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Review of chapter "Spider vs. Spider and Fan Blows Flower Away" from Harry
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Uchia, you IDIOT! Snake face has only one reason for you joining him, and its NOT to make you stronger! No, he wants your BODY! And this eight man team is just the team to track down Sasuke. Time to get to work and find him before Snake Face gets him!
Review By [Harry] • Date [4 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Promotions" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
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Love the storyline and the characterizations, still need to smack the proofreader. Keep it up Tex!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [1 Oct 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Promotions" from Harry
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Now that Peter has his memories coming back he has some hard choices to make. Does he stay, or does he go back. I think with the responsibilities that Tsunade has given him, he stays. And their is another reason to stay as well: Uchia! That boy is getting crazy, wanting to prove that he is the best. And that mark that Snake Face gave him is not helping matters either. Things are coming to a head, and its going to be a mess when that happens!
Review By [Harry] • Date [27 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Missions & Healing" from RafMereC
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Great chapter

Nice cliffhanger.

Raf.

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Review By [RafMereC] • Date [8 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Missions & Healing" from Marvelsoldier
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As expected another great chapter. Although your cliffhangers are getting increasingly annoying(but to you that is probably a good thing). I always knew Peter was strong and fast for a ninja and will only get better with time. One thing I have not understood is Sakura's strength. She doesn't seem to be that strong except when she punches you with a fist full of chakra. If anything she seems to just increase her striking power just like Marvel's Iron Fist. Are you going to have Peter's abilities evolve into "The Other"? It sure seems that way since Peter is back to Organic webbing and his strength and speed might follow shortly with his other upgrades. I always thought Peter in his prime was in the 25-30 ton range at least.
Comments from author:
Thanks.

And that's why they call him cliffhanger. Are the cliffhangers that bad though when the wait isn't that long. I could be one of those who writes a chapter a month or so you know. Or what about waiting even longer. I usually try and post the next part if I leave a cliffhanger.

I'm working on several ideas and thoughts involved with the Other abilities. Many like the stingers which can only be triggered by mystical means. Then again chakra could be argued as a form of mysticism.

I think comparing Iron Fist's and Sakura's is actually a rather good one. Personally I think that she has a level of super human strength already. At least in the Anime she appears to, some of her blows did a little bit to much damage in my opinion, either that or she was unconsciously channeling chakra in a manner similar to what she does in the 2nd half. That being said, I also think that she has nowhere near the raw strength that Tsunade has either since the 5th managed to lift that blade in the Sannin free for all and that had to be strength to lift such a thing. It could be she has the strength and not the durability as well though. I place part I Anime Sakura slightly above Captain America in raw strength though. Mainly due to her display of ripping a ship mast out. Yes I know its a filler arc, which is why I'll say Anime Sakura.
Review By [Marvelsoldier] • Date [25 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Missions & Healing" from unknownreader
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I find it ironic that in a village that prides itself on bloodline limits that peter would willingly let them basically study with the intention of stealing his bloodline limit. That kind of made me angry while reading but then at least you made the comment of peter starting his own clan and that had been bugging me for a while. So now I see you will just always give me something that will bug even when you clear up the last thing.
Review By [unknownreader] • Date [25 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Missions & Healing" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
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And yet again you drag us to that infamous cliffside... Meanie!
Comments from author:
True, on the plus side I usually manage to get the next chapter out in a reasonable amount of time though.

And that's why they call him cliffhanger. ;}
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [25 Aug 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Missions & Healing" from Selias
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Honestly, I'm kind of hoping that he doesn't get his memories back. Or at least, not all at once. Maybe he could get them back by the time Shippuden comes around?
Comments from author:
You'll just have to wait to see what I have in mind as far as recovery goes.
Review By [Selias] • Date [24 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Missions & Healing" from SamDragon
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Memories returned possibly but how much and what will he do when he wakes up.
Comments from author:
You'll have to wait to find out just like everybody else.
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [24 Aug 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Missions & Healing" from Harry
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Peter is earning some respect from Tsunade. The work he did on the computers shows her that there is DEFINETLY more to him than meets the eye (Sorry, couldn't help the Transformers reference in there) in more than one way. Now, time to see if her work will unlock more of his missing memories.
Comments from author:
Yeah Peter is earning some major points with Tsunade. Next chapter should show what happens as far as memories go.
Review By [Harry] • Date [24 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Portal" from Marvelsoldier
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Jeez. Pete's a freaking beast when written accurately with his strength and abilities. I'm bettin that by the time he is 18 he will probably be in the 25 ton range. His Intellect is certainly nothing to scoff at(I wish he had invented his ice pellet spider tracers by now, that would have been great with this arc). I wonder if this incident will inspire him to make his own armor (like iron spider or the ends of the earth armor). You would probably enjoy this http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8980218/1/GMO-Tegenaria-duellica .
Review By [Marvelsoldier] • Date [4 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Land of Snow Part III" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
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Yo, Tex! Love the new work! Can Pete adapt the tech for his own use now? But please, no spider mobile!
Comments from author:
Glad your enjoying this. I have no plans on resurrecting the abomination known as the Spider Spider Mobile
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [3 Aug 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Land of Snow Part III" from kelvin
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is peter gonna to bring back any of the tech with back to the village?
also great update
Comments from author:
I'm thinking the knowledge is more important than the tech. Its one thing to bring home a gizmo its another thing when you can build your own gizmo.
Review By [kelvin] • Date [3 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Land of Snow Part III" from (Recent Donor)Deamondeathstone
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I thought they already did the fastball special in the x-men movies? Didn't wolverine get colossus to throw him in a danger room session in last stand?
Review By [(Recent Donor)Deamondeathstone] • Date [3 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Land of Snow Part III" from Harry
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Never mess with Peter and Naruto when those two are on the same page! It don't pay! And the fastball special? CLASSIC! I've got several issues of X-Men comics where they use it. Even one where Rouge and Logan use it. Its a devastating move when it hits!
Comments from author:
And if I do part two, imagine the destructive power with the giant rasengen.
Review By [Harry] • Date [2 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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