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Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Hanzo
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Review By [Hanzo] • Date [8 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from WolfWriter
Review: is the bad guy in this?


Nearly everyone else has played the part of the villain, why not Giles? I always did think that Ripper wasn't as gone as he wanted everyone to believe.

Cool story.
Comments from author:
Well, it certainly looks that way. ;-)

And the few times Ripper was glimpsed showed he coudl be a quite interesting character. ;-)
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [8 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from SpacedCadet
Wow, a Kane crossover!

I've been a Kane fan since the stories were first published. I'm sorry that his daughter isn't involved but Xena is an interesting replacement.

Looking forward to more.

Comments from author:
Yeah, Kane is certainly an intriguing, disturbing and very complex character.

And a major reason I chose him.
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [8 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from draconis
Well done.

I'm intrigued by the idea of an evil, power-hungry Giles...and one having difficulty interpreting the prophecy/seer's info is just icing.

Buffy being able to handle advanced mathematics is just too spooky for words (chills). After all, advanced math is what made possible nukes and high-power directed energy weapons. Hmmm.
Comments from author:
Yeah, I agree with bot of your observations.

And the thought of nuclear-powered Slaying weapons is SCARY!!!! ;-)
Review By [draconis] • Date [8 Dec 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eirwinrommel
I'm surprised to see another part to this. I hope it doesn't take another six and a half years for the next chapter.
Comments from author:
I certainly hope so, too. My muse has shown more interest in this story now, so I'm hoping to get more chapters done in the near future.
Review By [eirwinrommel] • Date [8 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from eriktheviking
A well written righteous darkness from Kane.
Comments from author:
Thanks. He's a very interesting, and quite disturbing character, and I hope to be able to portray his influence on Xander properly.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [8 Dec 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from OdinMage
I had somehow missed this series... I don't know how, but I'm glad I found it now! This is great, and I really hope it (and all of your other stories *hint hint*) gets updated soon! I love suped-up Xander stories, and I like that you have him suping up the girls a bit too.

Can't wait for more!
Comments from author:
Well, the series wasn't note until the second story was posted.

Glad you're enjoying them.
Review By [OdinMage] • Date [8 Dec 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Bobboky
very good work
Comments from author:
Thanks. ;-)
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [8 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from trongod
"And it shall come to pass that, in the days preceding the Commencement of the Fourth Age, the Jester, most favored Acolyte of Chaos, shall bestow his Samhain blessing on the Dale favored by Helios, and from that anointment shall the Ascended venture forth, resplendent with power undreamed of by mortal man." Xander enables his girls... maybe more?

"Fenrir's Child and Hecate's Daughter shall find succor as disciples of the Ebon Thief of Flames, and Hephaestus' Apprentice, the Scion of Mars through the Jester's meddling, shall serve his shield brethren well with his skills." Oz and Willow disciples of the Black Prometheus - Kane, now Xander - as Vulcan's aide (Yeah, Roman, I know) and Ares' descendent - Xena...

"The Hand of Teraka shall seek to end the Twice-Lived Sentinel who safeguards the False Pathway to Hades' Realm, but Hypatia's Pride and the Selfish Angel shall come together and their gifts merge to their mutual satisfaction, that the Lord of Violence shall not be left desolate with grief." Buffy (Hypatia was a mathematician) and Cordelia (see her own comments, but she' not /that/ bad!)get together 'to their mutual satisfaction' - Heh!! - so Xander doesn't destroy the freaking planet in grief.

"The Strangler's Avatar Made Flesh shall abet Gaia's Favored once more, and the Remorseful Warlord shall aid them, that the self-marked minions of the Body-Stealer and their allies be frustrated in their goals." No clue, agree about Gaia's favored is a Slayer - but which one? - Kane as Xander fights against Eyghon's dupes - Giles & Co. and the Watchers Council.

"Then shall the three wreak vengeance not seen since the days of ancient Carsultyal, and those who oppose the Select shall fall." Pretty self explanatory, I think.

"Thus shall the Fourth Age be ushered in, to the triumph and satisfaction of the Elite, who shall guide the world to its imminent glory." See my last comment.

How'd I do, Coach!!! And I'm loving this, by the way.
Comments from author:
You nailed a coupe of them right on, and missed completely with a couple others.

We'll just have to wait and see which is which.

Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [trongod] • Date [7 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from banner
You continued this one! You continued this one!
* bounces around *
I loved this entire set of concepts and I've read the story several times over the years. I'm delighted you came back here.
Comments from author:
Thanks. And yes, my muse has finally expressed interest in this one again. ;-)
Review By [banner] • Date [7 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from VillageOrchid
Okay, Giles is more misguided than evil... I think.
Meanwhile an interesting scenario. Thanks for sharing and continuing.
I got that Cordelia is probably the selfish Angel, but that could have also been referring to Angel the vampire with a soul.
Comments from author:
You're quite welcome, and thanks for reviewing.

And as far as your guesses are concerned, each one sounds quite reasonable, so we'll just have to wait and see how things develop.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [7 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from cmdruhura
If the next word out of his mouth is 'strip', I hope he knows a fast teleportation spell that will take him someplace far, far away. Maybe the Orion Nebula.

Either that or a very strong personal force field.
Comments from author:
While Xander might be *thinking* that, he's not nearly so stupid as to actually voice it. ;-)
Review By [cmdruhura] • Date [7 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
My big question is about you making Giles a sort of a villain. Still seeking great power.
I really liked your dream-sequence thing. Reminded me of a Piers Anthony kinda of thing.
Comments from author:
Well, I've read stories where pretty much everyone else has been a villain, so why not Giles, this time around?

And thanks for the good words. They're much appreciated. ;-)
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [7 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from war
Those 4 are going to ruin alot of peoples plans, should be fun to watch.

Good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Comments from author:
You betcha! ;-)

And thanks.
Review By [war] • Date [7 Dec 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from tomfo
I do hope the tarakan's don't succeed in killing buffy, and it sounds like gaia's favored might be cordy in this case. Plus this giles is pretty dumb to not realise the body stealer is eyghon and he is one of the self marked. Looking forward to more hopefully soon.
Comments from author:
The Terakans care more about their fees than whom they're hired to kill.

It's going to suck to be them. ;-)

And you have to realize that Eyghon is just *one* of many species of demons who can steal bodies, and he considers himself and his cohorts as manipulators, not the manipulated. ;-)
Review By [tomfo] • Date [7 Dec 11] • Not Rated
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