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Review of chapter "Chapter 29" from Bobboky
Review:
Very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [8 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 29" from Wolfkin
Review:
Great, great update with lotsa stuff going on. Why, though, do I get the feeling that A) the "scion of a minor Watcher family" was Xander and B), Travers was just set up to fall soon-ish. At least, I hope so. I've only read a handful of fics where Travers and his faction didn't need a lot of very immediate killing.

Speaking of killing, please don't kill Kennedy. I'm rather fond of her and I really wanna see her reactions to Buffy, Faith and Willow. And someone to talk Art and stuff with Joyce would be nice, so Kenn's Watcher could be interesting as well.

Mind reader Buffy, huh? Without Angel, it'll be tougher to get the heart to brew the antidote. On the other hand, not sure the blood would soak through MI armor, so . . . ^_^

All in all, can't wait for the next update!
Comments from author:
Thanks for your review. To answer your questions, B) Yes Travers was set up and A) The identity of Marcus is in his surname. As for Kennedy I have no intention of killing her off
Review By [Wolfkin] • Date [8 Jan 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 29" from Compston
Review:
Another excellent chapter... It will be interesting when Kennedy arrives in Sunnydale....
Review By [Compston] • Date [8 Jan 14] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 28" from CPTSkip
Review:
I just reread your whole story for the nth time and must once again say, "Great frakking story!" I think your plot is an interesting AU and your characterization darn near perfect. I can't wait for the next update.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [20 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 28" from KageRyu
Review:
RAY CHEN!!!!! Uh Dude are we going to see the Dreen anytime soon and if so how will it affect the story?
Comments from author:
No, no Dreen in this story, sorry. It also means that there'll be no 'Two Guns' Berg either.
Review By [KageRyu] • Date [20 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 28" from gaulty
Review:
Mgi of chapter, keep up the good work, byes
Review By [gaulty] • Date [19 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 28" from (Current Donor)Katrina
Review:
I've just read through the whole thing and have to say that this is a great story so far! Thank you for sharing it.
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [19 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 28" from Chargone
Review:
Problematic, not problematical. In most cases, that 'al' is added because of a baffling spelling rule which forbids 'cly' (i don't know of any dialect of NZ English which Pronounces that al, but apparently a number of British, and probably American dialects do). The rule is that to turn an adjective into an adverb you add -ly unless the adjective ends in c in which case you add -ally instead. So going the other way you have to remember to take the al off again. Of course, just to confuse the issue, some words flow more naturally with the al left on, to the point where Some of them have had the 'cal' ending become the correct/standard form, and there are a few which just end in cal Anyway just to confuse everything.

Next: "the X which was given him" (i forget the exact sentence. Something about orders?) You want "the X which was given to him". In standard English, and most dialects, the two statements have exactly inverse meanings, and there's a bunch of related usage issues.

On a not at all grammar related note:
Evil!Lawyers! SCIENCE! Science! Plotting!
Another interesting chapter in an interesting story. Moar! Moar i say!
Heh.
Good work :)
Review By [Chargone] • Date [18 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 28" from trongod
Review:
Good to see you back writing! Excellent work, but gotta ask - Ray Chen, Physicist in Florida? He gonna set off a Higgs boson and create the Looking Glass Phenomenon a la John Ringo's OUTSTANDING series??? And Maggie is seriously eating amphetamines like candy /to stay on top of her game/?????

Oi, no /wonder/ the Initiative ran into the dirt so fast!!!
Comments from author:
No she's not popping pills like candy yet, just one or two to make up for lost sleep.
Review By [trongod] • Date [18 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 28" from dcarson
Review:
So many useful things to so many people. W&H is liable to find that trying to cover up the Ghost email is counter productive. Of course if they tip their hand the wrong way approaching Xander about the mayor that could be a moot point.
Review By [dcarson] • Date [18 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 28" from xon
Review:
Oh, man.

I've got a "Ship of the Line" fic that I'm working on, and your Wolfram and Hart reaction scene in this latest chapter is PERFECT!

I want to write something similar to it for myself, but I don't want to be accused of plagiarism.
Comments from author:
Go for it mate. That's the great thing about fanfiction, you can use ideas that other writers have come up with. Looking forward to seeing your story when it's ready.
Review By [xon] • Date [18 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 28" from RoyalTwinFangs
Review:
Okay.
Review By [RoyalTwinFangs] • Date [18 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 28" from Questara
Review:
Did you just say: "RAY CHEN IN FLORIDA"?!?!?

Oh nuts, head for the hills.
Review By [Questara] • Date [18 Dec 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 28" from djhardim
Review:
Glad to see more, thanks.

Wolfram and Hart will probably use a computer virus to change the e-mail message enough so any efforts to make use of it will end in failure (after the expenditure of billions of dollars).
Review By [djhardim] • Date [18 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 28" from Bobboky
Review:
good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [18 Dec 13] • Not Rated
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