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Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Gideon
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John Ringo's books are a great read. I'm so glad to see a crossover. Buffy would be outclassed by anyone who has been on the Slab, let alone the power suits so it is good that she is staying at home. Xander can learn some useful skills and hopefully bring some useful tech back home. I'd like to see how Glory would stand up to some depleted uranium pellets accelerated to almost the speed of light! The Himmit must have more confidence in Xander's luck than I would. The odds of any one soldier surviving the battle of Barwhon, let alone the whole war must be much less than 1 %.
I'm not quite sure how all those changes in the Buffyverse flowed on from what Angel did but it is all good news so far :) I hope that is the last out of character thing you have Angel do.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [1 Nov 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from RafMereC
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Cool Background.

Raf
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [30 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Greywizard
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Okay, this is getting better with each chapter.

Loved how Buffy neutralized Snyder's viciousness with her comeback, and I hope she continues to do so throughout the coming year.

Having Alanna show - and Gunn hovering in the background - is going to do a lot to help stabilize things and provide Buffy with additional support she'll need in Xander's absence.

And Angel proves himself to be the truly near-completely useless and worthless, so-called 'champion' Joss decided to portray him as when he saw dollars being waved in front of his face after the third season of Buffy.

Can't wait to see what other repercussions are going to ensue following Xander's being sacrificed by the worthless would-be pedophile, although Buffy developing into a more mature and responsible champion, and Jasmine's return being thwarted are both well worth his disappearance.

Great work.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [30 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from CPTSkip
Review:
Very nice updates. Your story is rapidly becoming one of my favorites. I like how Xander being "missing in action" is changing the Buffyverse. I do wonder if and when he returns he will be able to bring back a suit of power armor. Lol!
Comments from author:
That's the plan but it wont be for a while. Xander has a war to fight. The next chapter should be up by the end of the week. (Crosses fingers)
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [30 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from eriktheviking
Review:
A great look at how a single action causes many changes.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [30 Oct 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from DarthPayne
Review:
I haven't actually read any of Jim Baens work, but this is pretty good. :)
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [30 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from DrDamage
Review:
This is developing nicely and I'm delighted to see two (long) chapters up so fast. I'm a little confused about where Xander is... is the Legacy of the Aldenata verse in the Scoobies future or is it in a different universe entirely?
Comments from author:
Currently working on Chapter 4 and I hope to have it posted soon. As to your question, well you'll have to wait and see.
Review By [DrDamage] • Date [30 Oct 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from desartrattaz
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this looks like an interesting story. I will be looking forward to reading it as you write.
Review By [desartrattaz] • Date [29 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from proofreader
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It might be a good idea for Xander to get a rejuve right before being sent back to put him back at the right age as when he left. Otherwise the differences in ages would cause too many complications for the story to do very well. Of course, keeping his battle gear when he comes back through the breach would be enough to have dudboy running terrified at the slightest rumor of him being in the area. I will admit to always having despised the Angel character. Bicentennial cowardly pedophile is what I call him.
Review By [proofreader] • Date [29 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from MissE
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I have no idea about the crossover universe, but this is certainly shaping up to be a very interesting story. Looking forward to seeing how it progresses with all the changes you're making.
Review By [MissE] • Date [29 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from djhardim
Review:
Angel would probably say that in the few minutes after the return of his soul that he was still partly under the influence of Angelus.
Comments from author:
He probably would have if Buffy hadn't been trying to beat seven shades of s**t out of him at the time. Thanks for reviewing
Review By [djhardim] • Date [29 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ChiVayne
Review:
"We must insure that he continues his quest for redemption and humanity."

That quest should be over, as a failure (at least the redemption part). Could argue he is showing some of the more disgusting aspects of humanity, I guess.
Comments from author:
Yes it should be, but where's the story in that? Thank you for taking the time to review.
Review By [ChiVayne] • Date [29 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Greywizard
Review:
Okay, the pedophile bloodsucker scumbag and his sponsors, The Powers That Suck, both need to be jacked up and beaten down.

Hope we see that happen in the fairly near future.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [29 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
Very nice start. I look forward to reading more of your story.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [29 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
A great build-up and opening to a crossover with massive potential.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [29 Oct 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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