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Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from tracysgate
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this was strange and riveting and addictive :P more please :)
Review By [tracysgate] • Date [27 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Amai
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This is very different than most stories I've read in the category, and I like that about it. Your characterizations are very good, and I have the perfect balance of being able to follow whats happened so far, and having no clue what's really going on behind it all to keep me interested.
Review By [Amai] • Date [27 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from CageFire
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Hmm, interesting. I kinda skimmed through part of it, but overall, interesting.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [27 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from (Current Donor)vidicon
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Ah, Captain Jack. And methinks that Buffy in numerous timelines is going to be in massive trouble, the poor girl...
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [27 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from michaelangelo
Review:
ARGH! my brains going all wibbly wobbly in confusion. So is it The Beast? the one that possessed Toby Zed? that would explain why the hellmouth seal resembled the one that kept it confined.

So anyway, enjoying the story so far, both thumbs up. Well done and thank you :).
Review By [michaelangelo] • Date [26 Dec 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from glrasshopper
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'Toby' as in The Impossible Planet 'Toby'? Ooh, Toby is going to be rather pissed if it is.
Review By [glrasshopper] • Date [26 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from GarnetAvi
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I like this story a lot. Very interesting use of temporal confusion (or whatever you'd call it). I can't wait to see where this is going, and I guess since you are updating really fast I'll find out soon. Keep up the good work!
Review By [GarnetAvi] • Date [26 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from SnakeFox
Review:
I'm really enjoying this story, but if there's even one flaw, I might say it's getting a tiny bit grating how confused Buffy is. I realise this is VERY confusing stuff she's living through, but the senseless babble seems to be getting a bit much.
Comments from author:
Oh, okay. Sorry. I'll try to stop with the free indirect discourse. I sort of shoved it in because I'm being braindead on metaphors and description at the moment, and free indirect discourse is my automatic fallback. I'll try to get rid of some of it.
Review By [SnakeFox] • Date [26 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from aeraveil
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Oooo. The Vangard is trying to become solid again. The Doctor would definantly not want that to happen.
Review By [aeraveil] • Date [25 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from Sinangeled
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So. Confused. But also really enjoying things. And the confusion should clear up once the improperly cookd sherry in the trifle goes away.
Review By [Sinangeled] • Date [25 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AbscondingCascade
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Oh this is brilliant, in thanks for this story - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M8eWxNXkEjo
Review By [AbscondingCascade] • Date [25 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from JasonBarnett
Review:
I prefer this. As a Buffy fan I dislike the idea the Buffyverse itself is somehow wrong and should be eliminated.
Comments from author:
I've been trying to stay respectful of both fandoms. Hopefully, this will become more clear as time goes on. But I have to stay true to the characters' reactions to the situations. This means that often, the gut reaction is, "You're wrong and terrible and should be destroyed!" even if, upon further reflection, the characters realize they've been a bit hasty.
Review By [JasonBarnett] • Date [24 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Gideon
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Fantastic! The Doctor's little magical mystery tour through Slayer history seems to have solved the mystery of the Slayer, at least for him. It kinda sounds like the Shadow men tapped a Time Lord for their Slayer essence, and now it has to die, again and again and again. But if that is the case, then why doesn't Faith feel it too? Why does Buffy feel that loneliness and the song of the universe, but Faith does not? And did Faith see Angel? Cause that could be bad too.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [24 Dec 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Sinangeled
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Wow! This story is incredibly original and I am enjoying it very much. Buffy and the Doctor are done very well. And Angel. I miss Angel (the Buffy version, the other guy with his own series mostly pissed me off).
Review By [Sinangeled] • Date [23 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from PATM
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Oh good, Buffy wants to kill the doctor. Then it gets better. This twist that happens before this story starts is real interestin', is this Slayer essence a scam? Lots more to learn and I await more.
Review By [PATM] • Date [23 Dec 11] • Not Rated
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