Another excellent chapter. I like that your taking your time to let things happen and arent forcing the story on. I find the slower parts the most interesting! Thank you
Review By [reiite] • Date [9 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
So... given Willow's potential in the show, she's resident Rin? A hundred (or even a thousand, given her canon showings) high-quality circuits and an Average one (all elements being hers)?
Review By [yog] • Date [9 Mar 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Hee. I really liked the last line of chapter 8, and I'm glad you've got Jenny involved with the group now. I just hope she and Giles have the presence of mind to keep an eye on the resident knowledge-sponge!
Review By [TogrutaGal] • Date [21 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Great chapter. Keep up the good work. I feel your pain when it comes to gear. A couple of months back my computer, laptop and I-pod gave out in the same week.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [9 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
great story, i only stumbled upon it today & didn't stop reading it till the end. Excellent writing style, wonderful character details and a good plot line. Simply one of the greater works I've read and i can't wait for the Halloween incident and what you will do with it.
Keep up the good work.
P.S. Slow character/story development is a fantastic thing but it tends to tire the author quickly. If you find yourself in such a predicament my sincere advise would be to to time skip and summarize. It saves the continuation of the story.
I'm really hoping that Xander gets over his super hero kick cause he is really starting to worry me. Instead of Batman and Robin, he's starting to remind me more of Joker and Harley...Well more Harley instead of Joker, especially after that one scene talking about his disgust for Joyce not seeing reality when his current reality seems all about superheroes and the quest to make himself into one. Harley had the same sort of willful blind spot and to be honest its not the sign of a strong mind. Other than that I love the work you put into this, Keep up the good work.