I've heard of the Exiles, but don't know that much about them. As for the new Ninja, I suspect its either someone who is working for Snake Face, or another rouge Ninja.
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The Exiles are a rather interesting team with a rather unique team membership as its characters are from alternate realities and when ever one dies another replaces them. Realities where instead of choosing one way the heroes chose another like Spider-Man being permanently bonded with the symbiote, Nightcrawler marrying the Scarlet Witch, or even powers being slightly different like member of the FF got different powers or switched out. They even have characters that are largely considered as evil being heroes. I'll explain more in their next appearance.
Review By [Harry] • Date [1 Feb 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
The Council wanting to use Peter as a scapegoat reminded me of J. Jonah Jameson and the Daily Bugle’s smear campaign against Spider-Man. “Hero with Bad Publicity” was a common occurrence in Peter’s previous life.
Both the Sharingan and Peter’s spider sense grant limited precognitive awareness, but the only true precogs in the Naruto-verse are Shion and Miroku of Demon Country seen in the first Shippuden movie. Depending on how close you stick to canon, Orochimaru might contemplate kidnapping Shion or bringing Miroku back to life via Impure Resurrection.
P.S. To help Peter figure out how to better channel chakra into his webbing, maybe Kakashi could teach him Izumo’s Mizuame Nabara a.k.a. Starch Syrup Trap. By infusing his webbing with Mizuame-style water elemental chakra, it’d make the substance more resistant to katon fire yet conductive to raiton electricity. Furthermore, Spider-Man spends most of his battles crawling on walls or swinging on web-lines, so he wouldn’t be hindered by a sticky liquid covering the ground.
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As Peter said the more things change the more they stay the same.
As for Shippuden well to be honest I haven't seen any of it or the movies really so I wouldn't know. I'll have to start it sometime though if I ever want to write part 2.
Your idea for webbing is good another one would be to run a lightning chakra current through the webbing. It would be like a taser attack.
Review By [dorkmoon] • Date [11 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Flashback Episode" from nerfherder
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Welcome back! Happy New Year! Thanks for the great update!
Review By [nerfherder] • Date [10 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Flashback Episode" from dorkmoon
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Now that Orochimaru has a fresh sample of Peter’s blood, will the bee-using Kamizura Clan collaborate with the Snake Sannin? Ever the opportunist, Orochimaru would exploit the Iwa-nins' greed and ambition for his own purposes.
Danzo had Orochimaru implant Mokuton DNA into his right arm, so the Kamizura could pay the Snake Sannin to either (A)give Jibachi and Kurobachi the Spider bloodline limit and/or (B)artificially impregnate the kunoichi Suzumebachi with Peter’s DNA to produce a powerful clan heir.
Suzumebachi is so fanatical that she’d gladly conceive such a child if it meant restoring her clan’s honor and prestige. The daughter produced by this unnatural union could be like May Parker a.k.a. Spider-Girl with a few traits borrowed from Shathra the totemic avatar of the Spider-Wasp introduced before “the Other” story arc.
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okay some of those ideas are really interesting and I'll consider them. Not sure if I want to go through all of the filler episodes though. I was thinking of having them mentioned but not in great detail.
Review By [dorkmoon] • Date [10 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Flashback Episode" from Marvelsoldier
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I guess your right.Peter still has alot of growing up to do. I don't like to go by the handbooks, I go by feats meaning from the things I showed you Spidey is closer to the 50-70 ton range (at least as an adult). I even think his speed will increase to even faster than Rock Lee(even with gates) when he gets older. Rock lee has trouble dodging sound but Peter has traveled faster than almost twice the speed of sound. He might even become faster than the byakugan can track (just like with Daredevil's radar sense) and sharingan because he is to fast for mindreaders. As for his healing, he has healed from over a thousand poisonous bee stings in less than 24 hours and recovered from broken bones and bullet wounds with around one good night sleep or just a few hours. He could probably train his Spider-sense to be sharper just like in a "Spider-Man vs Wolverine what if" where he trained his spider-sense into actaul precognition.His speed and reflexes are about supersonic level (at least in the Marvel universe) so even by Naruto standards he could be considered one of the fastest if not the fastest Ninja alive (besides Minato or Naruto). I just expect his abilities to take a big growth spurt by the time it is shippuden when he reaches his original limits and than eventualy surpasses them.
