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Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Hanzo
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♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [23 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from VillageOrchid
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Okay that makes sense. I'll check out on the other "dreaded site" at some time in the near future.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [23 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from grd
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Enjoying the idea vey much. Thor deserves a firm beating for his treatment of Loki.
Review By [grd] • Date [23 Nov 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from WolfWriter
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WAY too short!

Fascinating, but short.

Please continue.
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [23 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from JediKnight
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Interesting, but you seem to have the movie version of "Thor" mixed with the comic.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [21 Nov 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from RedCelt
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Absolutely loving this! I don't know why it disappeared from the latest story list bt I hope everything gets worked out! Would really like to see more of this!
Review By [RedCelt] • Date [20 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from TAO
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Okay...aside from a few typos...nothing wrong here.

On the other hand, I'm not sure if it will be here for long. If it's in danger of being quarantined, it must mean a certain mod must be looking for someone to pick on...after all, it is that time of year again.

That being said, the story...Lily slapping Thor...okay, that was funny and, given the situation, it makes sense. Any mother would be pissed at Thor.

Ron, Draco, Hermione, and Harry....okay...throw the twins in there and you don't have Marauders 2.0...you have "Marauders Unlimited".

Oh...and what's going on with Voldemort...did he finally...quack up?

okay...bad bun...I guess I'll leave now and get...um...quackin'....

oy...the punnage.
Review By [TAO] • Date [20 Nov 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from AriaDragoncrest
Review:
Wonderful. Hope you update soon.
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [19 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from WolfWriter
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I hope you get this cleared up soon, this story is too good to languish in quarantine.
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [19 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from VillageOrchid
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I sense you are going to go over the word limit (unfortunately it isn't by story but by word).
This can still be a Buffy-verse crossover if you include wish/vengeance daemons being the reason for Loki's reincarnation and perhaps a few characters from the show passing through.
I think the other option is to become a "site supporter", if you aren't one already.

Good chapter and nice decision for the current life to take precedence over the past-life memories.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [19 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from EllandrahSylver
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Intriguing! This one's going on my tracked list...
Review By [EllandrahSylver] • Date [19 Nov 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from darkplayer
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Awesome start to the story. I like the plot and look forward to seeing how it develops. Please update soon.
Review By [darkplayer] • Date [19 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from moringstar
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this going to be intresting please update soon as i can not wait to see what is next.
Review By [moringstar] • Date [19 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Shatterstar
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FK YOU FOR THAT CLIFFHANGER

no just kidding

this story is pretty good! a bit too fast, but you make it flow so well that the pacing doesn't really matter. I hope we get the next chapter soon.
Review By [Shatterstar] • Date [19 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Jaylynn
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Yay! I completely understand the whole writing when inspiration hits, *barely avoids being attacked by my stories needing updates* I am just glad you will update sometime and not leave it a cliffy. Goodluck on your exams!
Review By [Jaylynn] • Date [19 Nov 11] • Not Rated
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