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Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written and realistic approach to gauging Xander's continuing development.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [6 Jan 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from msdarque
Review:
Interesting chapter. Liked reading it.
So they found out that Spike's got film on Buffy fighting, wonder how that changes things?
And with Xander being upgraded... what fun!
Congrats!
Review By [msdarque] • Date [6 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from trongod
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Wonder how many alerts from Drusilla before Spike realizes it's Xander she's warning him about - or if it'll be made clear after he gets his butt kicked by the ComSquare...

Also wondering if sparring with the Slayer won't kick more memories into Xander's conscious mind; since she's roughly the same level as the ComSquare's former foes, I don't think it'll be pretty if he has a flashback during one of the sparring dates.

Always good to see the Blackcollars in action!

Wonder if anyone went as a Cobra Soldier that night.... Think of the team up if it was someone the Scoobies could trust...
Review By [trongod] • Date [5 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [5 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Hanzo
Review:
fantastic
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [5 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Bobboky
Review:
very very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [10 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from lillyb
Review:
I'm so glad you didn't just drop into the typical "Xan just went from zero to hero in one night isn't that great?" you had him stop and think, good job.
Review By [lillyb] • Date [11 Nov 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from trongod
Review:
As Xander said, he needs to work on his stamina; his fighting skills are, I think, pretty much muscle memory still from the Chaos spell, although his continued practicing should deepen that. The fight he just had was fast and short, which helped in his victory. he took the vamps by surprise by not panicking and begging for help or mercy; his abrupt transition from 'prey' to 'threat' was quick enough to take them by surprise. Had there been more, it might have been a different story, so he did get lucky in that way.

The Comsquare's influence is going to be felt more and more by Xander as he trains and the skill sets are reinforced by the training, along with him training Buffy and Willow - who desperately needs training in hand to hand as well as magic before something eats her - and Xander begins to see that he is /still/ Xander - just with some upgrades.

But how long before Xander sees that the more Blackcollar trained people they have, the safer they all are??? Even without the enhancement drugs, the future Blackcollars were able to train quite a number of people to some extra ordinary levels...
Review By [trongod] • Date [10 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Hanzo
Review:
♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [10 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written sense of panic from Xander about the consequences of the possession as well as how he is beginning to get a little more realistic about what is required for his future. Also, a great fight scene, very in-tune with a Blackcollar.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [10 Nov 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from maben
Review:
loved it and can't wait for more, keep up the great work
Review By [maben] • Date [10 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from kayron
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Xander may be a different kind of soldier, but he still shows sound military thought when it comes to planning and strategy. Xander knows that he has the skill sets in his head, but he is smart enough to train his body to match those skills. He isn't going to race out thinking that he is SuperXander! now. He's training his body to be on par with his mind. I like that.
Review By [kayron] • Date [10 Nov 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from msdarque
Review:
Wow, interesting story! Go Xander!
I'd definitely like to read more. :)
Congrats!
Review By [msdarque] • Date [10 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Hanzo
Review:
♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [4 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from trongod
Review:
And another winner hits the web!! The Blackcollar stories are among some of my favorites to re visit from time to time, so I truly hope you explore this further. The memories and abilities of a long serving officer such as Damon would have major repercussions on the events in the Hellmouth, but I suspect Xander and whatever remains of the Comsquare would keep a low profile until he/they have developed sufficient bases, safehouses, armament, comm units, etc.

He was, after all, one of the premier Commando commander, used to operate behind enemy lines - on enemy held worlds - come to that, so guerrilla warfare is his specialty. Add to that Xander's awareness and - as Willow sated - his new serious attitude toward life, and you get a seriously scary combination. What science skills they now have will be interesting to see explored, since strategy. logistics, tactics, and specialized training should include that as well - and since the Comsquare is from the future...
Review By [trongod] • Date [4 Nov 11] • Not Rated
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