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Review of chapter "XXIII -- It's a Green Guy's Party" from (Past Donor)wozwashi
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Buffy stooge fu would have been something to see.
Great story and smart cribbing from the original. ERB certainly had a way of turning a phrase and you've done a great job of not changing things too much so that the story very much has the feel of his Barsoom. Keep up the great work.
Review By [(Past Donor)wozwashi] • Date [23 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XXIII -- It's a Green Guy's Party" from AllenPitt
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And that's just the first book in the series. Next 2 were much better.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [23 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XXIII -- It's a Green Guy's Party" from grd
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Buffy is having so much fun. Enjoyed the stooges wackiness. I don't think marriage is going to slow Buffy down at all. Now she will have a partner to get into all kinds of adventures.
Review By [grd] • Date [23 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XXIII -- It's a Green Guy's Party" from BarbarossaRotbart
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Sadly, this great story is coming to its end. Buffy got her girl and Zodanga is no more.
Review By [BarbarossaRotbart] • Date [23 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XXIII -- It's a Green Guy's Party" from Gideon
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Pity they got all that blood over the wedding finery or they could have had the wedding right there! I like Dejah's answer there, very classy :) I wonder if Buffy gets to chain up her new bride or if that was set up special for conquered princesses.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [23 Nov 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XXII --An Old Friend" from Iceflame
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Heh >:). Looks like Buffy's proving to be the ultimate Wild Card in terms of chaos, panic, disorder >:)>:).
Review By [Iceflame] • Date [22 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XXII --An Old Friend" from CPTSkip
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I continue to love your version of Buffy's Barsoom. I had to stop reading for a couple of minutes after I read "His first act as Biggest Cheese was to make me a full Big Cheese posse member, backdated to when I took out the two chieftains when I first arrived." I'm not sure why, other than "full Big Cheese posse member" is just a funny line to me, but it did amuse the heck out of me.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [22 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XXII --An Old Friend" from Gideon
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And so Zodanga falls and the Genocide begins :( I notice Tars only took a few minutes to kill the biggest cheese so he must really not enjoy torture much at all, otherwise he would have taken longer over it. I'm glad Buffy has gone to secure the princess. I wouldn't trust the green guys to keep her alive in a city that they are putting to the sword.
Won't Helium be surprised when a horde of green guys turns up and says they are friendly!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [22 Nov 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XXII --An Old Friend" from Rich
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We're really moving right along now. One thing that always struck me about ERB's heroes - on top of their strength, skill and general athletic prowess, they seem to possess endless reserves of stamina. They just never get tired. Tarzan crossed most of the African continent on foot ,and part of that by jumping (!) from tree to tree; and Buffy has just traveled from Thark to Warhoon to Zodanga to Thark and now back to Zodanga, much of it on foot, without a map, and apparently living of the land (not a mall in sight).

Another ERB standard is the "noble savage". Tarzan had his Waziri, Buffy/Carter has her Tharks. As I recall, Tars Tarkus goes on to become a great friend.

This is still going great.
Review By [Rich] • Date [22 Nov 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XXII --An Old Friend" from RevDorothyL
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Good for Tars Tarkus, forming coalitions and turning his people's hostility in useful directions! :)
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [22 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XXII --An Old Friend" from slmncpm
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omg i can't wait to see what happens next! *hands you scones and waits not so patiently*
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [22 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XXII --An Old Friend" from AllenPitt
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She's getting no back pay from the Zodangans, that's for sure.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [22 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XXII --An Old Friend" from BarbarossaRotbart
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I must say that this is perhaps the best action scene of the whole story:
[quote]All twenty swords raised in the air. Tal Hajus was screwed. With a sigh he drew his longsword and stepped in front of Tars Tarkus.
A few minutes later we were all saluting Tars Tarkus, Biggest Cheese of Thark.[/quote]
And the big battle will be next ...

EDIT: You are very fast. Two chapters a day is extremely fast.
Comments from author:
Am I updating fast enough for you? I took the weekend off and I may take Thanksgiving off depending on when family wants me to swing round.
Review By [BarbarossaRotbart] • Date [22 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XXI -- Lost...Again" from RevDorothyL
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Still thoroughly enjoying this! :)
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [22 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XXI -- Lost...Again" from AllenPitt
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Gee, Buffy can't turn her back for one minute but to find Dejah engaged to somebody. DT sure is popular. And, Kantos Kan is a great friend.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [22 Nov 11] • Not Rated
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