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Review of chapter "Moony Smells a Rat" from Salric
Review:
You know, I've never seen that particular sequence for Remus discovering Peter. I've seen him see the newspaper article, but I've never seen him be approached after Scabbers disappears.
Comments from author:
Neither had I, but it’s always nice to hear it confirmed. Then again, I’ve not read that much HP fanfic that I can call myself an expert.

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Review By [Salric] • Date [18 Jan 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Payback's a bitch" from DofEire
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I do love how you write Dumbledore. The comment about Dawn made me snicker rather loudly.
Comments from author:
I fear I’m confused, is Dawn mentioned in this chapter? Or was it in an earlier one?

I find I must write Dumbledore differently than canon. Or I’ll kill him…
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Review By [DofEire] • Date [17 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Twins and Peers" from starwolf
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it was obvious that the Humongous Gazongas, famed for bringing men together in mutual admiration, had worked their miracle.
well put, and any normal raised student would definitely agree. great chapter, thanks
Comments from author:
Yup, let's hear it for Humongous Gazongas!

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Review By [starwolf] • Date [12 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Payback's a bitch" from spikesplayfulpet
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This is my first review for this story. Just wanted to say that I love it and its a great story. I read Luna and the Dark Portrait awhile ago and for some reason didn't realize that you had a sequel. I reread read Luna and the Dark Portrait ( a great story in itself by the way), and then started on this one. This is a really nice tie in with all of the Scooby Gang and the Wizarding World. I like that the Cup is going to be different and that not just 3 people are going to be singled out. Keep up the great writing and I will be awaiting your next update.
Comments from author:
And I thank you for it. I fear that for a better understanding of the whole you'll need to read the rest of Waif's and strays, which is huge.

But I'm glad you enjoy it and that you think that everybody and not just the Trio should get a chance at a better life.

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Review By [spikesplayfulpet] • Date [4 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Payback's a bitch" from Eureka
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Love the new chapter Vid. So no more prank war, the cup has changed to all the schools and all the years...gonna miss the pranks but that teh Cup is being changed is a very good thing. Kinda do wonder when they are going to realize that Scabbers is not dead and find Peter instead.
Here's to hoping that all things are going good for you and yours and that the next chapter is soonish.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Well, these are proposals on how to change the Cup, Nothing is sure yet...

Things got worse for a bit, but are looking up again, considering. Thanks for caring and asking.

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Review By [Eureka] • Date [27 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Payback's a bitch" from Senko
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Interesting chapter although the break between the meeting about Scanners and te one with Oamona seemed a bit abrupt. Hope they reveal peter and I can't help but wonder why with all these smart people no one ever questioned the fact that out of all the small familiars Crookshanks ONLY targetted that three legged rat.

Should ve interesting to see how the changes to the cup affect things.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Originally they were in different chapters. Interesting, is it not? Then again the books hang together from Idiot plots...

If they can convince the other schools and various tradiotnalists to go along with it...

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Review By [Senko] • Date [26 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Payback's a bitch" from TroyGuffey
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Good chapter, up to your nicely high standard.

Especially loved how Sprout decreed the end of the prank war.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Sprout is a formidable lady. I always think of her as the Nanny Ogg of the Wizarding World.

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Review By [TroyGuffey] • Date [26 Sep 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Owls and Kneazles" from asqwerth
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Argh.

It's been so long I've forgotten some of the familial connections! Was Trelawny related to any of the Sunnydale gang? I've forgotten.

Previously you gave us a forum link with the family tree, but the link's dead now.

Still a wonderful series of stories.
Comments from author:
Not to worry, the long promised background notes will be going up soon. Trelawney is not related to the Sunnydale gang. Hermione is a distant cousin of Simons, Kendra may or may not be a cousin to the Dumbledores, and the Grangers are related to Moaning Myrtle.

The forum is dead I fear.:-( Glendon set it up, but too few people posted there to keep it alive.

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Review By [asqwerth] • Date [25 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Payback's a bitch" from musumenosuoh
Review:
lol awesome so far, as always! very much looking forward to more!
Comments from author:
Thank you. I'm concentrating on two other W&S stories, so it may be a bit, but the series is moving again.

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Review By [musumenosuoh] • Date [25 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Payback's a bitch" from ChaosLady
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I like the pranks that Remus pulled on Snape. Excellent update!
Comments from author:
Yup, Remus was good at them, even if he felt guilty. And now they need to kiss and make up, preferably in front of Sirius.

Cue apoplexy...

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Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [25 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Payback's a bitch" from AllenPitt
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The Snape/Lupin prank war is finally over? Thank God. heh. I like the variants you put in for the Triwizard tournament. As if the wizarding world would ever use common sense... then again Barty's entire plan was insane-o, as all he really needed to do was trick HP into touching a port key, presumably outside of Hogwarts grounds...? ...Not THAT hard.
Now, if Sirius surfaces, Snape might actually listen to Lupin instead of ignoring him. Though the joy of finally 'getting' a Marauder would be hard to give up. And SB won't be happy with Lupin getting along with Snape, I'd think. SB never really had a chance to grow up, emotionally he's still a guy just out of Hogwarts.
Looking forward to Sybil's father showing up.
Comments from author:
Indeed. It might soon have spilled over into a Sprout Flitwick one, and that had to be avoided at all cost...

We shall see what eventually happens with the Tournament, but sense is not part of the wizarding make up apparently...

One of the many things that made me wonder what the heck JKR was thinking...

Severus and Sirius have issues, let's leave it at that. ;-) Sirius is stuck in the past and needs to move to the future. That will be one of the things I shall address. For that matter, the same goes for Severus and Albus, and in a sense, Remus.

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Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [25 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Things to do in Hogwarts when you're dead" from Christy
Review:
Loving this so far-can't wait for more
Comments from author:
Thank you. If everything goes according to plan the next chapter will be up Saturday or next Wednesday.

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Review By [Christy] • Date [10 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Things to do in Hogwarts when you're dead" from AllenPitt
Review:
Nice scene with Kreacher. The Black sisters taking care of the mansion, good idea. Who knows maybe they'll finally open up Regulus' old room and find something interesting. (an old letter etc?).
Comments from author:
Thank you. The sisters, as the last surviving Blacks, may be able to get some of the family homes liveable before Sirius needs them. And neither of them has been there since Walburga died, Andromeda because she felt unwelcome there and the surviving family members would not have approved, Narcissa uncomfortable, since Walburga's portrait was obviously insane...

And Narcissa, who knows her House elves, ordered Kreacher to tell her about any standing orders, that includes destroying the locket. (And as you may have seen, Kreacher likes Narcissa...)

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Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [6 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Things to do in Hogwarts when you're dead" from harcroft
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I'm wondering what Wolf's Bane is. It's probably not Wolfsbane, so I can't help but wonder if it's a cure for Remus's Lycanthropy.

edit- whoops. Still, what exactly does Wolfs Balm do different from Wolfsbane?
Comments from author:
Wolf's balm, I think? If so, a balm is a soothing lotion or salve, rubbed in firmly. A balm can also be used generally as a term for something soothing or relaxing.

(Not being condescending, the word explains a great deal of your question.)


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Review By [harcroft] • Date [6 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Things to do in Hogwarts when you're dead" from evilredknight
Review:
Good chapter.
Comments from author:
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Review By [evilredknight] • Date [6 Sep 13] • Not Rated
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