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Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from CrazyCamera
Review:
I can not wait to see what happens next.. I am glad that Xander is home. I am surprised he let Angel live.. after all Xander does not consider himself a champion, so he could have killed Angel.. or cripple him a bit at least
Review By [CrazyCamera] • Date [20 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from Fayari
Review:
Well, if it were up to me, I'd rip out one of Angel's eyes, his fingernails and toenails (one by one), his teeth (one by one), his hair, any of his skin that can be covered up by clothes, his intestines (out of his ass), and his genitals. Then I'll feed it all to him.

Seriously, the main reason they can't kill Angel is because he's destined to actually save a few people, right? He doesn't need the parts I've mentioned to do that.
Review By [Fayari] • Date [19 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from Eureka
Review:
So what jumped up Whistler's butt? What Angel getting his @ss handed to him by Xander got him up in a dander? In this story Angel IS a d!ck and he deserved it. Mind you even in cannon he deserved to get his @ss handed to him after Xander had to force Angel to take him down to the Master's lair to save Buffy!
Comments from author:
Whistler's problems will be revealed in later chapters. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [18 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from Bobboky
Review:
very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [17 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from eriktheviking
Review:
A great set of reactions from the New and Old Scoobies as well as Angel and Angelus.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [17 Jan 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from trongod
Review:
Looks like Xander's going to be throwing the Pricks That Be useless' plans even further out of whack than ever before... Which makes me wonder just how much of Joyce's tumor was their fault...

Half sorry to see Faith with Gunn, half not. Xander's too old for the girls, but Joyce isn't now, assuming she can get over her image of Xander and vice versa.

'Course if Dru got in on the Shanshu action, or Janna somehow came back, that could work too.

At this point, There's no real romantic possibilities for Xander; all the girls are, to him, 11 years his junior in age, and even younger emotionally and mentally after what he's been through. He'll be feeling all Big Brother to them - including Faith and Alonna, more than likely to their regret - but I can't see it going any further than that.

And what the devil happened to his boat!?! He paid good money for it, the least you could do is have it tied up down to the marina for him! He could live and operate off of it until he gets his bearings...
Comments from author:
Oh Xander will definitely be screwing up the plans of the PTB with a little help from an unknown source. (later chapters). Just so you know I don't plan on having Xander and Joyce having a relationship beyond friendship and respect. Firstly since Joyce and Giles are starting a tentative romance and secondly chronologically Xander is twenty nine years old, still over ten years younger than Joyce.
Who he will be involved with you'll have to wait and see. As for Dru, I have plans for her. Just a hint Angel is going to get very sick of her talking about her 'Kitten'. As for the boat, all will be explained
Finally thank you for taking the time to review each chapter as its posted.
Review By [trongod] • Date [17 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from drago
Review:
Pretty good
Review By [drago] • Date [17 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Pointer
Review:
That, I liked.
I may go back and read some more of Ringo's stuff. I never did finish this series.
I'm glad Xander brought some supplies, ACS equipment can't be supported very well in his native universe. At least the suit shouldn't need much repair. There isn't much that can damage it.
I would guess the Himmit provided the suit and aide?

Enjoyed it.
Review By [Pointer] • Date [13 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from borgrabbit
Review:
Wishful thought haiku:

Leap naked on him
Show the truth hallelujah
Slayer loves Zeppo

☺☻♥♦♣♠•◘○◙♂♀♪♫☼►◄
Nice chapter!
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [2 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from lillyb
Review:
very good work
Review By [lillyb] • Date [2 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Eureka
Review:
Glad to see he finally got back.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [29 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from trongod
Review:
But what about Xander's boat, dern it all!!

OK, so I really enjoyed the Triumphant Return Of Xander... I just don't think he's going to accept the explanation for Angel's continued existence from the crowd. I also am wondering if he was reset to his teen years or is still the age he was in the last Reality making a relationship between him and the Vampire Layer untenable for him, after seeing her and Angel together and part of his disgust being the disparity in ages. He's been fighting, what, five years or more? OK so I was going to re read this from the start anyway...

I done really see Xander hanging around the Scoobies, to be honest. Oh, he'll be there to help, but hang with them, after all he's seen and done? There's a chasm between them that I don't think can be bridged - especially with the 'But They Have Souls' attitude toward killing. If, for example, they discover the Mayor's plans prior to the 100 days of invulnerability, Xander would kill him without even thinking about it, whereas the Scoobies would debate what to do as the Mayor is technically human and may have a soul still, etc. The resulting clash between the two groups, bridged by Gunn, Faith, and Alonna would tear them apart UNLESS Xander immediately broke away from them.

No matter how you slice it, things are going to change drastically for them all in the next few hours, and even more in the days t come.
Review By [trongod] • Date [29 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Bobboky
Review:
nice
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [29 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from JonnyNapalm
Review:
Nice chapter. The divided viewpoint works well establishing the urgency of all the actions that we're seeing through the scenes. Love the immediacy of Xander dealing with Jack as well. Very fun. Looking forward to the discussion of events in the next chapter. Xander meeting Faith, everyone finding out that dimensional travel is MUCH more complicated than anyone could reasonably believe. Thanks for the good work.
Review By [JonnyNapalm] • Date [29 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from DrDamage
Review:
Wicked!
Review By [DrDamage] • Date [29 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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