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Review of chapter "Waking" from Vickzie
Review:
Really cool story. Please update some more soon
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [5 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Waking" from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
Review:
This is a wonderful beginning. I am looking forward to reading more of this story.
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [4 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Waking" from wjenks
Review:
hope you continue this.
Review By [wjenks] • Date [4 Oct 11] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Waking" from (Past Donor)zima
Review:
I like it and I hope that he will remember more of his past life.
Comments from author:
That's the plan. Maybe not in the next chapter but after that I hope.
Review By [(Past Donor)zima] • Date [4 Oct 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Waking" from Almadynis
Review:
Interesting. Looking forward to how you continue.
Comments from author:
Me too ;)
Review By [Almadynis] • Date [4 Oct 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Waking" from Fyrloche
Review:
Very good so far. An elven child would be looked after very carefully. Xander is about to get a very large adopted family. Uncle Aragorn can teach him how to use a sword and Uncle Legolis can teach him how to shoot a bow.
Comments from author:
Always nice to get ideas!
Review By [Fyrloche] • Date [4 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Waking" from DarthPayne
Review:
You just love using cliffhangers, don't ya. :)
Comments from author:
Wasn't my meaning. :) Just seemed like a good way to end a chapter and I don't have a good continuation ready yet.
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [4 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Waking" from nightowl
Review:
Love this. I hope to see more.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [nightowl] • Date [4 Oct 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: The Valar" from Fate
Review:
I'm truly excited to see another Xander in Middle Earth story. I hope you continue it.
Review By [Fate] • Date [4 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Waking" from lillyb
Review:
very good start, looking forward to more.
Review By [lillyb] • Date [4 Oct 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: The Valar" from Wandmaker
Review:
Wonderful start to this story - but since you did request a review: What gives Xander much of his charm, besides his inherent sweetness and bravery - are the many ways he reacts to his friends and the pop culture around him. If you take away his memories, you end up taking away much of the fun. Remember, just some kid with new memories of being an elfling (with occasional twinges of past memories) isn't really Xander anymore. He'll be sweet and lovable, sure...but without the self-awareness of the original Xander. Also, remember the fun of crossovers comes from combining the sensibilities of different fandoms. The old fish-out-of-water thingie that we all love.

In any case, looking forward to the next chapter!
Comments from author:
Thanks for your thoughts. This is my first fanfic ever so I will think about it. His memories will come back gradually is my plan and get more BTVS feel around ju longer it goes but harder to if you get my meaning. I always like ideeas that may or may not be what I want. :)
Review By [Wandmaker] • Date [3 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: The Valar" from MathiasBlue
Review:
please continue this looks like it'll be interesting XD
Review By [MathiasBlue] • Date [3 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: The Valar" from Jaylynn
Review:
I hope you do continue this, it seems like an interesting start.
Review By [Jaylynn] • Date [3 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: The Valar" from purrfus
Review:
Interesting set up.

Xander. Reborn in a world without Twinkies? If not for the loved part it would seem more like torture than reward.
Comments from author:
Heh.. maybe there can be a substitute for Twinkies later on? :)
Review By [purrfus] • Date [3 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: The Valar" from DarthPayne
Review:
An interesting start. :)
Comments from author:
The beginning is the hardest!
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [3 Oct 11] • Not Rated
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