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Xander Comsquare

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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from trongod
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And another winner hits the web!! The Blackcollar stories are among some of my favorites to re visit from time to time, so I truly hope you explore this further. The memories and abilities of a long serving officer such as Damon would have major repercussions on the events in the Hellmouth, but I suspect Xander and whatever remains of the Comsquare would keep a low profile until he/they have developed sufficient bases, safehouses, armament, comm units, etc.

He was, after all, one of the premier Commando commander, used to operate behind enemy lines - on enemy held worlds - come to that, so guerrilla warfare is his specialty. Add to that Xander's awareness and - as Willow sated - his new serious attitude toward life, and you get a seriously scary combination. What science skills they now have will be interesting to see explored, since strategy. logistics, tactics, and specialized training should include that as well - and since the Comsquare is from the future...
Review By [trongod] • Date [4 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from OdinMage
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I actually think you should continue both stories. I'm now tracking both and can't wait to see where they go!
Review By [OdinMage] • Date [4 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Vianca
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Drad, read the wrong name, seems like I´m tired.

Wonder what tech-know-how Xander now knows
Review By [Vianca] • Date [4 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from cjcold
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Nice start.

Haven't read the Blackcollar books but generally familiar with the plot. Interesting choice for Xander to become. Look forward to what he can accomplish.

More soon please.
Review By [cjcold] • Date [4 Nov 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ghostwhowalks
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Looking forward for more. Thank you. You might not know it but this story and your ACS story both answer this challenge the In Jim Baen's Memory Challenge. Especially this one since Blackcollars are mentioned.
Review By [ghostwhowalks] • Date [4 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Renshai
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Ohhhhhh.... pleeeeeeease continue this storyline. am an avid reader of both book series but this is by far my favorite :) am wondering where your story will take us.
Review By [Renshai] • Date [4 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from darkplayer
Review:
Great start to the crossover. I like how Xander is more mature and I look forward to seeing how you develop the story. It has a lot of potential. Please update soon.
Review By [darkplayer] • Date [4 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
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Another great choice of crossover. The character especially seems to fit with a more mature Xander who is willing to get the job done with minimal attention. I can't help but laugh at the Initiative and Walsh pouting when they get a glimpse of how far adrift they are in terms of improving fighters.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [4 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from lordamnesia
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Very nice! Not to overpowered for Xander, thats always a plus!
Review By [lordamnesia] • Date [4 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MissE
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Certainly an interesting beginning. I would like to see more as you have time and inspiration.
Review By [MissE] • Date [4 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DarthPayne
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Hmm, the 'thoughts' seem to be missing in at least one spot that i noticed.
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [4 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from djhardim
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Good. I like stories where Xander started to take things seriously early on.

I'm not familar with the Blackcollar series. What can you tell us about the abilities of the Blackcollars?
Review By [djhardim] • Date [4 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TroyGuffey
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One of my favorite books! There is also a sequel "The Backlash Mission"

Although I might have gone for Allen Caine.
Review By [TroyGuffey] • Date [4 Nov 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from prehensileclaw
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I don't know the cross, but I am interested and you write very well. I hope you continue. :)
Review By [prehensileclaw] • Date [4 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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