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Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from serenityselena
Review:
nicely done...
hope to read more soon ^_^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [16 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from dreameralways
Review:
As angry as Gibbs is I hope that he realizes that he has no way of knowing for certain how Buffy feels about Hank and hurting him may just alienate her. Even if Buffy told him that she hated Hank, there is no way for Gibbs to know at this time that it isn't just anger over learning the truth talking. Also, Dawn is Buffy's sister and may (as far as Gibbs knows) be Hank's child in which case Gibbs may think that hurting Hank would make Dawn angry and in turn make Buffy angry.
Other than that, lovely story. I was so happy to see an update. I love the concept and I love the story. I just ask that you don't make it move too fast. After everything that Buffy has been through I don't think that she would be quick to trust at all. I wouldn't be surprised if she never took to calling Gibbs "dad" since everyone that she's placed in that position has failed her. I think it would take a long time, but I bet she'd accept Callen first since he couldn't be faulted in any way and would just be a victim like her. Though wanting to protect him may actually hinder their bonding.
Can't wait for more.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [13 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from (Past Donor)morgyair
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Darn...I wanted more, on the upside it keeps me intrigued!
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [12 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from SilverMidnight
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Awesome story, can't wait for more...and I can't wait to see how the new family members discover and react to Buffy's profession, :) Hope for more soon.
Review By [SilverMidnight] • Date [12 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from PhoenixRising
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I've only just come across the story after the new chapter and it's an interesting twist on the standard Buffy real family stories and I have to say I like it! Can't wait to see how NCIS/NCIS:LA teams handle the "nightlife". Please keep the updates coming!!!
Review By [PhoenixRising] • Date [12 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from JediKnight
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Very nice job on the new chapters, I hope to read more soon
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [12 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from thewrongalice
Review:
Thanks for updating. been hanging out to find out how this will pan out.
Review By [thewrongalice] • Date [11 Apr 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from divaslayer
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Awesome chapter, I loved it. I can't wait to read more.

Dani
Review By [divaslayer] • Date [11 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from (Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle
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Wonderful update! I love how it's going and I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes. Especially when Callen and Gibbs are introduced to the night life.

CT.
Review By [(Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle] • Date [11 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
Review:
interesting chapter, though a bit short. ;)
Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [11 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from Plato
Review:
Another great chapter. I hope you update again soon.
Review By [Plato] • Date [11 Apr 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from bradsan
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Darn love to read this one. Can't wait for the next update.
I'm wondering if Hank knew about Travers/ the Council and the Slayer. If he does, please let Buffy hit him. Puting her in a mental institution while knowing whats going on would be so cruel. So if he knew, let Buffy hit him or when she doesn't let her brother or real father hit him. Hard.

good writing hope you won't wait to long
Review By [bradsan] • Date [18 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from Vickzie
Review:
Wicked story! Please update asap
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [5 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from midnight
Review:
update soon
cool story
Review By [midnight] • Date [12 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from (Past Donor)morgyair
Review:
OK I am definitely intrigued....I do have on question...is this an AU without Dawn or does she appear later? OK I have the answer to my question....I can only suggest that you make it a series and have Dawn show up later.....at any rate I look forward to the next part
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [11 Dec 11] • Not Rated
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