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Review of chapter "Across the Rainbow Bridge, part IV" from LostDragon
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Great chapter! As for a Hero name I thought of "Defender". Why you mat ask? Alexander neans Defender of Man. It would be a great homage to both his current life and past.
Just a thought.
Review By [LostDragon] • Date [7 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Across the Rainbow Bridge, part IV" from MageMan
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Karen/Kara: "Wonder Twins power activate! Form of Captain Krypton!"

Captain Krypton: *blazes into existence* "By your powers combined...!"

No, you'd have to add three more power girls, it's
Karen/Kara: *pose* "Fus~~ion~~ HA!"
Power Girl with alternating brunette and blonde hair
Comments from author:
Please accept this coupon for a free internet.
Review By [MageMan] • Date [3 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Across the Rainbow Bridge, part IV" from Hecatonchires
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Strong Chick
Miss Ogynist
Superzeppo
Power Other Girl (pog!)

None of these are serious :)
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [1 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Across the Rainbow Bridge, part IV" from SapphireSparks
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Personally, I think Nightwing has worked pretty well. It has a nice feel with Karen dating a Phoenix. Maybe try doing a scene with Dick passing on the mantle, and see if it work.

I can't think of any names that would work. Pretty much anything that isn't from, or an homage to, Buffy or Superman canon is going to have an annoying OC quality to it that Karen doesn't really deserve. Supergirl could be fun, maybe. There is the final villain from the Earth Angel Supergirl series; the stupidly powerful demon Xenon who's goal was killing all Supergirls in the multiverse. That might be fun just for the possibility of that huge ham showing up for a fight.

Mostly, I think if you can't think of a name that doesn't feel like it works natural into the story don't worry about it.

Just an odd thought I was having; is this story going to pick up a chibi-Batman out of the chaos of the Black Lantern stuff?
Review By [SapphireSparks] • Date [1 Apr 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Across the Rainbow Bridge, part IV" from TheKnightofFaerie
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I'd suggest something to do with rebirth. The problem is the only things I can find are the pheonix (already taken) and various deities. This theme would be appropriate since Xander/Karen has been reborn, twice. Once in the body of Power Girl, and a second time by choice in the body of Kara's clone.

Alternatively, since Xander is a joker at heart for much of the early Buffy seasons taking his/her sense of humor into account something to do with the fair folk could work, maybe. Such as Titania, a name which would tie into Xander/Karen's supernatural origins while still sounding like a powerhouse type name. Titania is one name used at times for the Queen of Faerie. She's known to lead the seelie court, which is the 'good' (or at least neutral) fae. By all accounts, rather powerful. And as with most seelie fae, can be rather whimsical. A Midsummer Night's Dream is a good example of her whimsical side.

Not that Titania isn't serious too. According to some legends the wyld hunt is held so that Titania can give a mortal to Hell as tribute to maintain her power. This would tie in nicely with his/her origins on the hellmouth. One could say that Xander Harris was sacrificed to the hellmouth. And then the giving up of a way home could also be considered to tie into the theme. The color scheme for a costume would likely be forest greens and browns.
Review By [TheKnightofFaerie] • Date [31 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Across the Rainbow Bridge, part IV" from michaelangelo
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Stellar, Gemini, Valkyrie or Supernova for names. So the black lanterns cometh huh? fun times, pity they can't trick them into flying into a black hole or something eh.
Review By [michaelangelo] • Date [31 Mar 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Across the Rainbow Bridge, part IV" from raxadian
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Okay, let's see...

Andromeda?

Andromeda was the name used by one Alternate version of Super girl, I dunno if she exists in current continuity since she was a member of the Legion of superheroes. Probably not.

Galaxy?

I like Galaxy, is not a name used by any Superhero in the DC universe or in the Marvel Universe.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [30 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Across the Rainbow Bridge, part IV" from Mediancat
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How about "Superhuman?"
Review By [Mediancat] • Date [30 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Across the Rainbow Bridge, part IV" from Jimbobob
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Oh boy, zombie lanterns a'comin.

Very nice chapter.
Review By [Jimbobob] • Date [30 Mar 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Across the Rainbow Bridge, part IV" from AllenPitt
Review:
Solaria, maybe? As long it isn't "Karen/Kara--The Wonder Twins!"
Comments from author:
Karen/Kara: "Wonder Twins power activate! Form of Captain Krypton!"

Captain Krypton: *blazes into existence* "By your powers combined...!"
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [30 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Across the Rainbow Bridge, part IV" from Oakheart
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Whew. Wow. Way to amp up the action!

Karen should take the name, 'Nike'.

Despite minor affiliations with athletic wear, it is the name of the Greek Goddess
of Victory. You could go Roman, but 'Invictus' is not a word that trips off the lips
so readily (market recognition, you know).

SD
Review By [Oakheart] • Date [30 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Across the Rainbow Bridge, part IV" from CageFire
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Awesome story, keep up the excellent work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [30 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Across the Rainbow Bridge, part IV" from Kaosreign
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I blame the Phoenix for what is to come, I really do. It is probably the most prone to violent mood swings of the Marvel Cosmic entities that and I think it's single mindedness is more of a hindrance than a benefit most of the time but that just my opinion. I do hope Layla knows a thing or two about temporal mechanics or that damn time loop isn't going nowhere anytime soon.
Review By [Kaosreign] • Date [30 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Across the Rainbow Bridge, part IV" from (Recent Donor)Deamondeathstone
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Marvel has a Superman analogue in Hyperion, right?
So why not Hyperia or you could go the easy way and call her Supergirl if there isn't a local superhero using that name.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Deamondeathstone] • Date [30 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Across the Rainbow Bridge, part IV" from Blackguard
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I would suggest the superhero name Solarus, fits with the whole sun powered thing, and to the best of my knowledge no one else is currently named that.

Great chapter, I eagerly await the descent of the Black Lanterns.
Review By [Blackguard] • Date [30 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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