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Review of chapter "Ch. 42 - SNAFU, part 4" from MistofRainbows
Review:
Really hate these crap dream/or badly designed chapters. They're either dreams or author crap because there is almost no chance that evil Willow could actually find the right dimensions... all of the people... and such... let alone within a couple of days...(Mostly cause some of the enemies weren't talked about... maybe she could have worked something out by seeing the portals... but that still leaves a frightening lack of information) basically this comes across as a let me kick the characters around because it's a dream and it's stupid and it's been dragging on for four damn chapters...

That said the rest of the story has been interesting and amusing.
Comments from author:
That said, you have a valid point! Because - as you'll see in a couple chapters - that's not what's going on at all, and part of the process is precisely what you already thought about.
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [18 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch. 26 - Long Distance Calls Again, part 2" from Difdi
Review:
> And I can’t wait to see what happens when she does it with some cold iron the next time we’re facing one of those
> stupid Sidhe jerks.

Unfortunately, it probably wouldn't be cold iron anymore after the melting. Cold iron is pure iron that has not been refined or forged with human-made heat. If Willow's magic counts as "made by humans" then cold iron would stop being cold iron and simply be regular iron after she melted it.

> If Dirac’s hypothesis about the non-constancy of universal constants across huge deltas of space and time is correct,
> then a minor change in the fine structure constant could cause all the matter inside the pouch to go off with the
> equivalent force of an antimatter blast.”

Don't forget air volumes. Air has mass, and even a few grams of matter converted to energy produces a yield measured in kilotons.
Comments from author:
'Cold iron' changes its technical definition in every setting. SO you're probably right (since it was said by a non-expert), but we have no way of telling in the Buffyverse.
Review By [Difdi] • Date [4 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue - One Month Later" from Richardthrnnsx
Review:
Great story! Recommended :)
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm always happy to get recommendations. And constructive criticism. And thoughts about stories.
Review By [Richardthrnnsx] • Date [20 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue - One Month Later" from SilverWave
Review:
I actually had trouble getting in to this one but came back to it today and couldn't put it down.

Really good... Really Really :-)

Cheers.

Rec'd
Comments from author:
Thanks, and thanks for the Rec. I think the problem is my writing style. I'm verbose. I like to world-build. I like to retcon things that should have been explained in the original fiction. That often leads to a slow start.

Maybe, from now on, all my stories should start with "the building was on fire, and it wasn't my fault". :-)
Review By [SilverWave] • Date [20 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue - One Month Later" from (Current Donor)Katrina
Review:
This was a fantastic read. I enjoyed it immensely, loved all the characterizations, and just had a blast. Thank you for sharing it!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review, and thanks for the rec!
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [16 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue - One Month Later" from ShyBob
Review:
Far, FAR better than "The League of Extraordinary Gentlemen." I really enjoyed the team spirit that you worked into the novel. There was a distinct lack of the "Xander-Stu" phenomenon, which was impressive given the range of characters involved. No limelight-stealing here. I am looking forward to the next stories in the series.
Comments from author:
Thanks. There were places where I had to re-think the situation to keep it from devolving into 'one hero dominates the setting'. And I decided not to go with the classic solution to the 'heroes each face their greatest enemy' trope: the team switch-up to get more favorable match-ups.
Review By [ShyBob] • Date [2 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue - One Month Later" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Impressive... and quite fun. Thanks for sharing!
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading. If you enjoyed, I'd appreciate a Rec.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [13 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ch. 63 - Departure Gates" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Percy has someone very special! Wonder if she's a counter-part of anyone we know?
Comments from author:
Actually, I had in mind JKR's statement that Percy would eventually marry a British witch who was not one of the main characters, and not Penelope Clearwater.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [13 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch. 62 - Exit" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Good storytelling and good vehicle for the characters not having an unlimited time together... at least not so easily.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [13 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch. 58 - Intercept" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Oooh. Lots of stuff going on.
Comments from author:
Stuff can pile up in my stories. It's a hazard of adding in a complaication here, a Chekov's Gun there...
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [13 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch. 53 - Strategic Assessments" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I like the stuff you're doing with Jamie who is an emotionally developed character but a plot-wise under-developed character. If she's in California - it will help for her to know valley girl speak. It was hard to tell in the show if she was teaching near a base in Washington DC or near her home in rural California... near a military base.
Comments from author:
In theory, Jaime lived in Ojai California, but that wasn't where she did her student teaching (which was never specified).
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [13 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch. 51 - Attrition War" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Some interesting stuff going on here. The HP former Prisoner Wizards are apparently real - Willow wants to see her friends get torn apart by Zombies, but is basically having fun - so that has a slightly light side to it.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [13 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch. 49 - The Bat-Mission" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Really enjoyed Bat-Man POV while exploring Xander and O'Neill interacting with each other. Also good back up plan.
Comments from author:
Batman's backup plans have backup plans, and since he was Selina's backup plan...
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [13 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch. 46 - SNAFU, part 8" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Not quite sure how Buffy finessed the limitations of the construct, but glad that she did.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [13 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch. 42 - SNAFU, part 4" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Certainly the definition of a hellish situation. You can't fight the manifestations of your own subconsciousness. Can you?
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [13 Dec 12] • Not Rated
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