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Review of chapter "Across the Rainbow Bridge, part IV" from Blackguard
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I would suggest the superhero name Solarus, fits with the whole sun powered thing, and to the best of my knowledge no one else is currently named that.

Great chapter, I eagerly await the descent of the Black Lanterns.
Review By [Blackguard] • Date [30 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Across the Rainbow Bridge, part IV" from Riniko
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Well, that was a dreadful end, you killed Hot Pursuit and left them stuck in the past. At least it is only half a day back and they could just hide out til they catch up to themselves. As to a name, maybe Nova. Just don't let it be some joke that sticks.
Review By [Riniko] • Date [30 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Across the Rainbow Bridge, part IV" from HMaxMarius
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I think Karen should choose a name that honors the friends she left behind in Sunnydale...

what that might be???

Possibles:
Rowan
Xandra (Hey... Alexander is 'Defender of Man')
Buffy (after-all, she was his hero)
Chase (nah, he wasn't dating her yet)
Watcher
Ripper
Calendar Girl :P..
Review By [HMaxMarius] • Date [30 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Across the Rainbow Bridge, part IV" from BoosterBronze
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Interesting chapter, Patty is dead, Layla's left in the past with an unconcious Irma and an unleashed unknown number of black lanterns incoming, Karen, Kara and Kal are facing the Atlantean armada, things look ready to get really fun in the next chapter.

On the note of a name...Why not go for something simple and mostly gender neutral? Hope springs to mind, especially given man of steel. It's something separate that she can make her own, it seems to reflect her outlook, hoping to be a better person than Divine, hoping to make Kara proud, etc. It's not something that will beat her over the head with her 'semi-new' gender.

Though I suppose if you want something closer to Clark or Kara's names you could go for 'Ultra Girl' (though I think a marvel character mayve used that name though I think she might be dead).
Review By [BoosterBronze] • Date [30 Mar 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Across the Rainbow Bridge, part IV" from stardrow
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you could go with the theme and name karen Supergirl?
Review By [stardrow] • Date [30 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Across the Rainbow Bridge, part IV" from ellf
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Speaking as someone who's read this from the beginning, I suggest that Karen goes with a variation on the theme. Since Nightwing and Flamebird are both Kryptonian legends, and Nightwing _doesn't_ fit Karen... Have her go with Flamebird.

It also fits with Irma becoming Phoenix.
Review By [ellf] • Date [30 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interlude: Problems" from draconis
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Perhaps I just don't have enough in-depth knowledge of all the Marvel-verse stories/characters, but I can't figure out what the other 'problems' are with which you conclude this chapter. As an interlude, that left me more a tiny bit miffed, rather than whetting my appetite for more. (although, I do look forward to more in this story, it isn't because of this chapter.)

Assuming we know the verse well, was this chapter meant to provide us enough info to 'know' what those problems were, or just to tell us they now know they have other, unidentified 'problems' they too, can't explicitly identify? (which wouldn't make sense)

...Unless you were simply telling us they now realize the Skrull are still around when they had previously thought they weren't? If that was the intent of the interlude, it just wasn't clear enough since you tossed in the bit about an alternate verse's Green Lantern ring. That muddied things up quite a bit from my perspective. As I said, perhaps it's because I don't know the verse in sufficient detail...but more info might have helped me get there.
Review By [draconis] • Date [24 Mar 14] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Interlude: Problems" from arturusoriginal
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Wow....great chapter. Left me wanting more and when you get right down to it that's all you ask from a story.
Review By [arturusoriginal] • Date [23 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Interlude: Problems" from raxadian
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Ah yes, cause a single problem is never enough, right?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [10 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scattered, Part II" from raxadian
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Good old Captain, telling us what makes an hero when we are down.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [10 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interlude: Problems" from lunalurker
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Dun dun dunnnnnnnn! *ominous music*

Looking forward to more!
Review By [lunalurker] • Date [10 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interlude: Problems" from Chikageko
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The hell would you just post such a short bloody snippet for??Bah.

Edit 1: I read that before posting. Still annoyed.
Comments from author:
I explained my reasons for doing so in the author's note.
Review By [Chikageko] • Date [10 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interlude: Problems" from CageFire
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Okay chapter. I'll be looking forward to the next one.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [10 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interlude: Problems" from AllenPitt
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Skrull invasion. Yep, that's a problem.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [10 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interlude: Problems" from Kaosreign
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So I assume that the jig is up for Sinestro? I do hope you find a way to stop Pandora given the mess she unleashes with the Evil JL.
Comments from author:
I can neither confirm nor deny reports that any jigs may or may not be up.

But yeah, I have no plans whatever for the Evil JL, given that when this is all over, the nDCU will not have ever existed.
Review By [Kaosreign] • Date [10 Mar 14] • Not Rated
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