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Review of chapter "Snap!" from Waverly
Review:
That was awesome!
Your characterization of Hermione was perfect, and while the start was a little shaky, that ending was fantastic! I never would have guessed in a million years where this was going. I can't wait to see what happens next! (Though no matter how much Harry is embittered by his experiences and enjoys his new life, I can't see him trying to kill Dawn. The Scoobies, maybe, but not Dawn, she can't help what she is, and unlike the other knights, I think he'd make that distinction.)
Anyway, I'm really loving this. Whoah, not at all what I was expecting.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I worked pretty hard to get the characterization right for the most part. I agree that the beginning was a bit shaky. I tried to straighten it up a bit, but it didn't work all the way.

On Dawn, I'm not talking. Not at all.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [Waverly] • Date [26 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Snap!" from zbaroni
Review:
Promising start.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [zbaroni] • Date [26 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Snap!" from jupitersdaughter
Review:
Very nice!
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [jupitersdaughter] • Date [26 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Snap!" from wdlwbt
Review:
This is great. I hope there will be more. Thanks for sharing :)
Comments from author:
There will be! There will be!

Thanks for reading!
Review By [wdlwbt] • Date [26 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Snap!" from SFBKludge
Review:
Nice start looks to be semi new at the least and if you stick with your posted rules it should go fairly well w/o a big bomb showing up killing your plot.
Comments from author:
Thanks, and what I've got written has kept pretty closely to my rules, even if I skirt pretty close to a few at times.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [SFBKludge] • Date [26 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Snap!" from Rob
Review:
Okay, was not expecting your little twist at the end. A very nice start so far.
Comments from author:
Yeah, I thought that people might be surprised.

Thanks for reading!
Review By [Rob] • Date [25 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Snap!" from trongod
Review:
This was excellent! New twist in the stories; liked the slow change of Harry's attitude as time passed. Him finding the re creationists and their activities is new, hope to see more on this ASAP and your Muses provide.

One of the things that did occur to me is that with Hermione's new attitude, she's going to be a major target for Umbridge fast - and I wouldn't doubt that a pre arranged attack leaving her raped, broken, and partially mind wiped would be one of the first things occurring to the scum bags. And with Dumbledore's typical, gutless behavior, nothing would be done to even investigate the attack. HOPING that she and a bunch of others - even some teachers ought to be sick of the crap by now!! - have the brains to move n packs, ready for attacks...

Also wondering about the further consequences of Harry's economic warfare. Seems to me that a lot of the Pureblood wealth has come from the shops, whether as part of an investment, coersion, or whatever, so they should start to feel th bite fairly soon after school starts - say, around Christmas or so...
Comments from author:
I'm glad you liked it. Hermione will start butting heads with the Toad, but it won't be as bad as you say. Umbridge is going to feel more arrogant since they just "won" against Harry, so she won't resort to such a thing. Besides such a thing could be traced back to her, so she'd be cruel in other ways.

I'm doing Dumbledore a bit different from how many have portrayed him. I hope people like him.

Random closings might just shake Diagon Alley up just enough to get things going.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [trongod] • Date [25 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Snap!" from DesitaniaF
Review:
It's interesting. I think that it was a shame the Knights were against Buffy, since they could have made good allies. I like that he's learning archery. he should also learn the quarterstaff, I think.
Comments from author:
Good suggestion. He'll need it if he ever wants to fight the guy on the other side of the stream. Hagrid as Little John?
Review By [DesitaniaF] • Date [25 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Snap!" from twlight
Review:
Having Harry buy out the stores in the ally then raising the rent is wonderful. I have read a few stories where Harry didn't win his hearing but none where his friends stuck by him as they are in this. I have to say that I am wondering about the backlash of Harry doing what he did to the students who couldn't get school supplies and how the ministry also reacts. I am eagerly awaiting the next installment to this so far wonderful story.
Comments from author:
Admittedly, that was one of the reasons I wrote this. Having Harry be expelled holds so much possibility, but it's rarely used and when I did see it used, there was this sudden irational betrayal of him. I didn't want to go that way. Things will change and morph.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [twlight] • Date [25 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Snap!" from DHX
Review:
as long as you don't spring H/Hr on us, i'll keep reading

BTW(H/Hr) is just as contrived and overdone as the H/Weasely pairing that you want to avoid.
Comments from author:
Meh. It'll go where it goes.

Thanks for reading!
Review By [DHX] • Date [25 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Snap!" from ShalaDakiri
Review:
Nice. I liked Harry's revenge in buying out a good portion of Diagon Alley. It sounds like the goblins fully approved of his actions.

As for the group Harry found, my first thought (Especially when you specifically mentioned rattan) was SCA. It'll be fun to see what kinds of skills beyond fighting Harry and possibly the others might pick up.
Comments from author:
Yeah, the rattan was supposed to be a bit of a red herring. This Harry will be learning some different skills than cannon Harry. I think it'll be fun.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [25 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Snap!" from Greywizard
Review:
Looks good and can hardly wait to see what's coming next.
Comments from author:
Thanks! You were a bit help with this as well.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [25 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Snap!" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Couldn't Harry move to another country and another school?
Just because he's expelled from Hogwarts doesn't mean that Beaubatons (or some other school) won't take him.

They'd probably be ticked pink to teach the boy-who-lived & thumb their nose at Fudge at the same time!
Comments from author:
You're not the first person to suggest that. Sure, maybe, but there are reasons for it. Dumbledore would be much further out of reach, if an attack did take place in another country, the Order wouldn't be able to back Harry up fast enough. There are as many, if not more, reasons to keep him close rather than let him go somewhere else.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [25 Oct 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Snap!" from AriaDragoncrest
Review:
Great start
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [25 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Snap!" from IrFane
Review:
Well worth another look, this is a promising start for a story. :)
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [IrFane] • Date [25 Oct 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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