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Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from Oxnate
Review:
Does Xander really think that 'Xander' and 'Jean' together won't ping some radars as 'Surge' and 'Ms Marvel'?
Comments from author:
Who says he plans to let Buffy see Jean? She is a telepath, after all. She could always do a little illusion.
Review By [Oxnate] • Date [5 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from SmithAndWesson
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As for Xander himself? Well, he was already on the road, currently making his way through the state of New York on his trip east.



Wouldn't he be going west and not east?
Comments from author:
Ah, you have found my one weakness. Geography. Thanks for pointing that out and consider it corrected.
Review By [SmithAndWesson] • Date [5 Nov 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from Stormrider
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Like the aftermath of the fight with Namor and of course Xander arriving to Sunnydale (love the conversation between him and Fury: I think that's one of the few joys he has left irritating Fury) Now he's helping his friends during 'Hush' Love to see who Jean brings with her and lets face it. Buffy and Co, is going to be really suspicious: it's going to be hard to keep his identity. I can't wait to see when Xander and Jean meet at that Pro-Mutant rally (I wonder how Dazzler is going to react to Xander) Anyway great chapter love to see what happens next. Keep it up
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Review By [Stormrider] • Date [5 Nov 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from banditdoz
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hahaha awesome
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Review By [banditdoz] • Date [5 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from ashez
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Yeah, another chapter! I forgot how much fun this story is and how well you've characterized Xander. I'm glad you were still working on this story.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Review By [ashez] • Date [5 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from kelvin
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you talked about the kid who clauses death if i remember my comics Logan did that fight with a punisher that had heaven powers right he could reach into is coat and pull out any kind of weapon?

also enjoying the story

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ok but i haven't read that one but the mainstream maverl comics it was called Wolverine/Punisher Revelation
Comments from author:
Nah, the one I'm talking about was a kid who woke up one day to find that he was a mutant, and that his mutant ability was basically to constantly radiate a precise mixture of chemicals that turned any and all living matter into dust. When the Ultimate X-men found out (I don't remember if it was Xavier or Fury), Logan was sent in to kill the kid because he was the only one who could survive his powers and they couldn't afford letting it get out that a mutant had killed an entire town simply by being there.
Review By [kelvin] • Date [5 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from EroSlackerMicha
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great to see this. so Xan's gonna use Jean to fight the Gentlemen.
I was so hoping to see Xan vs. Adam.
tin man is no where near as strong as Namor and not even a blip near the Hulk. yeah he's strong....perhaps two spider-man's worth. not very quick and doesn't adapt to situations without accessing the disk drive.

keep up the great work
Comments from author:
Xander vs. Adam might pop up later.

Tin Man... is that Adam or Iron Man? Because, concerning Adam, well, who knows how strong he'll be in this adaptation?
Review By [EroSlackerMicha] • Date [5 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from Markelo
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So Xander got Jean Grey to come and scream at the Gentlemen. It could be worst. He could have gotten Syren. LOL
Comments from author:
Ah, getting Syren to do it would have been perfect... but maybe just a little on the nose.
Review By [Markelo] • Date [5 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from (Current Donor)Katrina
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Discreet you say? Too late! The X-men are involved... Hah! I look forward to the next bit. :)
Comments from author:
Well, at the moment only Jean is involved. So there is a chance (however slight), that discretion will be maintained.
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [5 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from Bobboky
Review:
awesome
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [5 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from CageFire
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Great new chapter, keep up the good work. :)
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [5 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from VillageOrchid
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Okay, not Cordelia. It could work if the Gentleman's powers either need you to sleep in the town to loose your voice and/or be mostly human.
Comments from author:
That's the feeling I always got when watching 'Hush'. They stole all the voices at once so, supposedly, anyone who came in after that point would still be able to talk.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [5 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from lordamnesia
Review:
Fantastic! I love the solution you came up with! Keep up the great work!
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Review By [lordamnesia] • Date [5 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from sekmarc
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Nice update. I like how you handled the Thanksgiving episode. I look forward to finding out how Xander talks his way around the awkward questions I can see coming as a result of the Gentlemen issue. Thanks for the post and Happy Writing!
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Review By [sekmarc] • Date [5 Nov 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from SimulatedSoul
Review:
YaY! new part...kinda short though, but I takes what i can gets. Looking forward to MOAR! Any life left in Xanderfrost?
Comments from author:
Kinda short? This chapter's longer than the majority of chapters here.

Oh, and sorry to say, but the Xander Frost? muse just isn't speaking to me lately. It was hard enough getting the Surge one to work.
Review By [SimulatedSoul] • Date [5 Nov 13] • Not Rated
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