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Review of chapter "A new Ship..." from Fayari
Review:
Wait, what DD version are you playing?
Comments from author:
3.5, 4 doesn't lend itself well to this sort of adaption...
Review By [Fayari] • Date [23 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A new Ship..." from michaelangelo
Review:
Hah! haven't played D&D in oooh must be 25 years now. I do remember how useful a Decanter of endless water was, especially on a ship, the three best uses being sustenance, ship defense and emergency propulsion.
Comments from author:
Well i hope you enjoyed it, the game or the story either one...
Review By [michaelangelo] • Date [22 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A new Ship..." from (Recent Donor)Peaslums
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While it's a decently written D&D story, it almost seems like Xander is an after thought. I'm getting the vibe that you have your own character and after playing, you just toss Xander into the same spot without too much reworking. It's not done badly; it just seems like it would be smoother as a D&D non-crossover.
Comments from author:
aah, No... not true, but if you think you could pull it off better Please feel free to write your own version. I would love to see what you come up with.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Peaslums] • Date [22 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A new Ship..." from valdimarian
Review:
Good call on the ship over the loot, while the loot is easier to sell, the ship is worth more money overall... plus you know, easy transportation.

On feed items, I usually go with an Everful Mug and the matching Everlasting Rations if money is tight, but the refilling skein and 'spoon o' gruel' works too. Of course my favorite is a Ring of Sustenance, 2.5k and you don't need to eat or drink, and can get a night's rest in 2 hours.

Shame he didn't have the 2k for a Field Provisions Box, that'd feed and water the party, the party's familiars, and the Cohort of minions in one item.
Comments from author:
actually the loot and reward from the Pirates camp came out to slightly more than the value of the boat, but it was decided that we needed transportation more than we needed money... there are a lot of different options for keeping the crew and party fed, but with the limited funds and lack of actual material in the shop this was what he managed... and yes the Pro-box is always useful to have on hand... but at the moment he barely has to copper to rub together.
Review By [valdimarian] • Date [22 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A new Ship..." from Nuklear
Review:
why do I picture Xander walking down the street dressed as Jack Sparrow now
Comments from author:
not quite as bedecked with nick-nacks... he is actually closer to captain Jack Aubry's uniform from Master and Commander, but in Red not Blue... and less tassel's, any added 'Flair' may come later on...
Review By [Nuklear] • Date [22 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A new Ship..." from tchizek
Review:
Lol, very nice, Captain Xander it is then lads!

Great story so far, keep up the good work!
Comments from author:
I'm glad you are enjoying it.
Review By [tchizek] • Date [22 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "an introduction to the new world..." from Zyanadryn
Review:
great first chapter. and i sooo agree on seeing xander as a rougue, he has done much in cannon that could be seen as such!
Review By [Zyanadryn] • Date [22 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A new Ship..." from Infinix
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This is getting interesting. Sailor profession huh? I had kinda thought Xander and been reclassed as something like a pirate subclass of rogue. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Nope, but he does manage to pick up some swashbuckler classes...
Review By [Infinix] • Date [22 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A new Ship..." from Bobboky
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awesome, very awesome
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [22 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A new Ship..." from Orchamus
Review:
Pretty good chapter, got some more combat experience and got himself a class of sorts, not to mention a boat.
Comments from author:
yup, a class that he doesn't understand and a boat that he can't sail... ooh the wonders of the Scooby Luck...
Review By [Orchamus] • Date [22 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A new Ship..." from Toras
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Excellent story. I just found this today, and am enjoying greatly. Brings back memories of playing D&D way back when, and yes the damn sahaugin suck. I can remember loosing more than a few characters to them at the low lvl. :) Keep up the great work, I look forward to seeing where you go with this.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [Toras] • Date [22 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A new Day..." from SariLane
Review:
I've been playing D&D since I was 8... I LOVE this story. Damn fish man... Can't wait for an update.
Comments from author:
there ya go.
Review By [SariLane] • Date [8 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A new Day..." from Morgomir
Review:
Great story. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [4 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A new Day..." from Elleria
Review:
Love this.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [9 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A new Day..." from Downery
Review:
Next stop waiting another half year for an update. Decent start but loses it's appeal when you realize how long you'll have to wait for more.
Comments from author:
Alright, I was working on the next chapter but, if you want I'll put it up until September or so...
Review By [Downery] • Date [8 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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