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Review of chapter "Never Trust Harmony" from ShadeoftheEnd
Review:
Coulddn't he just do the sunlight thing with his staff and and set-up a quick ward or two to protect them till morning?
Review By [ShadeoftheEnd] • Date [5 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never Trust Harmony" from ShadeoftheEnd
Review:
Coulddn't he just do the sunlight thing with his staff and and set-up a quick ward or two to protect them till morning?
Review By [ShadeoftheEnd] • Date [5 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never Trust Harmony" from ShadeoftheEnd
Review:
Coulddn't he just do the sunlight thing with his staff and and set-up a quick ward or two to protect them till morning?
Review By [ShadeoftheEnd] • Date [5 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never Trust Harmony" from ShadeoftheEnd
Review:
Coulddn't he just do the sunlight thing with his staff and and set-up a quick ward or two to protect them till morning?
Review By [ShadeoftheEnd] • Date [5 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never Trust Harmony" from ShadeoftheEnd
Review:
Coulddn't he just do the sunlight thing with his staff and and set-up a quick ward or two to protect them till morning?
Review By [ShadeoftheEnd] • Date [5 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never Trust Harmony" from ShadeoftheEnd
Review:
Coulddn't he just do the sunlight thing with his staff and and set-up a quick ward or two to protect them till morning?
Review By [ShadeoftheEnd] • Date [5 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never Trust Harmony" from ShadeoftheEnd
Review:
Coulddn't he just do the sunlight thing with his staff and and set-up a quick ward or two to protect them till morning?
Review By [ShadeoftheEnd] • Date [5 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never Trust Harmony" from ShadeoftheEnd
Review:
Coulddn't he just do the sunlight thing with his staff and and set-up a quick ward or two to protect them till morning?
Comments from author:
Normally, yes, but there's a problem with that which will be covered in the next chapter.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [ShadeoftheEnd] • Date [5 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never Trust Harmony" from MistofRainbows
Review:
Amusing conversation with Paladine. They should probably break the curse on Jesse before he becomes too stupid to live. I really need to go back and read the books because I don't remember Caramon being that stupid. Actually Giles messing up names of things after hearing it was annoying and seemed out of character as well. Ah well, part of me is still interested to see where the story is going. The other part is annoyed because I think this is the first time I'm actually hoping and looking forward to Jesse dying.
Comments from author:
Caramon wasn't stupid. Neither is Jesse. But both are slow in the sense of them requiring much more time to come to the correct conclusion. Jesse will never become too stupid to live. He's making mistakes because he's trying to keep up with his friends, Caramon just let Raistlin do his thinking for him after a time. Xander and Willow won't let Jesse do that.

As for Giles, he won't be making the same mistakes again. He did gets some things wrong in season one and early season two of Buffy, which is what I'm basing his character on.

Jesse will learn to change. He just needs to find where he fits in with everyone else.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [11 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never Trust Harmony" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks again!
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Never Trust Harmony" from prehensileclaw
Review:
An unexpected treat with a tasty cliffhanger.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [prehensileclaw] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Never Trust Harmony" from annararen
Review:
Oh My Gosh, they'll all be having a merry bloody time, won't they? :D

I think I said it before(if not, I should have), and I'll say it again: I love this Harmony! Also, Giles and Xander in this chapter were spot on, brilliant!

Thank you for writing and sharing! I'm still smiling from this chapter as I write this.
Comments from author:
I was really trying to make characters right. Took some time, but I think a good product is worth the wait.

And they will be having an interesting time. Be a bit before it's done, but it should be fun. Well, for the readers.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [annararen] • Date [6 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Never Trust Harmony" from Alkeni
Review:
Very good chapter, as it always is.

Hope Harmony gets what's coming to her.
Comments from author:
Oh, she will. She will.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [Alkeni] • Date [5 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never Trust Harmony" from EroSlackerMicha
Review:
nearly forgot this one. had to re-read it. keep up the good work.

um when will Buffy appear? and will she be with Xan? or will you follow the path of Xan with Mantis-Mummy-Cordy-Anya?
Comments from author:
I could very well not go with either option. I don't really know what relationships I'm going to have.

Buffy will be showing up fairly soon. Two chapters or so.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [EroSlackerMicha] • Date [5 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never Trust Harmony" from Orchamus
Review:
Damn, glad to see more of this, though I must say Harmony acting intelligently, somewhat, is disconcerting lol.
Comments from author:
Everybody underwent changes, some are more severe than others.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [Orchamus] • Date [5 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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