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Luna Lovegood and the Shaggy Dog

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Review of chapter "Payback's a bitch" from musumenosuoh
Review:
lol awesome so far, as always! very much looking forward to more!
Comments from author:
Thank you. I'm concentrating on two other W&S stories, so it may be a bit, but the series is moving again.

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Review By [musumenosuoh] • Date [25 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Payback's a bitch" from ChaosLady
Review:
I like the pranks that Remus pulled on Snape. Excellent update!
Comments from author:
Yup, Remus was good at them, even if he felt guilty. And now they need to kiss and make up, preferably in front of Sirius.

Cue apoplexy...

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Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [25 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Payback's a bitch" from AllenPitt
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The Snape/Lupin prank war is finally over? Thank God. heh. I like the variants you put in for the Triwizard tournament. As if the wizarding world would ever use common sense... then again Barty's entire plan was insane-o, as all he really needed to do was trick HP into touching a port key, presumably outside of Hogwarts grounds...? ...Not THAT hard.
Now, if Sirius surfaces, Snape might actually listen to Lupin instead of ignoring him. Though the joy of finally 'getting' a Marauder would be hard to give up. And SB won't be happy with Lupin getting along with Snape, I'd think. SB never really had a chance to grow up, emotionally he's still a guy just out of Hogwarts.
Looking forward to Sybil's father showing up.
Comments from author:
Indeed. It might soon have spilled over into a Sprout Flitwick one, and that had to be avoided at all cost...

We shall see what eventually happens with the Tournament, but sense is not part of the wizarding make up apparently...

One of the many things that made me wonder what the heck JKR was thinking...

Severus and Sirius have issues, let's leave it at that. ;-) Sirius is stuck in the past and needs to move to the future. That will be one of the things I shall address. For that matter, the same goes for Severus and Albus, and in a sense, Remus.

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Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [25 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Things to do in Hogwarts when you're dead" from Christy
Review:
Loving this so far-can't wait for more
Comments from author:
Thank you. If everything goes according to plan the next chapter will be up Saturday or next Wednesday.

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Review By [Christy] • Date [10 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Things to do in Hogwarts when you're dead" from AllenPitt
Review:
Nice scene with Kreacher. The Black sisters taking care of the mansion, good idea. Who knows maybe they'll finally open up Regulus' old room and find something interesting. (an old letter etc?).
Comments from author:
Thank you. The sisters, as the last surviving Blacks, may be able to get some of the family homes liveable before Sirius needs them. And neither of them has been there since Walburga died, Andromeda because she felt unwelcome there and the surviving family members would not have approved, Narcissa uncomfortable, since Walburga's portrait was obviously insane...

And Narcissa, who knows her House elves, ordered Kreacher to tell her about any standing orders, that includes destroying the locket. (And as you may have seen, Kreacher likes Narcissa...)

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Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [6 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Things to do in Hogwarts when you're dead" from harcroft
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I'm wondering what Wolf's Bane is. It's probably not Wolfsbane, so I can't help but wonder if it's a cure for Remus's Lycanthropy.

edit- whoops. Still, what exactly does Wolfs Balm do different from Wolfsbane?
Comments from author:
Wolf's balm, I think? If so, a balm is a soothing lotion or salve, rubbed in firmly. A balm can also be used generally as a term for something soothing or relaxing.

(Not being condescending, the word explains a great deal of your question.)


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Review By [harcroft] • Date [6 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Things to do in Hogwarts when you're dead" from evilredknight
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Good chapter.
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Review By [evilredknight] • Date [6 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Things to do in Hogwarts when you're dead" from megat
Review:
So glad to see a new chapter I really like this story and how the characters have developed it is a fun story and I want to find out how things develop
Comments from author:
Happy to oblige. Busily working at the next few chapters of this and others.


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Review By [megat] • Date [6 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Things to do in Hogwarts when you're dead" from Senko
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Snicker even as a ghost a girl needs to be careful about being above a guy in a skirt.

I was really hoping Peter would get exposed during that class be a bit hard to deny his being alive in front of that many witnesses and it should really get the investigation going into what really happened back then.

So Luna managed the potion and I'll bet Snape's kicking himself over the answer being that simple, wonder how Remus will react when told of its existence.

Finally I think there's something missing in this chapter in the following section . . .

“They’d have to be to make up for Xeno,” Remus muttered.

“And what is that supposed to mean?” he asked mildly.

“Have you ever seen wards designed by a Master Arithmancer?” Snape retorted.

You have Remus saying Selene's wards would have to be something special to make up for Xenophilius and then both a mild question and a sharp retort presumably coming from Snape at the same time.
Comments from author:
Never can be too careful about who you flash!

Fudge would probably be willing to accept he's alive, since Sirius got no trial or questioning. I noticed that despite everything the Wizarding World seems exceptionally male dominated. Hence my conclusion that male Potions Masters would probably ignore that very simple difference between male and female.

And it looks like you're right, and I can 't remember what I wrote. I shall ponder it and change it later.


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Review By [Senko] • Date [5 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Things to do in Hogwarts when you're dead" from ChaosLady
Review:
LMOA about Snape talking about Myrtle's "ghostly knickers". I read that part aloud to mother, she laughed too. Excellent update!
Comments from author:
Glad I managed to be amusing. I always wonder if I succeed. (Glad your mother liked it too)


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Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [5 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Things to do in Hogwarts when you're dead" from musumenosuoh
Review:
lmao! awesome chapter! very much looking forward to more! hope all is well!
Comments from author:
Thank you. It was nice to write. Things are slowly going better again.


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Review By [musumenosuoh] • Date [5 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Things to do in Hogwarts when you're dead" from WolfWriter
Review:
Flobberworms have teeth???

Poor Draco, he just can't catch a break when it comes to animals.

Glad to see that you're posting again; I've missed this little ditty.
Comments from author:
A little known fact. They need some way to hunt down those wild lettuces... The Bedell family seems unable to do much with them, no.

It is fun to write on occasion.


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Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [5 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Things to do in Hogwarts when you're dead" from FireWolfe
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I was so excited to see this I almost did the Snoopy dance. Well done great chapter more soon and I hope they catch Peter and clear Sirius. PLus it be good if he learns he is wrong about Snape and remus thats just a disturbing image.
Comments from author:
Now that would have been a sight to see... That would be the best outcome for some, yes. Nah, Sirius will be better for thinking that. IT will give him a reason to get the psychological help he needs...


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Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [5 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "You've got mail" from PATM
Review:
these convoluted machinations...whew! Some how I know that the kids are going to have a great big laugh. I also miss the point on these sneaky stories however much I love reading yours. I read for the thrill.
Comments from author:
Heh. More thrill will follow. But the wizarding world is convoluted. Think of all the weird plots Riddle thought up...

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Review By [PATM] • Date [4 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "You've got mail" from CPTSkip
Review:
Yet another wonderful update. It took me a while to finish reading this chapter. I had to stop reading many times I was laughing too hard to see clearly enough to continue reading. The whole Snape prankwar, "Blacky's" continuing travails, just your whole version of Hogwarts and her faculty amuse the heck out of me. Thanks for writing and I look forward to reading more.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed the humour. In my current mood, or at least when I worte it, it is difficult to say if things are actually funny. At teh moment Hogwarts is a bit of comic relief, but things will get darker soon...

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Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [3 Jun 13] • Not Rated
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