Only seen a little bit of Alex Mack, so the extra information was enough without being too much. Hermione's explantation/lecture was... an interesting show of character.

We now have three different teammates who can be Captain Exposition if need be! And I figured that a lot of people who know Buffy & Willow, Hermione, and Sam. But the Chris Dee 'Cat Tales' version of Catwoman is pretty obscure, and lots of current readers are too young for the original Bionic Woman, and a surprising number of people have never heard of 'The Secret World of Alex Mack'. That meant I needed to work some background in for every character.

I liked original Jamie, and I guess they were in too much of a hurry to notice the time frame change. Meanwhile, wondering if Hermione's nausea is pregnancy or that she has a double in the Bat-man world.

I really preferred the original Bionic Woman over the remake. Granted, the original was kind of lame by today's production standards (and the physics was dreadful), but the remake was a big leap into the 'Darker And Edgier' camp.

A little too much on-screen exposition for my tastes, but I'm sure if I didn't know the crossover I would appreciate the background information. Fun character moments and insights.

Yeah, I decided I needed a way to get enough exposition into the story that people who weren't intensely familiar with every single crossover would be happy later, when the backstory of each team member becomes relevant.

Very nice. And no I don't know who they all are ahead of time.

It turned out that no one else did. A few people guessed between one and four, but I don't think anyone got more than five.

I usually pass on multi-crossovers (more than one or two crosses) but I've been enjoying your fiction. Really nice characterization of young-married but still strongly independent Hermione.

Thanks! I hope you like it. Like most of my stories, it may take a while to get moving.

Just discovered this and read it through over a couple of days. Excellent cast of characters, and I really liked the way they interacted with each other and with their support groups. Everyone seemed very much in character. I also liked the world-building you did to get it all to fit together. Alex Mack was the one character I wasn't familiar with, but your development of her kept my interest. Thinking back on it after I finished, I realized she was only one who really needed to develop and discover who she was and what she wanted to do. Nicely done. The backup team interaction was priceless; I loved Jack, Xander, and Batman together. Poor Bruce. Thanks for a most enjoyable story--I'm looking forward to the sequel.

Thanks. I wasn't planning on ANY sequels, but now I'm running "Cross Purposes" and I already have a separate sequel planned. And yes, Alex was the only one who needed to grow as a person, given their ages and their prior stories.

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Great story!!!

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Thanks! Feel free to recommend it if you like it that much.


Done!

I appreciate it.

Great story!!!

Thanks! Feel free to recommend it if you like it that much.

I finally got the time to read the rest of this story, and I have to tell you that every single chapter was anywhere from great to funny to utterly amazing and original, and that the entire novel you've crafted here is just utterly delightful! So good that it just begs for some kind of sequel, or perhaps minor spinoffs and follow-ups of plot threads and character developments, since sequels are in no way required to be bigger epics than the original. That's a silly hollywood myth.
Anyway, thank you so much for writing this, and coming up with some new takes on characters I hadn't seen or considered before, and the many hours of enjoyment, and I hope to catch more of your writing in the future. :)

Thanks for reading. And there is a sequel going on right now, called "Cross Purposes".

Everyone got home and there are going to be some changes in the future in some of the dimensions. I see Buffy and the Scoobies getting a shrink who knows about the darkness *The Shrink from Pretender would be a good choice. Sydney has that job in the Wandererverse* and Xander will be looking up those Black Ops groups. Might help him out in the future. Jamie has some good ideas that I think Oscar will be going over in the very near future. As for SG1, while there is no magic in their unvierse, there is still a lot that they have learned and can work upon from this adventure. As for Alex, I suspect that things are about to change for her, and probably for the better.

I can see a lot of possible shrinks for the Scoobies, from Frasier Crane to Martin Blank's shrink. But I'd rather not think about one that's been done a lot.

*Starts singing: HEAD EM UP! MOVE EM OUT! HEAD EM ,MOVE EM OUT RAWHIDE!* I loved that song in the Blues Brother Movie. And I think that Bruce and Selina are going to have their hands full when they get back to their dimension. Lots of research to do on what they found out here.

And you *know* that Bruce isn't going to let any of this go, since it's clearly a potential future threat for the JLA.

Well, the Buffster made it out in one piece. And I think that Sam is going to have a LOT of tales to tell when she chooses to tell them at SGC. Now, lets see about Sherra and the rest of the League.

Well, Red is back to normal. Now, we need to check on Monie, close this dimension and get everyone home in one piece!

Now THAT is the way to be Sneaky when it comes to getting around the rules! Lets hope that Monie and the little one make it out in one piece.

Sounds like Bruce made a call to one of the members of the JLA that could help out in a situation like this: Shierra Hall, aka HAWKWOMAN! Now, lets see if Xander can get Red to let go of the Dark Mana and return to normal.