Large PrintHandheldAudioRating
using
 paypal
Twisting The Hellmouth Crossing Over Awards - Results
Is your email address still valid?

The Red Slayer

StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking
Review of chapter "XXVI -- An Ending To An Adventure" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Setting the whole thing during Buffy's time in 'heaven' is perfect. Very well done, indeed!
Comments from author:
To meet the Challenge requirements and still allow for the possibility of the second two books it had to be that way.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [23 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XXIV -- Violence Begets Happiness" from Gideon
Review:
Good work by Buffy on saving at least some of the Zodangians. I wonder if they will be happy with her for giving them warning that their home was burning or mad that she is the reason their families were slaughtered and their home destroyed? Looks like Dejah's family has learned from the example of the Jeddark of Zodanga and will not be staniding in Buffy's way. Plus she did save their city :)
Comments from author:
It will be a massive change in the plot of the original sequels. So you will (eventually) see the aftereffects.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [23 Nov 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XXVI -- An Ending To An Adventure" from Valkyrie
Review:
Well it was neat. I enjoyed it. I wouldn't mind reading more.
Comments from author:
At least two more. When? I don't know.
Review By [Valkyrie] • Date [23 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XXVI -- An Ending To An Adventure" from BarbarossaRotbart
Review:
First, I demand a sequel. I really cannot wait for the buffyized version of "Gods of Mars".
Second, I had really hoped that you would change the ending, because the prologue hinted that Buffy did not return to Earth.
Comments from author:
Which death was the prologue referring to hmmm? I was planning on a sequel from the beginning and a post-Season 7 Buffy is an appropriately powerful character for Books 2 and 3.
Review By [BarbarossaRotbart] • Date [23 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XXV -- It Can't Last, Can It?" from AllenPitt
Review:
And next...she wakes up in her coffin back on earth? Strange she didn't contact Giles directly after that, but probably didn't have the heart to get back into slaying. Hopefully post-S5 Buffy is immortal as it'll be quite a while before she can get back, based on the books.
Comments from author:
She can't remember anything but the happiness.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [23 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XXIV -- Violence Begets Happiness" from BarbarossaRotbart
Review:
Another great chapter. Buffy really knows how to win a war without a battle. I think that a marriage and an egg will come next. And if I am not completely wrong a differend ending that the novel.
Review By [BarbarossaRotbart] • Date [23 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XXIV -- Violence Begets Happiness" from AllenPitt
Review:
I'm sure the Zodangan commanders in the tent were all thinking the same thing: that waitress is getting no tip! Still-- who said violence never solves anything?
At this point it's all good, except for that pesky atmosphere plant of course. But what could possibly go wrong?
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [23 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XXIII -- It's a Green Guy's Party" from (Past Donor)wozwashi
Review:
Buffy stooge fu would have been something to see.
Great story and smart cribbing from the original. ERB certainly had a way of turning a phrase and you've done a great job of not changing things too much so that the story very much has the feel of his Barsoom. Keep up the great work.
Review By [(Past Donor)wozwashi] • Date [23 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XXIII -- It's a Green Guy's Party" from AllenPitt
Review:
And that's just the first book in the series. Next 2 were much better.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [23 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XXIII -- It's a Green Guy's Party" from grd
Review:
Buffy is having so much fun. Enjoyed the stooges wackiness. I don't think marriage is going to slow Buffy down at all. Now she will have a partner to get into all kinds of adventures.
Review By [grd] • Date [23 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XXIII -- It's a Green Guy's Party" from BarbarossaRotbart
Review:
Sadly, this great story is coming to its end. Buffy got her girl and Zodanga is no more.
Review By [BarbarossaRotbart] • Date [23 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XXIII -- It's a Green Guy's Party" from Gideon
Review:
Pity they got all that blood over the wedding finery or they could have had the wedding right there! I like Dejah's answer there, very classy :) I wonder if Buffy gets to chain up her new bride or if that was set up special for conquered princesses.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [23 Nov 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XXII --An Old Friend" from Iceflame
Review:
Heh >:). Looks like Buffy's proving to be the ultimate Wild Card in terms of chaos, panic, disorder >:)>:).
Review By [Iceflame] • Date [22 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XXII --An Old Friend" from CPTSkip
Review:
I continue to love your version of Buffy's Barsoom. I had to stop reading for a couple of minutes after I read "His first act as Biggest Cheese was to make me a full Big Cheese posse member, backdated to when I took out the two chieftains when I first arrived." I'm not sure why, other than "full Big Cheese posse member" is just a funny line to me, but it did amuse the heck out of me.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [22 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XXII --An Old Friend" from Gideon
Review:
And so Zodanga falls and the Genocide begins :( I notice Tars only took a few minutes to kill the biggest cheese so he must really not enjoy torture much at all, otherwise he would have taken longer over it. I'm glad Buffy has gone to secure the princess. I wouldn't trust the green guys to keep her alive in a city that they are putting to the sword.
Won't Helium be surprised when a horde of green guys turns up and says they are friendly!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [22 Nov 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
start back Page: 2 of 10 next end
StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking