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Review of chapter "Epilogue - One Month Later" from ShyBob
Review:
Far, FAR better than "The League of Extraordinary Gentlemen." I really enjoyed the team spirit that you worked into the novel. There was a distinct lack of the "Xander-Stu" phenomenon, which was impressive given the range of characters involved. No limelight-stealing here. I am looking forward to the next stories in the series.
Comments from author:
Thanks. There were places where I had to re-think the situation to keep it from devolving into 'one hero dominates the setting'. And I decided not to go with the classic solution to the 'heroes each face their greatest enemy' trope: the team switch-up to get more favorable match-ups.
Review By [ShyBob] • Date [2 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue - One Month Later" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Impressive... and quite fun. Thanks for sharing!
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading. If you enjoyed, I'd appreciate a Rec.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [13 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ch. 63 - Departure Gates" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Percy has someone very special! Wonder if she's a counter-part of anyone we know?
Comments from author:
Actually, I had in mind JKR's statement that Percy would eventually marry a British witch who was not one of the main characters, and not Penelope Clearwater.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [13 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch. 62 - Exit" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Good storytelling and good vehicle for the characters not having an unlimited time together... at least not so easily.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [13 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch. 58 - Intercept" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Oooh. Lots of stuff going on.
Comments from author:
Stuff can pile up in my stories. It's a hazard of adding in a complaication here, a Chekov's Gun there...
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [13 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch. 53 - Strategic Assessments" from VillageOrchid
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I like the stuff you're doing with Jamie who is an emotionally developed character but a plot-wise under-developed character. If she's in California - it will help for her to know valley girl speak. It was hard to tell in the show if she was teaching near a base in Washington DC or near her home in rural California... near a military base.
Comments from author:
In theory, Jaime lived in Ojai California, but that wasn't where she did her student teaching (which was never specified).
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [13 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch. 51 - Attrition War" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Some interesting stuff going on here. The HP former Prisoner Wizards are apparently real - Willow wants to see her friends get torn apart by Zombies, but is basically having fun - so that has a slightly light side to it.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [13 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch. 49 - The Bat-Mission" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Really enjoyed Bat-Man POV while exploring Xander and O'Neill interacting with each other. Also good back up plan.
Comments from author:
Batman's backup plans have backup plans, and since he was Selina's backup plan...
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [13 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch. 46 - SNAFU, part 8" from VillageOrchid
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Not quite sure how Buffy finessed the limitations of the construct, but glad that she did.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [13 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch. 42 - SNAFU, part 4" from VillageOrchid
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Certainly the definition of a hellish situation. You can't fight the manifestations of your own subconsciousness. Can you?
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [13 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch. 41 - SNAFU, part 3" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Interesting -- only Belatrix seems to be "real" in comparison the others are not more than what was expected.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [13 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch. 39 - SNAFU, part 1" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Hoping the fact that they are facing their exact worst foes is that this is some kind of "boggart" on steroids magic.
Comments from author:
You'll see...
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [13 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch. 36 - Airborne Operations" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Ah... wasn't sure if they would be able to carry it off in this go. Well, good foreshadowing that Hermione might have a miscarriage; I will be genuinely surprised if it turns out to be something else. Although prophesies don't account for modern medicine. So we'll see!
Comments from author:
You can never trust prophecies. Just ask Xander Harris, who personally thwarted several in the course of the Buffy series.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [13 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch. 35 - Ground Operations" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Good point. They have to really deplete the enemy before they can go for that control gem.
Comments from author:
Can you deplete an enemy that may be functionally infinite?
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [13 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch. 32 - Planning Goes Better With Chocolate" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Also I missed a declaration of time passing and everyone having the chance to get those results. It's like they "magically" got a response and stuff back. I read through twice. No time lapse. Perhaps a sentence or a paragraph got left out???
Comments from author:
Just a time skip of a couple hours.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [13 Dec 12] • Not Rated
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