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Review of chapter "To The Tower" from seawurm
Review:
Thank You, Thank You, Thank You. I can't wait to see what happens next. And was that Dr. Strange at the end?
Comments from author:
not telling who its to much fun reading the guesses.
Review By [seawurm] • Date [2 Apr 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "To The Tower" from Bobboky
Review:
very good
Comments from author:
thanks
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [2 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "To The Tower" from Wadewilson
Review:
I'm going to guess Dr. Strange. Only guy off the top of my head that can fly without armor or a hammer and would go into to a portal with an unknown destination to find Spidey.
Comments from author:
I'm not telling who its fun listening to people muse. THough Strange does seem to be the popular guess.
Review By [Wadewilson] • Date [1 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "To The Tower" from SamDragon
Review:
Someone from back home?
Comments from author:
yep
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [1 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Training from D to C" from Harry
Review:
I think that even Kakashi is pleased with the progress of his team. It shows in the way he defends them. Now, its time for a C rank mission to see how well the can handle themselves. And, as a regular reader of your stuff on FanFicton.net, I must say, its a pleausre reading your notes. It helps makes thing easier to understand. (Pen name on ff.net is Harry2)
Review By [Harry] • Date [24 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Bell Test" from Harry
Review:
I think that this team just proved to Kakashi, that they are no slouches. And I also think that sooner or later, that Headhunter Jutsu is going to be added to Peter's repertoire of Justus's to use.
Review By [Harry] • Date [24 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Thorns of a Flower" from Bobboky
Review:
very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [24 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Exam" from Harry
Review:
Well, the team has made it this far. Time to see if they pass Kakashi's test. And I like the way you explained the costume diesign for Parker. Works for me! As for Naruto, he learned that he does have people who care about him and will back him up.
Review By [Harry] • Date [24 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Spider meets a Fox" from Harry
Review:
Well, Pete has proven himself in the eyes of the Hokage. Now, lets see how he and Naruto work as a team, when it comes to ninja teams.
Review By [Harry] • Date [24 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Portal" from Harry
Review:
Sok, the Wall Crawler meets Naruto eh? This should be a interesting ride.
Review By [Harry] • Date [24 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Thorns of a Flower" from mishaptaketwo
Review:
Excellent, excellent story. I never would have considered Peter fitting into Naruto, but he, as you've written him, does so very well. And now that I think about it many superheroes, mutants, etc. would do as well especially those that are not welcomed in their home world.

Please keep up the great work and I hope to read more in the near future as I am dying to see where you go with this.
Review By [mishaptaketwo] • Date [24 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Thorns of a Flower" from LoganBlackisle
Review:
You need to do a find and replace - Saskue to Sasuke - it's incredibly distracting when it happens as many times as it does. Also, check your "" as some seems to be missing.

Otherwise, great fic, eagerly awaiting next update.

Logan Blackisle
Comments from author:
thanks for the critique I think I managed to find the problems. glad your enjoying yourself.
Review By [LoganBlackisle] • Date [24 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Thorns of a Flower" from Fyrloche
Review:
Great story. Just curious though, will Peter have a major memory breakthrough when he sees Tayuya since she is a red head? Will it bring up memories of his love for Mary Jane? Did the beginning of this story take place before or after the birth of Mae?
Comments from author:
man, your asking all these questions that I hadn't even thought of. Considering Mayday Parker's dad hung up the tights after losing a leg I think its probably not the same. As for whether or not her looks will trigger some sort of memory when he meets up with the rest of the sound four I have no idea. Yet.
Review By [Fyrloche] • Date [24 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Thorns of a Flower" from SamDragon
Review:
Go Sakura,kicking butt and taking names. :)
Comments from author:
glad you liked my change of the fight.
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [23 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Thorns of a Flower" from kelvin
Review:
great update like the new take on that battle in the forest of death keep up the good work
Comments from author:
yeah I was hoping people would like it. She's a slightly different ninja than she was before.
Review By [kelvin] • Date [23 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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