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Review of chapter "Chapter Ten – The Feline Who Has Turned Tail" from Gideon
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Trust Batman to be suitably paranoid. Good thing Catwoman is more heroically minded :) I am a bit worried about Hermione's nausea though. If it keeps getting worse she will be seriously incapacitated on her next two trips.
Comments from author:
Yes, Hermione's nausea is going to be a plot point. Think of it as Chekhov's Air Sickness Bag. :-)
Review By [Gideon] • Date [9 Dec 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten – The Feline Who Has Turned Tail" from asqwerth
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I've only just discovered this story, and am really enjoying it.

The last member...hmmm. The difference between DIET and DIRECT is "RC".

Arcee, the female Autobot??
Comments from author:
Ooh, that's clever. But I never even thought about Transformers. You'll know the last two teammates by next Friday.
Review By [asqwerth] • Date [9 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten – The Feline Who Has Turned Tail" from Eureka
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Very good! Selena is the purrfect Cat Woman! Didn't Bionic Woman have her legs replaced as part of the surgery?
Comments from author:
And this is the extra-cool Catwoman of Chris Dee's stories, who is frankly appalled by the libelous assertions about her in the popular press. Chris Dee also writes Joker and Harley about fifty times better than DC Comics, which is just a shame. Chris makes the Joker into *both* a terrifying psychotic and *also* a hysterically funny whackjob. This is harder than it sounds.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [9 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten – The Feline Who Has Turned Tail" from AllenPitt
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7of9 would be real interesting but yeah, Bionic Woman is more likely. So...is this hell goddess maybe one of the other 2, that banished Glory?
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [9 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten – The Feline Who Has Turned Tail" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
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It would be hilarious if after they defeat the big bad the cavalry shows up, and when I say the cavalry, I am talking about Multi SGC teams, Slayers witches etc, and of course Bat Man and company. Of course maybe having the Cavalry show up will help manage the little demons while the League takes care of the Big Kahuna. That would be cool, but not as funny as everyone showing up just after everything is resolved. He he. (it could totally happen too, SG-1 through the Quantum Mirror, etc)

I love how quickly you update. it is awesome.
Comments from author:
I update quickly because I wrote most of it before I ever started posting. (Yes, I'm obsessive-compulsive. If you've read my Fractious and Phase stories in the Whateley Universe, you'd see that.) I'm currently writing and editing chapters 41-43.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [9 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten – The Feline Who Has Turned Tail" from texaswookie
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Why does everyone keep saying 7 of 9? Your clues say no legs. I still say its the Bionic woman and your little clue there from Batman probably means Storm who is probably team leader and headmistress hence being the director.

Next chapters should be interesting.

There were 7 spanish angels in the valley of the gun
Comments from author:
Everyone will find out the next teammate on Wednesday. As for the last one, Storm never had a link to the 'diet' part, did she?

7 is traditional for teams like this. The Seven Samurai, the Magnificent Seven, etc.
Review By [texaswookie] • Date [9 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine – Meet the New Kids" from EllandrahSylver
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Why did my brain just tell me that one of the chosen is Seven of Nine? *ponders* Still have the other two to mull over though...
Comments from author:
You're not the first. It's a good guess. But Seven of Nine never had her legs replaced.
Review By [EllandrahSylver] • Date [8 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine – Meet the New Kids" from Eureka
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Great bonding chapter. So is Percy or George gonna manage to find a lady friend from all these gals? Or is George's natural repellant going to work against him again?
Review By [Eureka] • Date [8 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine – Meet the New Kids" from DesitaniaF
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Ok, so you probably have in your head who these people are, and I just want to guess based on my thoughts.

THE FELINE WHO HAS TURNED TAIL.
I'm guessing Kat the second Pink Ranger, or Catwoman, since she's turned sort of from being just a villain to sometimes helping Batman. Could also be a were-leopard from Anita Blake, like Cherry?

ONCE WHOLE NOW PART NOT LEGS NOR ARM NOR EAR.
My first thought was of the book "The Ear, The Eye, and The Arm" which is very good, but the main characters are male. Then I thought maybe 7 of 9?

NOT A DIETER BUT FROM DIET TO DIRECT
For some reason the first thing that came to mind was Twilight vampires (The Cullens are dieters, others arent) or maybe Bella pre-the biggest mistake of her life. Otherwise I have no clue
Comments from author:
These are all really good guesses. As for Cherry, I'll just point out that Buffy guessed a were-cat, so you're in good company. And you're not the only person to guess Seven. And no one has guessed the last teammate yet.
Review By [DesitaniaF] • Date [8 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine – Meet the New Kids" from JediKnight
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Very funny work on the update, looking forward to reading more soon.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [8 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One – The Prophecy" from tactless
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I am enjoying this and thought I would take some wild guesses as to who the final three are.
Catwoman (tho I am not sure what she would add to the team other than her thieving skills)
Jamie Sumers (The parts [and my age] make this a gimme IMO ;) )
President Roslyn from Battlestar Galactica (A diet is a governing council and she is the only SF politician I could think of)

I'm pretty sure that I got the second one correct, but I admit that the other two are guesses.

Looking forward to the next installment, and thanks
Comments from author:
Very tactFUL response! And these are interesting guesses. You'll find out the truth about #1 tomorrow - there is an unusual twist. The other two will be revealed next week. I thought that all of them were gimme's except 'the feline who turned tail' which compared to the others was quite vague.
Review By [tactless] • Date [8 Dec 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine – Meet the New Kids" from Blackett
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It's good to see George able to make jokes again....Fred and Dobby's deaths hit me probably the hardest.....



PS:....my grammar and/or the structure of my sentences may be confusing at times seeing as English is not my first language so I'm sorry about that :D


Edit: *blushes* Thank you!
Comments from author:
Your grammar and sentence structure are excellent. Better than some of the college students I've taught. :-)
Review By [Blackett] • Date [7 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine – Meet the New Kids" from Gideon
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Nice break in the collection for the team to start bonding at home. It sounds like they might all end up bonding over hating George! His latest candies sound like a terrible idea. Still no idea who most of the others will be, can't wait to find out! I wonder if any of these team members will keep in contact after this adventure is over?
Comments from author:
All of his candies sound like terrible ideas! :-)

The next teammate will be revealed on Friday, and the last two will be next week.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [7 Dec 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine – Meet the New Kids" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
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OOh I hope one of the ladies is Seven-of-Nine from Voyager. (parts lady) : ) Can't think about cat lady unless it is Cat Woman, but then she isn't really all that good, and stuff. I have no idea on the last one.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [7 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine – Meet the New Kids" from SamDragon
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:) Nice
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [7 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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