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Review of chapter "Proving Yourself" from Bobboky
Review:
nice
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [6 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Proving Yourself" from race
Review:
I love reading this story! just wish you could update more. and i noticed a small spelling mistake you wrote "out away" instead of "put away" easy mistake to make I do it akk the time.
Comments from author:
Glad your enjoying my tale. Okay I think I fixed the spot your talking about. As for why this chapter took so long lets just say that matters outside of my control made it so long. The chapter was actually nearly completed nearly a month ago.

Was the Akk on purpose or was irony poking its head in at you?
Review By [race] • Date [6 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Proving Yourself" from RafMereC
Review:
Great update.
Raf
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [6 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Trial by Combat" from kelvin
Review:
great update can't wait for his verison of a summon
Review By [kelvin] • Date [24 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Trial by Combat" from Hanzo
Review:
great
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [29 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Trial by Combat" from RHatch
Review:
good chapter
Review By [RHatch] • Date [27 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Trial by Combat" from Markelo
Review:
Awesome story so far. I got a question for you. What if Spider-man wasn't the only Marvel superhero to arrive in the Five Elemental Kingdoms? What if the other one's an deaged Felicia Hardy aka Black Cat?
Comments from author:
Sorry not really a big Black Cat fan actually so she probably isn't going to suddenly appear. However I was thinking about 5 minutes ago that there might be a chance for an Exiles addition somewhere in here. Maybe I'll create a team full of people Spidey is more familiar with. Might be good to go with my minor stories additions.
Review By [Markelo] • Date [27 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Trial by Combat" from Bobboky
Review:
sweet
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [27 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Reports and Meetings" from Bobboky
Review:
good work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [21 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Reports and Meetings" from kelvin
Review:
great update as usual
Review By [kelvin] • Date [21 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Reports and Meetings" from AlphaBeta
Review:
Just wanted to point out that Kakashi is not a Special Jonnin, but a full Jonnin. Other then that, great job.
Review By [AlphaBeta] • Date [21 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Reports and Meetings" from RafMereC
Review:
Another great chapter.

Thank you.

Raf
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [20 Jan 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Reports and Meetings" from mpcmpc
Review:
Good chapter. The only thing that stuck out to me was that you used Yuri instead of Yuki for the name of Haku's clan, cause I know you used Yuki in the last chapter.
Comments from author:
Thanks for catching that goof I think I fixed them though.
Review By [mpcmpc] • Date [20 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Reports and Meetings" from RHatch
Review:
good update
Review By [RHatch] • Date [20 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Road Back" from Hanzo
Review:
fantastic
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [18 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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