Very good so far. An elven child would be looked after very carefully. Xander is about to get a very large adopted family. Uncle Aragorn can teach him how to use a sword and Uncle Legolis can teach him how to shoot a bow.
Comments from author:
Always nice to get ideas!
Review By [Fyrloche] • Date [4 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review By [lillyb] • Date [4 Oct 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: The Valar" from Wandmaker
Review:
Wonderful start to this story - but since you did request a review: What gives Xander much of his charm, besides his inherent sweetness and bravery - are the many ways he reacts to his friends and the pop culture around him. If you take away his memories, you end up taking away much of the fun. Remember, just some kid with new memories of being an elfling (with occasional twinges of past memories) isn't really Xander anymore. He'll be sweet and lovable, sure...but without the self-awareness of the original Xander. Also, remember the fun of crossovers comes from combining the sensibilities of different fandoms. The old fish-out-of-water thingie that we all love.
In any case, looking forward to the next chapter!
Comments from author:
Thanks for your thoughts. This is my first fanfic ever so I will think about it. His memories will come back gradually is my plan and get more BTVS feel around ju longer it goes but harder to if you get my meaning. I always like ideeas that may or may not be what I want. :)
Review By [Wandmaker] • Date [3 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: The Valar" from MathiasBlue
Review:
please continue this looks like it'll be interesting XD
Review By [MathiasBlue] • Date [3 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: The Valar" from Jaylynn
Review:
I hope you do continue this, it seems like an interesting start.