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Xander Harris and the Goblet of Fire

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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Semet
Review:
Oh, this one I hope you continue ^^. But what about your X-Men cross, or is that one just on hold?
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying it. As for 'Xander Frost?', don't worry, I'm currently working on the next chapter, and it'll probably be up soon.
Review By [Semet] • Date [25 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Pitbull
Review:
Maybe Xander could pray to the mighty Twinkies or Janus and caused lots of chaos in Hogwarts ;)
Comments from author:
Nah, Janus likes a laugh, but for him it's more funny to watch Xander get into trouble, rather than helping him out of it.
Review By [Pitbull] • Date [25 Sep 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Fate
Review:
This is possibly one of the best Harry Potter/Buffy crosses I have read in a long while Please keep it going.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad that you're enjoying it.
Review By [Fate] • Date [25 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Killing vampires only illegal in the magical world in Europe or the UK, or would a slayer or a hunter not connected to the magical world be arrested?
Meanwhile, a difficult problem but with all of the time between challenges, Xander should get up to speed. Looking forward to seeing more of this.
Comments from author:
Killing vampires is, to the Ministry, illegal in Europe, or at least the UK. The Watcher's Council is separate, possibly even considered a terrorist group or something by them.

As for time between chapters letting Xander catch up... that won't be happening. A couple of months is not enough to bring someone up to speed on years of training, no matter how I write this. Magic and Xander will likely remain non-mixy things.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [25 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TAO
Review:
Oh no you don't....

You're not starting another cool story until you get a couple more chapters of 'Xander Frost?' in!

I'm sending some mafia plot bunnies over to motivate you!
Comments from author:
Relax, I'm about halfway through chapter four of 'Xander Frost?', this little bunny just wouldn't leave me alone and I had to shut it up somehow.
Review By [TAO] • Date [25 Sep 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from shaef
Review:
This was fun to read. Hope you write
More of it soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [shaef] • Date [25 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TurquoiseGirl
Review:
This is a great starting point. Xander was in character. I like thaf he didn't readily accept the situation and that he kept a weapon in his hands. I can't wait to see how he fares in the tournament and Wizarding world.
Comments from author:
Thanks, and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [TurquoiseGirl] • Date [25 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Narf
Review:
A good start keep up the good work thanks and bye.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad that you're enjoying it.
Review By [Narf] • Date [25 Sep 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Emerald
Review:
This story is great!! Very unique approach. I haven't read one like it yet and I loved that the hat dragged xander to hogwarts while he was stripping. I can't wait to find out what pureblood family he is from and the unique ways he will solve the tasks. Please keep writing!!
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad that you're enjoying it.
Review By [Emerald] • Date [25 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Omegaprime
Review:
Interesting start.

An amusing yet horrible timing of the cup to yank Xander over there. For a couple of moments I thought he was going to threaten the cup with the mace.

It will be interesting to see which family he is from and how he will react to said family. Will he shake up the students even more when his other side comes out (I'm looking at Draco here)? Will he kick (or do something else) Snape's butt? Will he clobber Voldy and his goons? Will he make the Wizarding world regret the day that he came there?

Can't wait to see how the tournament changes when Xander doesn't play by their rules.

Oh dear, I can see Xander keeping one or two wands that give him an explosive result.



Well, he will have a more interesting story to tell Buffy at the Bronze when he gets home.

Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
He might just do that if he ever gets near the thing.

Concerning the family, I'm actually considering a mix somewhere between the Black's and the Longbottom's at the moment (sheerly for the uniqueness of the idea). Concerning Xander's reaction to Voldemort, it probably won't be a serious issue for a while, but to Xander Voldemort doesn't really fit the role of 'Big Bad'. He hasn't even tried to end the world after all. As for the wands, I've actually got a plan for his magic that I think will work well enough.

Thanks for reviewing, and I'm glad that you're enjoying it.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [25 Sep 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LucyH
Review:
This was definitely wickedly awesome!!