Review By [Marvelsoldier] • Date [6 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Flashback Episode" from eriktheviking
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A totally unexpected yet plausible scenario for Peter, well done.
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Thanks.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [6 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Flashback Episode" from Marvelsoldier
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While I did find this chapter to be very exciting, I expected Peter to be portrayed as a little faster and stronger like the clips I showed you. Then again Peter is probably not at full power because he is in a younger body. I honestly think that his power at its fullest potential is on par with a tailed beast or Naruto himself.
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Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Well I want Peter to grow into his powers and think about this most of those images were of Spidey in at least his twenties. At 12 Peter is still growing into his powers. I've also wondered, what if Peter would have been potentially even more powerful due to the fact that he never went through puberty with his powers? When his powers hit their own periods of puberty he is shown to be much more powerful. He did get his powers around 15 which mean he didn't grow into them they were an accident. Look at the heroes that got their powers when they were kids and had to grow with them. They have more power and control than most other heroes do. Does that mean had he grown with them he would have been closer to the 15 or 20 ton range scale? There's also the fact that Peter in attempting to retain his humanity has always tried to suppress his powers from evolving. If he were to think of it as a natural part of life particularly with the Aburame Clan as a support base he might have more than one growth spurt. In my mind at 12 Peter is at about the 5 ton range with around Chunnin level speed right now max. That makes him stronger than any of the rookies with only Lee being able to surpass his speed. Also who would you say has a better handle on their strength a 12 yr old or a 20 yr old. He'still got a lot of growing to do in my opinion.
Review By [Marvelsoldier] • Date [6 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Actually, you should use the Marvel Mangaverse as the source for Peter's new costume. I say this because within the Marvel Mangaverse, Peter and Mary Jane are part of the Spider Clan; with both being ninja. Venom is part of a rival ninja clan. Instead of webbing, he uses a "Scorpion" like projectile weapon; however, instead of a kunai at the end of a rope, it's a disc with 8 blades that makes the weapon look like a spider. He does, however, later gain the ability to shoot webs from spinneret-like protrusions from his wrists.
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Eh when I first started this story I considered it but I couldn't find a decent pic of the costume at the time so went with one of my own creation.
Review By [eternalfox] • Date [5 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Sometimes, a flashback is needed in a tale. And in one as complicated as this, its almost a must. I like the fact that Peter allowed the interrogator to enter his mind willingly and to show him all that he asked. And the compliment that Peter should be trained in Intelligence is high praise indeed! And I agree that a few more mental sessions to help tie together some of his fragmented memories should help. But as far as Sasuke is concerned, his ARROGANCE and OBSESSION on being the Avenger of his clan is going to get him in trouble. I see him becoming a student of Snake Face in the near future, and that is going to lead to all sorts of headaches!
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glad you liked it. Look on the bright side though Naruto isn't going to be blinded by thoughts of brotherhood now.
Review By [Harry] • Date [5 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Bravo! Bravo! This was an excellent chapter! You're doing an excellent job in keeping this story interesting and alive! I'm also glad to see that you're still alive. I was worried for a little while that this story would go the way so many other promising stories would go. Any hints on what's gonna happen next?
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Glad to see that your enjoying this. Yeah I hate stories that die off as well what can I say I had to focus on graduating though. I do have some ideas for what's next. I'm thinking Exiles while Naruto is on his mission to find the 5th.
Review By [ShadowKage] • Date [28 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Now that, THAT was a battle! I don't remember who the person in the dark cloak with the glowing weapon was, but I caught a lot of Marvel references in this chapter. And the summoning of the Boss Spirits was something else, which was needed to defeat Garra. As for Uchia, that boy needs to loose the arrogance. Not that its going to happen, but he does. That is going to be his downfall. Now, lets see if the Hokage survived in his fight against Snake Face.
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Any references were actually chance. Glad you liked the summons. As for Sasgay he's a brat who feels as if the world owes him for some reason. The kind of guy that most other guys love to take down a few pegs. Reread the end and you'll see that the fate of the Third was already mentioned.
Review By [Harry] • Date [28 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]