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Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Bobboky
Review:
nice
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [11 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Genericrandom
Review:
Yay! Thrilled to see more this --well, more anything but this one is particularly good.

Nice to see Faith out of her coma, and gee, Xander spends the night and she wakes up after spider up the nose? No, that's not coincidental at all is it? XD

Like the construction sight scenes, interesting turn of events. Looking forward to seeing more as always.
Review By [Genericrandom] • Date [11 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from dialNforNinja
Review:
This is rather better than I went into it expecting - part of that is that I always did like Spider-Man 2099, but getting Faith to stop, cool off, and get over immediate thoughts of revenge is also a good twist; there's certainly enough trouble in Sunnydale to keep everyone occupied even if Xander does form his own Scooby-Dooby-Two team.

6/10 where 1 induces vomiting, 5 is the average novel, and 10 induces orgasm. For reference, I consider most of Fanfiction.net to hover around 2-3, while most of TTH is a point or two higher. This is probably due to the audience for Buffy mostly being well past the angsty teenage years themselves, I think. In any case, i want to read what comes next, so knuckle down, hear?

- dNN
Review By [dialNforNinja] • Date [11 Mar 12] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Jaylynn
Review:
Love seeing updates for this. Can't wait to see where you take this.
Review By [Jaylynn] • Date [11 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
Review:
I'm happy to see more of this story!
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [11 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from JonnyNapalm
Review:
Always thrilled to see another of Crazy Dan's stories get an update. I'm an absolute sucker for just about any good Xander/Faith story...which may be where this is headed, I wouldn't presume to predict your plotlines. I'd have loved some more detail on the queen spider dream that Xander and Faith seem to have shared, but that's nitpicking. Great material...hope your muse is generous.
Review By [JonnyNapalm] • Date [11 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from SamDragon
Review:
Spider Queen?What did he dream about then I wonder.
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [11 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Semet
Review:
Well this was fun, thanks for taking the time.
Review By [Semet] • Date [11 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Tjin
Review:
I love it, Faith is back and Kaine is learning all abou the wilder side of life... thanks for the great update.
Review By [Tjin] • Date [11 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from AnFan
Review:
Yay, it's wonderful to see an update!

Nice chapter. I like it that you've woken up Faith. I'm not one for slavishly sticking to a character profile from canon, so I hope you have her stick around. Lots of opportunity for character interactions and tension that can distract the main characters from seeing what's under their noses.

I eagerly await the next chapter. :)
Review By [AnFan] • Date [11 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from MarcusRowland
Review:
Just got round to reading this, and I'm enjoying it - it seems to be a better take on super-Xander than most I've seen, though as usual Buffy isn't getting enough to do. Looking forward to seeing the Buffy / Faith / Giles reunion - also to finding out what happened to Cordy and Angel if Xander somehow changed things enough that they never met up at that party.
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [11 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Narf
Review:
Nice update keep up the good work thanks and bye.
Review By [Narf] • Date [11 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from msdarque
Review:
Intriguing, fun chapter.
Yay, Faith is out of her coma. Wonder if she and Xander get together..?
Go Kaine!
Liked it. Congrats!
Review By [msdarque] • Date [11 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Rob
Review:
Great to see more of this, love your stuff. And this one is getting VERY interesting with the introduction of Faith.
Review By [Rob] • Date [11 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from OlBear
Review:
Nice update and I like Faith waking up without the homicidal tendencies she shows in other stories. I have the feeling that Willow is going to be more than a little pissed when she finds out just what changes happened to Xander on his road trip and that he didn't bother to tell her.
Review By [OlBear] • Date [11 Mar 12] • Not Rated
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