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Review of chapter "XXVI -- An Ending To An Adventure" from bookworm
Review:
Wow. I just found this two days ago, and I had a pretty hard time stopping to eat, sleep and actually accomplish things. Obviously, part of what makes it so good is the source material, but you've done a really good job shifting it over to Buffy's point of view, as well. I think there were a few bits that seemed off, particularly earlier, but I'm having a hard time remembering any problems now. Oh, I know; in about the fourth chapter or so you have her use Lorquas Ptomel's name when prior to that she'd shown no sign of knowing it; a short reference to finding that out would be good, or it could come up in the earlier chapter along with Tars'. Also, in the second-last chapter and an earlier chapter title you use 'breath' when you probably mean 'breathe'. Those are both little stuff though. In any case, I'm definitely looking forward to the sequel, whenever that should happen, and meanwhile I might have to check out what else you've written. Keep writing, whatever it might be!
Review By [bookworm] • Date [24 Nov 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XXVI -- An Ending To An Adventure" from (Recent Donor)SamuraiCatFan
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Wonder what the impact of allowing the majority of the Zodangan military to leave Helium rather than be slaughtered will have on future events, especially since in ERB's original, the Zodangan's, whose army gets slaughtered outside of Helium in the original, spends a good chunk of the remaining books trying to get revenge.

Would love to see Buffy deal with the Therns and Pirates, especially since she has already faced and defeated a "real" Hell Goddess in Glory, along with such foes as the Master, the Mayor and Adam (and also potentially The First if her "return" is post Chosen), all of whom would make the Holy Hekkador and Isis wet their pants in terror.
Comments from author:
Honestly, was Buffy ever really scared during this story? She knew she could beat any individual or small group on Mars. She was more worried about what might happen to others or if she had to fight while vastly outnumbered.

The Therns and the truth about Iss will be interesting.
Review By [(Recent Donor)SamuraiCatFan] • Date [23 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XXVI -- An Ending To An Adventure" from slmncpm
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NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU! *sobs* you are so cruel. *hands you scones and sniffles badly*
Comments from author:
I'm glad you liked it. There will be more.
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [23 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XXVI -- An Ending To An Adventure" from CPTSkip
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Wonderful and magnificent story! I could write paragraphs praising your story but it is your and ERB's writings that are important and not mine. Once again, several of your Buffy's statements made me stop reading for a moment to get myself back under control. One was: "lastly two people wrapped in red silk like mummies by Victoria's Secret." What a perfect description of Barsoomian fancy dress. I can't wait for the sequel.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [23 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XXVI -- An Ending To An Adventure" from Rich
Review:
When you started this, I knew it would be fun, but had no idea it would turn out this well. Congratulations !!
Comments from author:
I didn't think it would work this well until I got to Chapter IV and really got into the groove of ERB's style of writing for the Martians.
Review By [Rich] • Date [23 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XXVI -- An Ending To An Adventure" from Gideon
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Buffy saves the world once again! And at the cost of her life too. Does this count as an extra death for her? I think that is number four or something? Anyway, well done Buffy, Mars is better for you having lived there :)
Comments from author:
Yeah four sounds about right
Review By [Gideon] • Date [23 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XXVI -- An Ending To An Adventure" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Setting the whole thing during Buffy's time in 'heaven' is perfect. Very well done, indeed!
Comments from author:
To meet the Challenge requirements and still allow for the possibility of the second two books it had to be that way.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [23 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XXIV -- Violence Begets Happiness" from Gideon
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Good work by Buffy on saving at least some of the Zodangians. I wonder if they will be happy with her for giving them warning that their home was burning or mad that she is the reason their families were slaughtered and their home destroyed? Looks like Dejah's family has learned from the example of the Jeddark of Zodanga and will not be staniding in Buffy's way. Plus she did save their city :)
Comments from author:
It will be a massive change in the plot of the original sequels. So you will (eventually) see the aftereffects.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [23 Nov 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XXVI -- An Ending To An Adventure" from Valkyrie
Review:
Well it was neat. I enjoyed it. I wouldn't mind reading more.
Comments from author:
At least two more. When? I don't know.
Review By [Valkyrie] • Date [23 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XXVI -- An Ending To An Adventure" from BarbarossaRotbart
Review:
First, I demand a sequel. I really cannot wait for the buffyized version of "Gods of Mars".
Second, I had really hoped that you would change the ending, because the prologue hinted that Buffy did not return to Earth.
Comments from author:
Which death was the prologue referring to hmmm? I was planning on a sequel from the beginning and a post-Season 7 Buffy is an appropriately powerful character for Books 2 and 3.
Review By [BarbarossaRotbart] • Date [23 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XXV -- It Can't Last, Can It?" from AllenPitt
Review:
And next...she wakes up in her coffin back on earth? Strange she didn't contact Giles directly after that, but probably didn't have the heart to get back into slaying. Hopefully post-S5 Buffy is immortal as it'll be quite a while before she can get back, based on the books.
Comments from author:
She can't remember anything but the happiness.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [23 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XXIV -- Violence Begets Happiness" from BarbarossaRotbart
Review:
Another great chapter. Buffy really knows how to win a war without a battle. I think that a marriage and an egg will come next. And if I am not completely wrong a differend ending that the novel.
Review By [BarbarossaRotbart] • Date [23 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XXIV -- Violence Begets Happiness" from AllenPitt
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I'm sure the Zodangan commanders in the tent were all thinking the same thing: that waitress is getting no tip! Still-- who said violence never solves anything?
At this point it's all good, except for that pesky atmosphere plant of course. But what could possibly go wrong?
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [23 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XXIII -- It's a Green Guy's Party" from (Past Donor)wozwashi
Review:
Buffy stooge fu would have been something to see.
Great story and smart cribbing from the original. ERB certainly had a way of turning a phrase and you've done a great job of not changing things too much so that the story very much has the feel of his Barsoom. Keep up the great work.
Review By [(Past Donor)wozwashi] • Date [23 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XXIII -- It's a Green Guy's Party" from AllenPitt
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And that's just the first book in the series. Next 2 were much better.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [23 Nov 11] • Not Rated
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