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Review of chapter "Bloody Brilliant Plan" from RHatch
Review:
good job
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review!
Review By [RHatch] • Date [14 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Bloody Brilliant Plan" from AllenPitt
Review:
Good, Wesley with a 'dark quickening' would have been of the bad. And now, the Guardian is still alive... nice source of friction with the watchers. One wonders if she could help Willow learn magic / better control and all that.
Comments from author:
Possible.

Thanks for the review!
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [14 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Temple of the Guardian" from (Current Donor)Sithspit
Review:
Just read beginning to end. Entertaining.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review! Glad you liked it.
Review By [(Current Donor)Sithspit] • Date [3 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Temple of the Guardian" from CageFire
Review:
Great new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)
Comments from author:
I will, thanks for the review, glad you liked it.!
Review By [CageFire] • Date [1 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Temple of the Guardian" from AbscondingCascade
Review:
Nice to see this back, in thanks a little interesting article I had squired away ~ http://io9.com/5499652/british-military-developing-force-fields
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review!

Glad you liked it.
Review By [AbscondingCascade] • Date [1 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Temple of the Guardian" from RHatch
Review:
good job
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review!
Review By [RHatch] • Date [1 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Temple of the Guardian" from AllenPitt
Review:
Just imagine them finding the old woman, and having her not-die for at least a few more minutes. She supposedly had important info for them. Nice touch with the group telepathy, it's easy to forget the scoobies were using that a lot in S7.
Any chance that Riley's group will make an appearance? They were closely monitoring Buffy (bugged her phone, she speaks into it without dialling in an ep, and immediately gets someone). I could see them sending some troops in (ie "if the show had had a bigger budget...")
Comments from author:
I think I've done enough Deus ex Machina for this fic, tbh.

Thanks for the review!
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [1 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Time for a Super Weapon" from Letomo
Review:
An interesting take on Ssn 4/7. Nice that they used something very basic, a simple abortion, to get rid of Jasmine. Though, I would have thought there would be more to Cordelia's suffering than was shown.

Making Caleb an Immortal isn't too new, but an interesting take on it. I do like that the Scythe stops the Immortal healing. Which would also explain how a vertical chop would take him out; if he can't heal, it would be a fatal wound.

Can't wait for more!

Edit to add: First one I found was: http://www.tthfanfic.org/Story-10167/phouka+The+One+Who+Sees.htm
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review!

I haven't /seen/ any 'Caleb-as-an-Immortal' Fics (which is hardly to say they don't exist.)
Review By [Letomo] • Date [9 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Time for a Super Weapon" from HonorLove
Review:
First things first: there are so few decent Wesley stories out there, and this is easily one of the best I've read. I've always liked immortal!Wes, and it's interesting to see his first death where you put it. I'm a fan of that odd not-a-relationship Wes and Lilah had in the series, and I like your choice to keep them together--and the way Lilah got to leave Wolfram and Hart was inspired! Please keep up the good work, and I look forward to reading further chapters!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I'm glad you like it, and I'm glad you think its so good.
Review By [HonorLove] • Date [7 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Time for a Super Weapon" from RHatch
Review:
loved it
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review! Glad you liked it.
Review By [RHatch] • Date [4 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Time for a Super Weapon" from kelvin
Review:
great story
have a question:
If Wesley or Lilah kills Caleb or around him when he dies won't they be in danger of getting a dark quickening?


also i like the name Lightening Swordsman it sounds like something from the Buffy world
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review!

And that is a theoretical possibility
Review By [kelvin] • Date [1 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Time for a Super Weapon" from AbscondingCascade
Review:
ITS BACK! *Dances* Thank you, Thank you, Thank you! *Dances again*. So in thanks a little poem I found about a topic that the average Immortal/Lightning swordsman has a bond with ~ http://www.knives.com/knives/community/140-poem-the-sword-alone.html
Comments from author:
You're quite welcome. Yes, it is back.

Thanks for the review!
Review By [AbscondingCascade] • Date [30 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Stalling Tactics" from AllenPitt
Review:
Too bad Lorne missed the 'once more with feeling' episode, he'd have loved it. And Buffy--little does she realize how much worse things could be, i.e. getting kicked out and all that.
As for flame throwers. Pick up the darned phone, ask for Riley (no need to dial, it's tapped). And request 50-100 Initiative soldiers with flame throwers and heavy weapons.
Comments from author:
If they can get buffy to agree to that in the first place...

Thanks for the review!
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [29 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Stalling Tactics" from AbscondingCascade
Review:
YES! ITS BACK! *dances* ... Ahem, *coughs* So that's how Illyria knew about Vampires. I wonder who pissed her off enough so that she had to seal their army away beneath the seal. Of course I've always seen the Seal as the senior partners back up plan (well one of their back up plans), as it's the symbol of a goat and their is the Ram in Wolfram and heart. As why did they have the amulet in the first place? Just in case someone co-opted their force of super vampires. But enough about my own Wild Mass Guessing theories and back to your highly entertaining story.

Can the First take Lilah's and Wesley's form? As does the first 'resurrection' of a Immortal count for the First. Also if it can take the form of someone who has died why didn't in use Buffy's or Spike's form to cause chaos? As the constant need to check that it's actually them and not the First would wear on people.

Anyway in thanks a poem about vampires that I found - http://www.poets.org/viewmedia.php/prmMID/21081
Comments from author:
Well, I can't go around answering those questions, but they are all interesting questions to ask.

As for the First taking immortal's forms, only the forms of immortals who have died, died. While an Immortal 'dies' the first time, they don't 'die' in the same way that say Buffy did, or Angel, Drusilla, or Spike.
Review By [AbscondingCascade] • Date [29 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Plans and Preparation" from Marcel
Review:
This is quite an interesting story, I'm glad I discovered it. I love gray Wesley and I always thought that his relationship with Lilah was underdeveloped.

Looking forward to seeing how you deal with Caleb.
Review By [Marcel] • Date [19 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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