Well, I've read up to and including chapter 29, since I posted my first review several hours ago. I'm po'd that I won't be abe to finish this story tonight because I have to get a few hours of sleep before work tomorrow :P It has been a great read so far, thank you.
I'm posting this comment because of the nerf ball. I burst out laughing :) Thanks again!
Review By [moldavia] • Date [5 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Circle of Light pt. 1" from moldavia
Review:
So far so good, I've gotten to chapter 8 and the story is great. The characters are portrayed well and I like your development of Xander from Sunnydale to the present time. Looking forwarded to reading the rest.
Review By [moldavia] • Date [5 Sep 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Thanks. The ending just popped into my head while I was writing chapter two and I never found a reason to change it.
Review By [Selias] • Date [4 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Moving Near Me" from Genericrandom
Review:
I'm a fucking sucker for a reasonable happy ending. Marvelous. You had humor, you had dark, you had action, you had comedy, you had romance and you had intrigue and heartbreak and yeah. Awesome.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm a happy ending junkie as well. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
Review By [Genericrandom] • Date [4 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Both a great and a terrible place to leave things. I agree, they should "off" McGee. I wondered how you were going to work things out for them. It would kill Ziva to have to leave the team and Xander can't really resign from what he does either. Excellent ending to a most excellent fic.
Review By [mendenbar] • Date [4 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Moving Near Me" from JediKnight
Review:
Very nice job on the ending.
Comments from author:
Thanks
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [4 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I am ashamed to admit that I let a small, tiny, I mean REALLY tiny giggle slip out when I finished the last sentence of the story. Once I realized that it was finished, all I could think was "F@#k Ya! What a great story."
The writing, plot, character development/portrayal/dialog, narrative and detail-filled action sequences are all top notch. An all around good read and one I would recommend to anyone the is a fan of BtVS, NCIS, or cop dramas like Law&Order.
FYI, this one's going on my All-time Favorites List.
Comments from author:
Thanks for your enthusiastic review. I appreciate the thoughts.
Review By [zanviller] • Date [4 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]