Review of chapter "We're Going Camping" from
VillageOrchidReview:
That's a nice friendship. Clark doesn't know about magic and stuff that Xander does? He doesn't ask? Or would you be planning on rewriting that Voodoo episode with Clark knowing more or getting outside consultant help?
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VillageOrchid] • Date [5 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Houseguests" from
VillageOrchidReview:
Oh. Okay. You mean that they met before the start of the L&C series, not that all of the stories are before it.
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VillageOrchid] • Date [5 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Visit to an African Camp" from
VillageOrchidReview:
The birthday surprise idea is nice. Did they invite some of Xander's other friends?
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VillageOrchid] • Date [5 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Cooking Pies and Dusting at the Kents" from
VillageOrchidReview:
I like the idea. But if this is before the Lois and Clark series started, he's a flying alien humanoid, not superman. Lois or Perry came up with "Superman."
Comments from author:
Thanks. I'm Superman was edited to I'm super.
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VillageOrchid] • Date [5 Dec 11] • Not Rated
