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Review of chapter "Chapter Six – No Longer Black" from JediKnight
Review:
Fun job on the talk the 3 girls had, looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Sometimes, having several characters chat is the hardest thing to write, particularly when one has trouble 'visualizing' the voice of one of the characters.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [1 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six – No Longer Black" from toastbox
Review:
Lol at the image of Willow trying to use a staff!

Good work so far! I must admit, I could only guess the first three, and no clue who the last three will be. Catwoman as a random guess? :P nah, I've no clue, my knowledge of the other crossovers are quite limited. Looking forward to more!
Review By [toastbox] • Date [30 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six – No Longer Black" from Eureka
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Hmm so Wills and Dawn collecting time. Will Buffy demand to go with as it is possible that she could help and I very much doubt that she would allow Dawn to go without her anyway.

So far so good. Keep up the great work and I guess I will read you again on Friday after I pay my bills.
Comments from author:
It's Buffy. Buffy is the Chosen One and the sister of Dawn. And thanks for reading.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [30 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six – No Longer Black" from Gideon
Review:
Looks like Hermione is suitably impressed :) And she managed to figure out she needed Buffy too without having to make a second trip :( Now all she has to do is convince them to leave their home dimension without their protection for as long as it takes to solve her problem. Might be easier said than done.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [30 Nov 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six – No Longer Black" from AllenPitt
Review:
I'm very curious who the next few will be.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [30 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five – The Tree of Red" from JediKnight
Review:
Very nice job on the new chapter, looking forward to reading more.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [29 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five – The Tree of Red" from SamDragon
Review:
Buffy and Willow in one stop.
Comments from author:
Not that Hermione realizes it yet. Hence the last sentence of the chapter.
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [28 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five – The Tree of Red" from SamDragon
Review:
Buffy and Willow in one stop.
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [28 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five – The Tree of Red" from Kremer
Review:
Great update.

I was wavering in the first couple chapters, but the writing and storytelling has now got me hooked. It's getting to be a fun read now, with the character narrations and dialog, and I'm looking forward to future chapters. :)
Comments from author:
Thanks. It is starting off slowly. I could have fixed that with a big Batman Cold Open (as they say over at TVTropes), but my muse Agatha didn't feel like writing it. The story will still take a while to get moving, as is traditional in the 'gather the characters first' kind of stories.
Review By [Kremer] • Date [28 Nov 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five – The Tree of Red" from Blackett
Review:
Great update.
Review By [Blackett] • Date [28 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five – The Tree of Red" from (Current Donor)DeacBlue
Review:
Not bad. I would suspect that, upon hearing that there's a prophecy, the Scoobies will insist on hearing the whole thing, and hearing Buffy's, will point straight at her. But a very, very nice chapter.
Review By [(Current Donor)DeacBlue] • Date [28 Nov 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five – The Tree of Red" from AllenPitt
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Is there any chance that in the Buffy-verse, the Harry Potter books exist? Because Willow fawning all over Hermione because of having read the books would be funny. (and Dawn did mention the books in an ep once)...
* Even if combat spells are useless against demons, HG can do some really impressive stuff --apparating, charms, transfiguration --all that good stuff......
Comments from author:
I made a strategic decision before starting this story that none of the universes exist in books or movies of the other crossover 'verses. However, that doesn't mean that non-crossover books can't exist in more than one of these universes. So Hermione and Jack have both seen "Terminator" and "The Wizard of Oz".

And we've seen that most spells generally rebound off magical creatures (and don't work as well on semi-magical creatures like Hagrid who is half-giant) in the HP-verse, so that will continue to be an issue in the story.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [28 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five – The Tree of Red" from Gideon
Review:
It is hard to match a couple of slayers in full fight! I wonder if Hermione is going to take Willow home only to pop right back to the blonde on her next trip :)
Comments from author:
You'll find out in the upcoming chapters - this week.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [28 Nov 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four – Not Minor but Major" from JediKnight
Review:
Freaking hilarious job on the new chapters, I hope you'll be adding more to the story soon. Though I do wish the whole team was going.
Comments from author:
I plan to add to the story every MWF until it wraps. And Hermione won't take the whole team with her as she collects new teammates. That's just her style.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [27 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four – Not Minor but Major" from Inoeth
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I just stumbled upon this story and although the actors are hardly new, I love the premise of the story- going from post war in the HP world to where you're going from the Stargate world. I am now curious as to who else you're going to be adding to the team. I'm especially curious as to from when you're taking willow, Buffy and any other scoobies (and possible significant others - ie either Tara or Kennedy) I am assuming its going to be at least season 5 or later from buffy as the HP people are in their early 20s so I assume the Scoobies will as well.

in any case, keep up ithe good work and update again soon.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I can't tell you about the other members of the team... yet. But all will become clear. Or at least, less muddy.

And I am currently planning to update every MWF until the story wraps. I have already written and edited through chapter 33, and I have written the ending, but there are still a number of scenes in between which need to be finished, fleshed out, or connected.
Review By [Inoeth] • Date [26 Nov 11] • Not Rated
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