TtH • Reviews • Xander Harris and the Goblet of Fire

Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from lillyb

Review:

great work

Comments from author:

Thanks.

Review By [lillyb] • Date [17 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from slmncpm

Review:

omg his safe word is apples??? hahahahaha i love you! *hands you scones*

Comments from author:

Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying it. The scones are appreciated.

Review By [slmncpm] • Date [17 Sep 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Hecatonchires

Review:

Liked the hush moment, and safe word is apples? Happy Castle intertextual moment :)

Comments from author:

Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying it.

Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [17 Sep 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Darkstrider

Review:

You totally stole that line from Castle! Love the fic though. Wonderful!

Comments from author:

Well... yeah. Castle has the best lines. Still, glad you're enjoying it.

Review By [Darkstrider] • Date [17 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from msdarque

Review:

Awesome and interesting chapter.
I think it was definitely worth the wait. Go Xander! :D
Congrats!

Comments from author:

Thanks, I'm glad it was worth the wait.

Review By [msdarque] • Date [17 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from proofreader

Review:

You do realize there's no way Xander would just stand still and take an AK like Cedric did in canon, right? He's far more likely to shift and go hunting. He'd also probably start lobbing random items into the Voldemush pot in the hopes of really screwing over the potion of the person who pulled him there. Squirrelmort from a story on fanfiction . net comes to mind with much laughter.

Comments from author:

You think I plan to let Xander stand still and take an AK? I figure the only reason Cedric did in the first place was simple minded shock, but Xander's got some experience dealing with dark wizards (sort of).

Review By [proofreader] • Date [17 Sep 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from junnights

Review:

:D Its BRILL! - Feels like I've been waiting forever - cause its just AMAZING!:D

Comments from author:

Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying it.

Review By [junnights] • Date [17 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from eriktheviking

Review:

Well written fun alternative view of the second event.

Comments from author:

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [17 Sep 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from PsychoWing

Review:

Lol. Someone watches Castle. XD

Great chapter.

Comments from author:

Yeah, Castle has the best lines.

Review By [PsychoWing] • Date [17 Sep 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from EroSlackerMicha

Review:

(snicker)

I'm still wondering how a person you met once can be your treasure. the stupidity in the wizarding worlds takes things to a whole new level.

anyway keep up the good work

Comments from author:

I may have used the word 'treasure' just for simplification. I'm not really sure what the point of choosing friends/family/dates was.

Review By [EroSlackerMicha] • Date [17 Sep 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from AonGealach

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I love that Xander being a "squib" is still more awesome than the great wizards of the wizarding world. And I love Cedric at the end teasing Xander. Kinky my safe word is apple is a classic bit that I laughed over for about ten minutes.

Comments from author:

Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying it, though I can't take credit for the 'safe word is apples' bit.

Review By [AonGealach] • Date [17 Sep 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from calikocat

Review:

Wow...Cedric has a sense of humor. *snort* Yeah, Xander isn't jealous at all. *rolls eyes* Glad to see a chapter of this.

Comments from author:

Yeah, I figure Cedric has to have a sense of humour considering how well liked he was. And of course Xander's not jealous. Not even a little bit...

Review By [calikocat] • Date [17 Sep 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Bill

Review:

LOL! Good one!