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The Flame of Athena

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Review of chapter "chapter two" from Gideon
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Interesting take on Xander you have here, him being a bit older and more bitter. I'm assuming that Buffy and Willow are among his dead friends? As for where they should end up next I am partial to the Stargate Universe, or maybe BSG.
Also some misspellings seem to have slipped through, you might want to do one more proofread.
Comments from author:
thanks I'll work on fixing any spelling mistakes. i have considered both SGU and BSG as strong possibility's.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [14 Nov 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter two" from xon
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Can't you have a beta-reader look at this?
Review By [xon] • Date [14 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter two" from trongod
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Question is, did they stay in the same Reality, or did their uncontrolled flight put them somewhere/somewhen else? Thena has already time traveled the hard way; did the blast throw them into the past of their own Reality - say, around the time of Xander and his friends running into their final trouble? That'd be a neat trick to see Thena and Alexander arrive to talk to Xander and his friends; they'd have to knock Buffy out just to get a word in before she attacked.

On the other hand, same Reality, same time, different part of space, they could run into John Crichton & Co.aboard the Moya, or arrive over a planet where the Flame's sensors pick up the energies from a StarGate activation, allowing them to meet up with the SG1 crew... Bet Carter would love to get her hands on Athena's "ample nacelles", so to speak, while Jack would flip out over her "big, honking space guns".

Being a Quantum Leap fan who is /still/ unhappy with the way it ended, have the Flame and her crew return to Earth orbit, pick up Sam's energy fluctuations and get the poor bastard home!!!
Comments from author:
I'm leaning toward not having them get back to earth. keep in mind also that teseracts can traverse time as well as space. being a huge, HUGE, Farscape fan the thought of crossing with them is intriguing. about the uncontrolled slip, I'd say time as well as space is open, and anything which could count as an alternate dimension could work with what i have in mind as well.
Review By [trongod] • Date [14 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from trongod
Review:
Very nice - and sneaky; that whole Xander as a prisoner "volunteer" for the tesseract experiment and the Flame of Athena from the Andromeda 'Verse will be raising tons of questions, just begging to be answered/argued/suggested about... You sneaky little devil, you...

If Xander is in this type of experiment, it's because he's been convicted of a sufficiently horrible crime that it's a chose between several life terms without even a hint of parole or a 99.99999% deadly science experiment where they needed a human ginnie pig for the later stages of testing... So whatever they sent through before either never came back, or came back severely damaged or in pieces.

Xander's going to need training up to the Commonwealth science and technology levels if Thena wants him helping repair and then later build her new hyper space drive; a spare pair of hands never hurt.
Comments from author:
thanks for the review, I'm glade you like the story. be sure to enter the fandom you'd like to see in the sequel.
Review By [trongod] • Date [14 Nov 11] • Not Rated
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