mistakes I make. I was in the British Army years ago, but its amazing how similar things are.

Faith/Mrs B? You have to wait and see.

Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [MagnusXXN] • Date [19 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Rich
Review:
Glad to see another episode in this series. I'm really looking forward to seeing Faith and Mrs. B "working" with the Marines - maybe in Marsoc ?
Comments from author:
Don't worry, faith and Mrs B will lead the way!

Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [Rich] • Date [19 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from war
Review:
interesting start looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
More coming later this week.

Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [war] • Date [19 Sep 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Cmiller
Review:
hmm... interesting. What happens next?
Comments from author:
Find out on Thursday!

Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [19 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AllenPitt
Review:
Wesley/Rona, trying to approach & recruit a 'new' slayer. Ouch. Rona won't recognize her of course, but Wesley sure would.
Comments from author:
He will eventually, the past is slightly different in this reality. Wes will no doubt put his foot in it!

Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [19 Sep 11] • Not Rated
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