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Review of chapter "Forest of Death Part 2" from Hanzo
Review:
♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [19 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Forest of Death Part 2" from RafMereC
Review:
Excellent.

Raf
Comments from author:
thanks
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [18 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Forest of Death Part 2" from JoshuaRichardson
Review:
Sorry, but I am disappointed in the lack of originality in this chapter. Why go over the same old "Sasuke has a hickey" that is in EVERY story?! Let someone else fight the Sound idiots. Also, I was finding it refreshing to think that Team 7 was NOT going to interact with ol' snake puss, right up until he appeared. The story was going great till this, even with the mission to Wave.
Comments from author:
Sorry ya feel that way.
Review By [JoshuaRichardson] • Date [18 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The 1st Test" from RHatch
Review:
This chapter was a delight
not a fright,
and maybe, the next one will be up tomorrow night
Review By [RHatch] • Date [14 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The 1st Test" from Bobboky
Review:
I was not riding in a Lorry as I read this excellent story
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [14 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Chunnin Exams, Hope you Survive" from RafMereC
Review:
Anice bit of rivalry between Lee and Sasuke to see who's better and maybe add Lee vs Naruto for Sakura's attention.
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [11 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Chunnin Exams, Hope you Survive" from Bobboky
Review:
very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [11 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Chunnin Exams, Hope you Survive" from SamDragon
Review:
How well will the different team do in the exams?
Will be waiting to find out.
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [11 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Proving Yourself" from kelvin
Review:
Great update
I have a question though i guessing like the main story line of "naruto" Hinata likes naruto i wondering what she thinks of peter since he and naruto spend so much time together. Also I'm pretty sure he would have notice her watching naruto all the time.
Review By [kelvin] • Date [10 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Trial by Combat" from Fyrloche
Review:
Dim Mak. Means Death touch. Its used in the movie Bloodsport.
Review By [Fyrloche] • Date [9 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Proving Yourself" from Avantre
Review:
This has been a fun story to read so far. One thing I'm really starting to scratch my head at is that Kakashi, master of 1000 jutsu, and who is apparently taking his training of all of his students seriously, can't find something for Sakura to master. It's a bit disappointing - it feels like you're holding her back so you can do the stock-standard 'draw-with-Ino' fight without making it too unbelievable.

Even if she's never going to be at Naruto's level in the future (heck, who is?), or even Peter's, surely she should be gaining something out of training by now? In just two-and-a-half years Tsunade turned her into a poisons-expert better than anyone in Suna, a medic that's probably in the top 3 of any shown medics (along with Kabuto and Tsunade), and someone good enough to survive a direct fight with an S-class ninja (with assistance). With all that learnt in 2 1/2 years by one teacher, another teacher with knowledge of a thousand jutsu can't do anything for her, even in a couple of months?

Don't get me wrong, I'm not saying all of that out of any expectation of Sakura getting a larger role in the story, I'm just saying that Kakashi is coming across as a terrible teacher for her if this is the best he can do.
Comments from author:
I actually do have some plans for Sakura and she won't be useless for much longer. I also disagree that she didn't become stronger with Kakashi. Ino who was once the top academy student was beaten to a draw and had Sakura not had to guard her teammates and get the stuffing knocked out of her then there's a high chance that she would have won. In my mind Sakura just took longer to find a specialty unlike most of the others. There have been a few hints as to what she will become later on in my fic. As for the fight with Ino, I was actually thinking of just putting names in my hat and rolling a pair of die for each matchup. Don't give up on her or my repersentation of her just yet.
Review By [Avantre] • Date [7 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Proving Yourself" from Bobboky
Review:
nice
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [6 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Proving Yourself" from race
Review:
I love reading this story! just wish you could update more. and i noticed a small spelling mistake you wrote "out away" instead of "put away" easy mistake to make I do it akk the time.
Comments from author:
Glad your enjoying my tale. Okay I think I fixed the spot your talking about. As for why this chapter took so long lets just say that matters outside of my control made it so long. The chapter was actually nearly completed nearly a month ago.

Was the Akk on purpose or was irony poking its head in at you?
Review By [race] • Date [6 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Proving Yourself" from RafMereC
Review:
Great update.
Raf
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [6 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Trial by Combat" from kelvin
Review:
great update can't wait for his verison of a summon
Review By [kelvin] • Date [24 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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