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Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from JasonBarnett
Review:
just found this, looking through it for the first time.

Willow didn't start having anything to do with magic till pretty much the end of season 2, so Giles has no reason to know about Willow's power or talk about lessons near the beginning of the story. And I really hate the thrall idea.

Especially since Buffy can't just tell someone is a vamp just by looking so she already knew Angel well by the time she found out what he was.
Review By [JasonBarnett] • Date [10 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from trongod
Review:
Looks like there's a few unintended consequences of Angel basically mind raping Buffy way back when - wondering if the Hellmouth sort of spread his thralldom around and so made it easier for the Scoobies to accept him, with Kendra being affected some after her arrival. A sort of bleed over effect that was what allowed the vamp in Jamaica to woogie her mind as it did.

Notice that the description of the Jamaican Vamp was rather close to Angel, so maybe it's a blanket effect as well, now if Dru pops up and gets some slack cut for her unexpectedly, I'd say it carried over to his line, maybe just for brunettes perhaps???

Want to see what Queen C had in store for Our Hero, so hoping The Muses inspire quickly!!
Review By [trongod] • Date [10 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Yup, yup! Me likey! Keep up the great work! Xander torment is such fun!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [10 Apr 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Genuka
Review:
*snicker, sing song voice* Xander's in trouble. Xander's in trouble. Xander's in trouble. *normal voice* I can't ^wait^ to see what they have planned for him.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [10 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from banditdoz
Review:
Great new chapter Thanks ;D
Review By [banditdoz] • Date [10 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Good Chapter!
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [22 Mar 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from Bobboky
Review:
Very very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [2 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from Tjack
Review:
Nice to see this back again.
Review By [Tjack] • Date [28 Feb 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from eriktheviking
Review:
A great update with Cordelia taking control.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [28 Feb 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from trongod
Review:
BooYa!! Good to see you back on this; liking the way it's going. Had to re read it - any excuse will do - and saw the Seer Vampiress' reading/prophesy about Xander training a group of women... Obviously, Cordelia is the start, and if Jenny is a quarter as smart as she needs to be to do her jobs, she's next in line.... I hope.

Be pretty sweet if she's well enough trained to either escape and evade Angelus later on or hand him his fanged butt...

Wondering how close the Cordettes are here and if they are worthy of the Comsquare's attentions... And yes, I mean /those/ attentions too. Can't let Cordelia have /all/ the fun, right?

In the Buffy 'verse, is the Idunine and other Blackcollar drugs still in Xander's system enough to be broken down and analyzed... and reproduced even if in a lesser form? Sort of a version of the Super Soldier system....

Edit: Marcie Ross!! Not necessary that she be gone already, this is YOUR 'verse we're talking about here, after all!

..... Besides, her and Faith are two of the ladies I'd like to see get the training and Xander time...
Comments from author:
First off, thank you for the review. Of course Jenny will be trained by Xander and what she'll do to Angelus, well you'll have to wait and see. As for who else will be trained by the Comsquare, I have some ideas.
Unfortunately using Xander's blood to create a Super Soldier serum wont happen, at least not yet.
Review By [trongod] • Date [28 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from Genuka
Review:
*smirk* I wonder who else is going to be a Valkyrie?
Review By [Genuka] • Date [28 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from djhardim
Review:
Sadly, Marcie Ross has been a "guest" of the United States government since season one.

Edit: One of the previous reviews mentioned her.
Comments from author:
I don't think you meant to review this story since I'm pretty sure that I haven't mentioned Marcie once.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [18 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from djhardim
Review:
Regarding weapons in the Blackcollar universe - from TVTrope:

"The Blackcollars' use of technologically simplistic weapons is due to the Ryqril having technology that tracks and counters more advanced weapons such as laser rifles.

This doesn't mean the Blackcollars can't combine more advanced weapons with their standard loadout, such as using simple slingshots to hit enemy sensors...hit them with sticky clay pellets containing lumps of radioactive plutonium that will degrade the sensors and render them blind for a coming attack."


http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/Blackcollar
Review By [djhardim] • Date [2 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Yep, definitely some high quality work here. If you are not already a publishing author you damn well need to consider it. Please keep it coming!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [14 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from CPTSkip
Review:
I am really enjoying your story. I like how your Xander is good without being SuperXander! I just hope the Xander/Cordy relationship goes better in your time-line than in the canon one.

Edit: I agree with another reviewer. I would love to see Joyce become one of Xanders Valkyres. She was not only one of my favorite underutilized characters, it was just not logical to leave her in the dark. Besides, Xander training her mom would drive Buffy nuts. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [27 Jun 12] • Not Rated
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