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Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from trongod
Review:
liking this, although I truly hope that Casey knows enough to brief the other two into the Night Bump Backers, Inc., as represented in Xander, Buffy, and Dawn. The typical Marvel version of heros going head to head until they realize they are in fact The Good Guys gets real old, real fast.

Casey strikes me as the type of guy that would know about the night life, and smart enough to quietly research it and find out the groups/people that are actively fighting it, so he'd be a natural to start things off. Their overall boss can then take over and fully brief them; the presence of the Slayer, the White Knight, and whatever they call Dawn would be of major concern to their organization - especially if they aren't sure that this wasn't a soft probe into Chuck, or some sort of first contact attempt - either of which would seriously scare the Hell out of knowledgeable folks, considering the Sunnydale crew's past cases...
Comments from author:
I'm not going to have Casey know what goes bump in the night. For me a whole part of this story would be to familiarize Operation Bartowski with the supernatural.
Review By [trongod] • Date [14 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from TurfSurfer
Review:
This is very relevant to my interests. Proceed. :3
Review By [TurfSurfer] • Date [14 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from ColdFuzzions
Review:
Nice.

Hmm.. I am curious what the result will be.

Thank you for sharing.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review!
Review By [ColdFuzzions] • Date [14 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Past Donor)pinkhairedharry
Review:
Yay more

Casey just happened to be running errands?

Xander should know better but... he wouldn't be Xander if he didn't say things that get him in trouble.

Great update.
Comments from author:
As the Casey running errands, he had something personal to do. If you are familiar with season 3 of Chuck, you may be able to think of what he was doing. It may or may not come into play later as I have yet to decide.
Review By [(Past Donor)pinkhairedharry] • Date [14 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Continues to have good dialog. I was wondering how Xander and Dawn knew where to find Buffy, though. They just were all of a sudden there.
Comments from author:
I briefly mentioned that Buffy was planning on meeting Dawn and Xander after the finished shopping at the Underwear Inc. I'll look over it again.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [14 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Love this! I want more, more, more . . . ! Uh, please? :)
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [14 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I like the dialog and the character moments so far, but I wonder why Chuck would think that anyone with a government file would be after him?
Comments from author:
It's not anyone with a file is out to get him. Anyone with a file and the title "The Slayer" is worth being worried about. Or at least from his personal experience.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [14 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Chan
Review:
Well I'm seeing all kinds of potential hijinks that may be in the works. You've got me wondering just how buffy will tell the government to butt out this time
Review By [Chan] • Date [14 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from McGurrin
Review:
I like it, this has a lot of promise and it is in one of the styles of storylines that I like a lot and can't find many of.
Review By [McGurrin] • Date [12 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Luhh
Review:
GOD, are you kidding me??? There just aren't enough Buffy/Chuck crossover and this one is looking GREAT! You absolutely HAVE to continue. Period.
Review By [Luhh] • Date [12 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Waverly
Review:
Heh, that was awesome. Can't wait to see where this goes. Poor Chuck, his brain must be on total overload.
Review By [Waverly] • Date [11 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from PhantomGuyver
Review:
it has a promising beginning, I'm looking forward to more
Review By [PhantomGuyver] • Date [11 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from dreameralways
Review:
And then they all just turn and walk away after he fixes the phone and poor Chuck is just left going "WTF?" There wasn't anything in the files about them being allies, contacts, or experts that could put his mind at ease? After all, they aren't on any terror watch list or listed in current criminal databases. I can understand how all the blacked out stuff would be scary, but is there anything saying that they are actually enemy agents?
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [11 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AllenPitt
Review:
Redacted files, but he still might connect her to Sunnydale, which fell into a 'sinkhole', info on which is also redacted. Leading to "she's a terrorist and destroyed a whole town"! while the non-redacted sections might have her time in an institution after burning down a high school gym, stuff like that. So she's clearly a crazed assassin, code named "Slayer". All we need now is for her to spot some innocent bystander and attack him for no reason, some guy named "Ethan Rayne", maybe. Harmless british person.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [11 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Thewander
Review:
very nice. And I see a screaming faint coming from Chuck when he finds out about the supernatural. Also if the intersec files are the government side of the whats going on if could paint the scoobies in a VERY bad light. Like Xander stealing the rocketlauncher, Buffy useing it. Walshes files on the group could be in there as well.
Review By [Thewander] • Date [11 Oct 11] • Not Rated
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