At least by being so caught up in 'wtf' moment of being summoned to Scotland he hasn't realized yet that he basically gyrated in front of kids XD Hopefully none were too badly traumatized by the Xander-y goodness.

I really cannot wait to see what happens next!!


I did a quick preview of the other comments and I have to say I can totally imagine the Black family sending a squib away to the Hellmouth to unlock potential (The Malfoy family I totally see more as a straight up disowning followed by an accident type of family); not to mention I would love to see him interact with Sirius!!

Yet having him be related to the Longbottom family would give Neville a relative that's closer to his age and could, hopefully, help with his confidence. Then again making him a bastard line of Potter would be rather wicked and let Harry have a family member that can totally help him with the whole 'Chosen One' deal.


EDIT:

A two-for-one deal would be rather fun! Black and Longbottom - how much you wanna bet the portrait of Sirius' mother would wish she could roll over in her grave upon hearing that (I really doubt there would be love between the families beyond 'hey we're both pureblood so yay!').

Sort of set up the Hellmouth as a 'this is where Squibs go to survive (and hope for magic) or get munched on never to be heard from again' locale. Well that or establish that it could have been a practice for some families (or even the disowned member to go on their own) to send the unfortunate squib family members there in hopes magic is unlocked or soaked up from the energy fields since there are several Hellmouth locations around the world.
Comments from author:
I know, the possibilities are endless, and they're all so cool when you think about it. Maybe I could do a two-for-one type deal, make Xander the child of a Black and a Longbottom and let him run around with both?

As for the 'wtf' moment, thanks, that's what I was going for.

Anyway, thanks for reviewing, and I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

Edit: Yeah, their probably wouldn't have been much love, but considering that Neville's parents both seemed to be pretty powerful, then the family must have been decent enough for the Black's to allow a marriage, even if they didn't agree with the politics.

And yeah, I think the Hellmouth thing has been done in this respect, but it still works and I'm using it.
Review By [LucyH] • Date [25 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from WolfiousOne
Review:
I admit, I was dubious about the idea. But I like the start you've done and I find myself looking forward to reading some more.
Comments from author:
Really? You may be right about that, I should probably change the summary to something less 'Super!Xander-ish', problem is I suck at summaries. Eh. Anyway, thanks for reviewing and I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
Review By [WolfiousOne] • Date [25 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from EroSlackerMicha
Review:
tri-wiz tournament + Xander + HP = CHAOS!!! (insert insane cackling)

I pitty the dragon. I see Xan stealing Filch's cannon, raiding the potions stores and BOOM!
second task...potions to make depth charges and BOOM!

third task...hedges + fire or if he can get his hands on a chainsaw....

keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
No to the cannon unfortunately, Xander is restricted by the same 'wands only' rules as the others, though I can see him having one or two fantasies about getting the rocket launcher back from Buffy. The third task... I may be able to work something in.
Review By [EroSlackerMicha] • Date [25 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)ScottWanderer
Review:
This is fantastic. I love it so far.

Xander at Gringott's at the Lavelle vaults. Can see him treating the goblins with respect and earning a bit of respect there.

Xander of Olivanders, that poor, poor shop.

Xander in the lake and the sea creatures being deathly afraid of him.
Comments from author:
Thanks, and I'm not actually sure if it will be 'the Lavelles' that Xander is related to. Truth be told, I'm considering having him be the product of some other line (Black, Malfoy, maybe even Longbottom), but I haven't decided yet, so if you have an opinion please feel free to offer.

Olivander's... well that will be a bit of chaos.

I do have an idea for the lake, though I'm not sure yet which was to work it.

Thanks for reviewing and I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
Review By [(Past Donor)ScottWanderer] • Date [25 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from cathyoden
Review:
This was fun. The mace was a nice touch! I'm really looking forward Californian/American Xander's take on Hogwarts and the whole Tri-Wizard thing. Should be lots of room for fun chaos.
Comments from author:
That's what I'm hoping for.
Review By [cathyoden] • Date [25 Sep 11] • Not Rated
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