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Review of chapter "chapter 2" from EroSlackerMicha

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yes another good story. Xander and Kaine in the Dale could be fun. X & K could troop up to LA and torment Angel once and a while.

keep up the good work.

Review By [EroSlackerMicha] • Date [20 Oct 11] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "chapter 2" from DarkTopaz

Review:

glad to see you back,

Review By [DarkTopaz] • Date [20 Oct 11] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "chapter 2" from Orchamus

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Yeah, this is pretty awesome so far. Glad to see you back in action.

Review By [Orchamus] • Date [20 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "chapter 2" from Tjin

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Alright, i'm really enjoying this... more please.

-Tjin

Review By [Tjin] • Date [20 Oct 11] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "chapter 2" from AllenPitt

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And just in time to run into the Initiative, who would just love to get their hands on the both of them, I'm sure.

Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [20 Oct 11] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "chapter 2" from msdarque

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Interesting... and fun! :D
Enjoyed reading it. Congrats!

Review By [msdarque] • Date [20 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "chapter 2" from annararen

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It feels a bit rushed here and there. It could do with a bit more descriptions as well.
Other than this, It's always a pleasure reading something from you. I can't wait to see where you plan on taking this.

Thank you for writing and sharing!

Review By [annararen] • Date [20 Oct 11] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "chapter 2" from moringstar

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keep going this good. a litte more infor on what exactly are xanders power and what upgrades kain got dose he still have the mark of kain and have you given him a regular spider-sense or Precognition visions.

Review By [moringstar] • Date [20 Oct 11] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "chapter 2" from (Past Donor)

ridert

Review:

good start, if a bit light on desribing what exactly it is Xander can do. I always look forward to seeing more of your work and I hope to see more of this and your other works soon.

Review By [ (Past Donor)

ridert] • Date [20 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "chapter 2" from madmanmike

Review:

Can't wait for the gang to meet kaine and xander 2099

Review By [madmanmike] • Date [20 Oct 11] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "chapter 2" from OlBear

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Great start and I look forward to seeing where you take it.

Review By [OlBear] • Date [20 Oct 11] • Not Rated

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