Ooh, a bit angst-y, but in a good way. Buffy's got quite a bit of Issues to work through.
Elladan and Elrohir parting ways with Buffy gives me Sad Face. But it should be interesting to see what kind of mischief she'll get into when she's off by herself. Plus, it's likely that Buffy will cross paths with the twins again someday. Those poor elves are probably going to worry their pretty little heads off about her in the meantime though.
Thank you, that means a lot. Did you like the heaviness of it?
I hate that their going to have to part ways, but I wanted Buffy to have her own adventures...at least for a while. They'll find each other again soon. The ring-war wont be for another twenty-something years, so they'll have enough time to roam.
Thanks for your review.
-X- Hanane
Review By [slatergirl] • Date [12 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Elves, Nails, Mud, and Bunnies" from clockworkorange
Review:
Eros and Eru? Well, at least both of them are gods, so they're similar in more than just name. Buffy should get points for that, right?
Did Elladan have her crawl through the mud on their hunting trip as a form of revenge? Because she DID mention not wanting to crawl through any mud and mud crawling is probably not absolutely necessary in hunting. Probably. I think.
Comments from author:
Oh Elladan did it on purpose alright. He didn't need a bath after their hunt, only Buffy.
He's taking revenge for the arrow in the butt, and the poop in his hair.
Review of chapter "Elves, Nails, Mud, and Bunnies" from mmooch
Review:
I wonder if Whistler feels jealous that Buffy's threatening other 'immortal' beings behind his back. Maybe Buffy should come across the rabbit from Monty Python's Holy Grail; that would convince her that Anya's right.
Comments from author:
Heloooo
I think Whistler is relieved he's not the one being threatened, I now I would. lol. I love Anya's fear for bunnies, it cracks me up every time. In my mid, she totally would try to convince the Scoobies of the wicked ways of bunnies. Thanks for reviewing, it means a lot. I'm happy you like this story and I can't wait to find out what you'll make of the next couple stories. I think the next one will be Aragorn centered. I'm not sure though, but think after Insanity is finished, Aragorn will pop up. I do love me some scruffy ranger/king. -X- Hanane
This story is freaking hilarious!! You can't help but laugh. Great job! :)
Comments from author:
Thank you! I love writing it crack me up sometimes. It's nice to know some people actually enjoy my humor. New chapter is up, hope you'll let me know what you think. -X- Hanane
Review By [spk] • Date [1 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]