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Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
Awesome. Also I am wondering if someone is going to show up to order them to back off from Buffy. (initiative and/or council) From what I understand of Genetics Abby would be able to tell that Gibbs is probably their father and that Buffy and the guy are brother and sister.

I can't help but be a little irked on Buffy's behalf. I wonder if you are going to get her totally pissed at Gibbs before they all discover that they are related. I also am thinking she won't believe it at first. I am also wondering why they both got kidnapped. If it was the council then they would have taken Buffy and she would have been raised a potential. I don't know much of the other show with Callen in it. Why doesn't he have any memory? Wouldn't he have memories of being raised by someone? unless he were in an accident and suffering from amnesia. Any way Looking forward to your next chapter.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing. Callen actually grew up in foster care from about the age of five. He remembers that much. What he doesn't remember is much before that, including his name, and no one from the system has really been able to tell him anything either. He's been searching for those answers for years. I hope this was at least a little bit helpful.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [6 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Eureka
Review:
Good story! Just found this story and I really like it. Good idea, and good start.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [5 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Plato
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I love that you are getting right into this and not dragging it out. I love how you are writing this and keep up the good work.
Review By [Plato] • Date [5 Oct 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Waverly
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Fun so far, I like that it jumps right into the story. What about Dawn, though? Is she not in this? And if she is, she's made from Buffy's blood, so she'd be Gibbs' daughter too.
Can't wait for the next one!
Review By [Waverly] • Date [5 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from dreameralways
Review:
Interesting way to get the DNA tested, but honestly, they didn't need to get Callen's. It would technically be on file for exclusionary purposes. If it were going to court they would want a fresh sample to be sure of non-contamination, but in this situation, it wouldn't really be necessary to get a fresh sample.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [5 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from bradsan
Review:
Yeah what "Lee"said.

update soon. Pleaaaaaaaaase
Review By [bradsan] • Date [5 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from lee
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Oh, man! You can't leave us hanging. Beg, beg.

I'm enjoying this. It was nice or you to give Cullen a past.
Review By [lee] • Date [5 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from (Past Donor)pinkhairedharry
Review:
hehehehe

great update
Review By [(Past Donor)pinkhairedharry] • Date [5 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from andiesimmo
Review:
i love this thank you so much please update soon :)
Review By [andiesimmo] • Date [5 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MarcusRowland
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To lose one child is unfortunate. To lose three smacks of carelessness...
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [5 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter two" from thewrongalice
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Looking forward to where this is going - I love Callen's character.
Review By [thewrongalice] • Date [4 Oct 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter two" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
I am guessing Gibbs and Callen don't know they are related? I wonder how that will be discovered.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [4 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter two" from dreameralways
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The smart thing for Giles to do would be to immediately get on the phone and get the Council lawyers involved. It's not like it would be suspicious since she's a major player in a powerful organization. Even if they played it as just her being high up in a school board, there would still be reasons to get her a lawyer asap. I look forward to more.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [4 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter two" from Plato
Review:
Keep it up! Can't wait for more!
Review By [Plato] • Date [4 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
Review:
Great start! I looked at the summary and thought "How are they going to sell that idea?" But you have done really well. Was it the watcher's council that stole the kids or someone else?
I can't wait till they find out their family relationship!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [3 Oct 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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